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Good feedback. Will try again.
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Sitting Here posted:yo man i'm gonna lay this quote on you real quick and see if you vibe with it, "You are not special. You're not a beautiful and unique snowflake. You're the same decaying organic matter as everything else" I remember this from Brad Pitt in the movie.
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Jan 3, 2016 07:55
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This is an essay where someone is passionately advocating for living a lifestyle hinged upon experiencing regret. Because I have a word limit and am attempting to create a mood suitable for the type of person writing this essay, it is cut in places I may have wanted to expand upon, but did graze past in the hope that the reader could still relate. What I am hoping to ideally leave the reader with is "This was a fun and interesting thing about someone wanting me to live life in an impractical way. I have just enough information to glean that, whatever beliefs this person might have, they arrived at them in a way that follows an internal logic." I am also concerned that the the writing might seem heavy handed or moralistic and I'm feeling like it might be both. George Sex - REAL fucked around with this message at 08:34 on Jan 3, 2016 |
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Jan 3, 2016 08:25
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Sitting Here posted:It should really feel more persuasive than soapboxy, if that makes sense. It does. Thanks for taking a read.
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