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I'll judge this, 500 words, 29 march 2359 PST, prompt: beginnings are such delicate times. Toxx up.
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Mar 24, 2016 08:58
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Mar 24, 2016 15:19
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SurreptitiousMuffin posted:Is your cabal good? it's ok
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Mar 25, 2016 02:30
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Carl Killer Miller posted:I've got no problem writing this prompt and losing, but if I toxx do I get banned if I lose? it's just if you fail to post quote:on ya, sonia
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Mar 25, 2016 05:38
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my next three dome stories will have a  on them
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Mar 29, 2016 03:32
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 judgmentThese were both riddled with irritating flaws, crappy punctuation mistakes and way too many adverbs. But one of them delivered a jumbled mound of (mildly engaging) story bits with the wrappers and price tags still on and the other actually built me a little story house in a few hundred words. Newt takes it with a metre or two to spare.
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Mar 30, 2016 06:00
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newtestleper posted:terrible judging! I can only find one adverb in my whole story! It was a really bad one.
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Mar 30, 2016 07:31
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3.141592653 posted:Crabrock, when you say this: Lol
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Mar 31, 2016 07:21
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3.141592653 posted:gently caress yeah I called him mister. stop talking
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Apr 1, 2016 08:35
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Sitting Here posted:ok that's it, too much fighting, i'm closing this thread fuk u
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Apr 1, 2016 20:48
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lol
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Apr 1, 2016 23:40
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crabrock posted:one of your chars just got bad news, and the other char doesn't know at the beginning of your story yeah im judge
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Apr 2, 2016 06:17
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flerp posted:holy poo poo nobody cares stop posting if it isnt "in," your entry, or crits Or shitposting, flerp, you loving mongoloid.
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Apr 7, 2016 04:12
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sparksbloom posted:Any volunteers for the last judge slot? someone take this as you're almost certainly too bad to get it any other way judgeland is a magical place
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Apr 10, 2016 01:17
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3.141592653 posted:I'm not good with acronyms. Can you please elaborate? Ur mum is a please elaborate
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Apr 12, 2016 00:16
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In, flash, and I challenge grizpat to take my flash rule too I will crush u
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Apr 12, 2016 01:07
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come on you dam dirty apes do you want to live forever
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Apr 12, 2016 01:15
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3.141592653 posted:
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Apr 12, 2016 08:22
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3.141592653 posted:Is this poo poo talk lesson 10 1? 
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Apr 12, 2016 08:52
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as the acknowledged tdome master of magical reelism i can advise that the best way to do it is poop on a page in the shape of words then add wizards/elves.
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Apr 17, 2016 01:38
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Apr 18, 2016 07:56
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interprompt: HOLY poo poo ITS A BEAR
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Apr 18, 2016 10:50
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oh you are all so horrible who wants a brawl i will gently caress you up
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May 1, 2016 13:33
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ok you yappy cocksucker, you want it, here it is you choose the prompt, i do the word count
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May 1, 2016 14:02
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1k words, exactly. Not including title.
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May 2, 2016 01:41
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Goodpancakes posted:Hey thanks for the crits! The intention was that its a magician and not actually a wizard but I'm bad. lol e: in with exploding ice block lol sebmojo fucked around with this message at 21:30 on May 3, 2016 |
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May 3, 2016 08:24
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If you want to publish it, then before the end of the year come back and delete it. It will stay in the archive though.
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May 5, 2016 21:57
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Chernabog posted:Is it ok to post our entry now or do we have to wait until the signups are over? I'm going to be a bit busy during the weekend. Don't ask permission, do what you think is best and laugh in the face of any who would gainsay u
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May 6, 2016 22:50
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May 9, 2016 05:19
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interprompt: god loving dammit i nearly made it, 100 words https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E86gWQs-ios
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May 9, 2016 07:33
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Carl Killer Miller posted:I feel super bad for you. Does baby wanna brawl, make it all better? haha, yeah sure i'll squish you if you want. 500 words, who'll judge. e:
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May 9, 2016 20:40
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May 10, 2016 07:55
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flerp posted:shameful judging
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May 10, 2016 23:44
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Sitting Here posted:Didn't read the prompt, am in, pick all the things for me Your but is amateurs hour
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May 11, 2016 07:01
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Sitting Here posted:Okay, let's make this official. Exactly 1000 words of actual story set in the lands of your twisted kiwi imaginations. You both know my threshold for weird so don't hold back. what is the hurry also can you not count is that one of your issues that you have
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May 15, 2016 06:36
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Eminence Rouge 500 words Three months into his campaign Jimmy Slattery realised his campaign manager was the Devil. The realisation punched deep into his brain then came to rest, sizzling with the heat of its passage. “Hank,” Jimmy said. “Have you always had the, uh.” He pointed at Hank’s horns. “The horns?” Hank reached up to touch them with a red-nailed hand, looking puzzled. The horns were long and curled like a shofar. “These? I guess so. They’re getting pretty grey these days though, haha! Anyway, we’re gonna be needing some full court press on the southern--” Hank stopped. “Jimmy, you got a funny look on, is there a problem?” Jimmy stood up. The skin all down his back felt cold and dimpled, like a plucked chicken fresh out of the cooler. “Yeah, Hank, I got a problem with my campaign gettin’ run by the God-damned Prince of Lies! You’re fired, Hank!” There was an awkward silence in the trailer. Then Jimmy blundered past his former campaign manager and out into the sunshine. He stumbled as he hit the ground, waved off a couple of aides clutching papers for him to sign and jogged across the hot tarmac. Behind him Hank was calling out to him, but Jimmy was done listening. His mind was racing as he ran through all the things that should have tipped him off. The blood in the bottle? He wasn’t a goddam haemophiliac after all! And the night they’d launched the campaign and Hank had the private Mass with the heifer? Anabaptists, Jimmy knew with a sick certainty, didn’t actually do any of that stuff. Jimmy put two fingers to his temple and pushed, rubbing at the pain of his headache. drat. He lurched into the toilets and put both hands under the cold tap. He searched his face in the mirror for a sign of the moral turpitude he now realised must have been there all along. “Jimmy, Jimmy. Satan himself? How didn’t you pick that up in the interview process?” Then he gasped as his familiar, handsome face writhed and coiled like a bucket of worms. Moments later he was looking at Hank's red-skinned visage. “Jimmy, I got an apology to make. I could have been more open about coming from the black pits of hell itself like a plague upon the living. But dadnabbit I care, about this dumb race. And about you, you big lug. So--” Jimmy held up two fingers in a rough X shape. “Get thee behind me Dark One! I ain’t heeding your blandishments!” Hank held up his hands. “Oh, no, I’m not aiming to blandish anyone. I’ll be heading back down now, I already signed my forms with Martha in payroll. I just wanted to wish you luck. And don't be a stranger." Hank vanished, and Jimmy vomited cleanly into the basin. sebmojo fucked around with this message at 11:02 on May 15, 2016 |
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May 16, 2016 07:15
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flerp posted:wtf is this bullshit. you know what titus, real talk, i love you kid. you got heart, and you can write good sometimes, but im so loving tired of you posting this poo poo. i think the problem is that the dome has been going too easy on newbies. all this love and caring bullshit. not anymore. fight flerp titus that is the first time in all the ages of man those words have lived together in a sentence you must do it
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SurreptitiousMuffin posted:before examining the mote of dust in another man's eye, post ur fuckin story Lol e: your mum is a didn't go anywher e vv ee: winner judges the flerp titus brawl, yeah? sebmojo fucked around with this message at 04:51 on May 17, 2016 |
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