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Welcome to the Farm! I just noticed the old fiction farm thread was on the verge of disappearing into the archives. It was getting kinda old and stinky, so it's time for a fresh new one. For those not familiar, here's what we're about : Have you got a piece of short fiction that you want crit on? Post it here. The only condition is that you crit the piece above you. General CC crit etiquette applies: don't be a douchebag and rip something to pieces just because you can, but don't be afraid to be honest about things you don't like. Be honest about things you do like too, so people know the right direction to take their stuff. On the other hand, people are taking time out of their day to help you improve your piece and when you respond to crit, respond with that in mind; if you act like a prima donna, expect to get laughed out of the thread. FAQ Q: What if I wrote 1001 words? A: that's fine. There's some leeway on the 1000 word cap, but don't go crazy. Q: but I wrote 1200 words and I'm really not sure. A: Q: what if I wrote 10,000 words? A: post it elsewhere, preferably in its own thread. Q: do I have to crit? I've never done it before and I'm probably bad at it. A: yes, no exceptions. You're really going to tell other goons that you don't have strong opinions about a piece of media? C'mon, guy. Q: what if nobody has posted in this thread in like six months? Should I still crit the piece above me? They're probably long gone. A: do it anyway. It's good practice. Q: what if I just loving love crit but don't have any story to post? A: post your crits, you excellent person Q: I don't post in Thunderdome and I hate your bullshit clique. A: yeah gently caress those guys. Seriously though, this isn't a TD thing and I will not let it become a TD circlejerk. Take this as a warning, 'domers. To kick us off, here's something I've been working on. It's the second chapter in a novel. Chapter 1 is "here is the protag in 3rd person close, here they are protag-ing around, isn't all this stuff cool?" etc etc. Chapter 2 is short, in present simple and a more direct form of address. My worry is that the sudden shift into a very different voice might be working against what I'm trying to do here. It's meant to be jarring and disorienting but I worry it might go too far. quote:Here’s an old joke: fisherman sits in his boat, hooks a fish. As he reels it up and up, his friends sit in the boat with him and laugh. “Water’s fine today,” he says. edit: crap, the forums can't handle a 'less than or equal to' sign in the title. If a mod sees this, could they change it to "a thousand words or less"? SurreptitiousMuffin fucked around with this message at 00:46 on Nov 21, 2016 |
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ZeBourgeoisie posted:I’ll get you sometime tonight or tomorrow, Muffin.
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