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z0glin Warchief posted:This was a huge mistake
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# ¿ Apr 22, 2016 09:05 |
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# ¿ May 12, 2024 14:58 |
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z0glin Warchief posted:I knew exactly what was coming when I saw who had bumped the thread. Thanks! At this point I should probably start putting you in the credits. You're welcome. You seem to make exactly one mistake per chapter so I've started assuming it's actually just an Easter egg hunt, or a test to see if anyone is actually reading.
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# ¿ Apr 22, 2016 09:10 |
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(Not a typo this time, but I'm not done reading yet. ) e; Work hair Micchan is way more powerful than normal Micchan. Lemon-Lime fucked around with this message at 17:03 on Apr 22, 2016 |
# ¿ Apr 22, 2016 16:58 |
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I was starting to think I wouldn't find that one mistake: Also: For shame, dude. For shame.
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# ¿ Apr 22, 2016 17:10 |
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Yes_Cantaloupe posted:Good! Cute! Thanks! Erg already found the one typo in this chapter. Hanako is still the best character: Lemon-Lime fucked around with this message at 08:54 on Apr 26, 2016 |
# ¿ Apr 26, 2016 08:42 |
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Feels like this should probably "Manaka's opponent last round." Acceptable colloquial use but I still feel like there's a "that" missing between "so strong" and "she was able." While I'm at it, total nitpick, but it's an interrobang, not a banginterro. e; Feels like you could probably bold "WS" or make the font size slightly bigger, it's easy to gloss over the fact that it's an acronym for the titular game. Lemon-Lime fucked around with this message at 20:31 on Apr 29, 2016 |
# ¿ Apr 29, 2016 20:22 |
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Also, Banish to the Underworld being a Sorcery earlier on is probably the mistake that got corrected, since the card text indicates that it has an ongoing effect while it remains in play (and sorceries don't remain in play).
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# ¿ Apr 29, 2016 20:35 |
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z0glin Warchief posted:The actual text of the card changed too, in chapter three all it did was remove the graveyard from the game: Just a retcon, then! It's not like WS is a real game, even if it's 80% MtG.
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# ¿ Apr 30, 2016 10:54 |
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The other group is bad and z0glin needs to save us.
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# ¿ Jul 20, 2016 23:40 |
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Roman is good, Wizard Souls is good, thank you zoglin. I'll have to reread it while looking for the mandatory single typo later.
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# ¿ Aug 9, 2016 17:32 |
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No typos I could spot on skimming it, but: Probably should be "gives me butterflies" instead of "has butterflies in my stomach." There are many ways to enjoy this/it/these things.
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# ¿ Aug 10, 2016 17:08 |
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Rodenthar Drothman posted:"There are many ways to enjoy them." It was talking about tempura and the restaurant experience as a whole, not the ingredients.
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# ¿ Aug 10, 2016 18:35 |
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Another chapter where Kabakura and Koyanagi are the cuter of two couples.
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# ¿ Aug 14, 2016 19:06 |
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I hope zoglin went to bed.
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# ¿ Aug 17, 2016 10:21 |
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A good chapter.
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# ¿ Aug 20, 2016 22:33 |
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# ¿ Aug 22, 2016 14:37 |
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If someone actually won that way in a real tournament everyone would be insanely hype. Re: Celestial Rebirth, whether or not something is a silver bullet will change based on a lot of stuff; the card just has to be included in her deck as a response to discard cards in general, it doesn't really matter if it's a sensible card to include in her deck as-is. e; pet peeve: the word "factoid" does not mean "small fact." Lemon-Lime fucked around with this message at 12:06 on Sep 14, 2016 |
# ¿ Sep 14, 2016 11:10 |
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chumbler posted:Throwing down big stompy creatures is the only true and honorable way to cards game. That and direct damage and also stupid black decks where you kill yourself 90% of the time, actually.
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# ¿ Sep 15, 2016 19:18 |
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It's pretty chill and I'd like to see where it goes, if nothing else, so thanks.
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# ¿ Sep 18, 2016 14:37 |
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Good chapter, even though I hate you for the pics of delicious food at the end. I'm glad for the cooking with z0g, though.
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# ¿ Sep 23, 2016 23:45 |
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My Brother's Wife is cute, and good.
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# ¿ Oct 7, 2016 16:11 |
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Update the OP with the cute and good manga, Sharky.
Lemon-Lime fucked around with this message at 16:15 on Oct 7, 2016 |
# ¿ Oct 7, 2016 16:12 |
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You didn't put the cute and good manga in the OP!!!
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# ¿ Oct 7, 2016 17:42 |
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I thought zoglin had posted the comments, and instead it's just this!!! To be honest, though, this thread probably doesn't need to be stickied, it'll be on the first page whenever it needs to because people will be posting in it.
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# ¿ Nov 17, 2016 12:03 |
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It should be illegal to put those food pictures up for people to read this early in the day, I'm starving now.
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# ¿ Jan 2, 2017 11:03 |
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# ¿ May 12, 2024 14:58 |
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Ah, me.
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# ¿ Jan 4, 2017 17:08 |