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flerp
Feb 25, 2014
5k non thunderdome words :toxx:

edit: also per sebmojo's error, i will submit something as well

double edit: the submission is also a :toxx:

flerp fucked around with this message at 08:23 on Aug 8, 2015

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flerp
Feb 25, 2014
Holy poo poo gently caress this past week. This whole month I had nothing to write about and for the past few days I've been fulfilling all the :toxx:es I threw out because I'm an idiot and there's no loving way I'm getting banned because I can't put words on a page. I'm only getting banned for blatantly going against rules!

Anyways, here my stories. The first one is a rewrite of a Thunderdome story that won but I absolutely hate. I still hate it, but maybe hopefully it's better (spoiler: it's not). I went for a bit of a voice exercise in this, though I got kinda bored at the end and it kinda just stopped. Oh well. 1836 words

https://docs.google.com/document/d/19KOucfa3H1s5j2goGju1YecxvrLoPc7zmrcMGN7rwqA/edit?usp=sharing

Next up is this. I like the title. That's about it. Went for a super dialogue heavy thing that just went on forever but I think there's some ideas in here that can be mined and maybe be used to make a good story one day. I just kinda kept writing so I'd get this over with. 3057 words

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1R-mQXLf0mkMfXuofjBMUaTa_GzEvyGVupUgwTiF5zyQ/edit?usp=sharing

And finally we get to something I kind of actually am happy with. I took some ideas from sin week's Thunderdome, but went in a completely different way (no sloths sadly). I went for a shorter, simple piece that does a lot of things that I'm good at while also going for a different tone, especially the ending. I think it worked out fairly well? Who knows, we'll have to see. This is also what I submitted to fulfill that toxx. Turned to be only 806 words when I expected it being much longer.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1snE_a2DtynqaLnp23erVVEDHBn2FMAx45HURoYB76qw/edit?usp=sharing

Also, here’s my proof of submission (I submitted to like three other ones too)



Shout outs to Sitting Here for giving me a little crit of what I submitted. Oh yeah also a thanks to Grizzled Patriarch for tipping me off to the Submission Grinder. You two are pretty cool. Overall, 5699 words have been written this month. So there, I’m done. gently caress.

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