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The Something Awful Forums > The Finer Arts > Creative Convention > Fiction Writing Advice and Discussion: Read. Write. Crit. Repeat.
 
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22 Eargesplitten
Oct 10, 2010



 Oh, hey, one of the first writing questions in a new thread. How would you show rather than tell someone noticing that someone had changed since they last saw them? In terms of demeanor, not physically. The last time they saw them was before the story started.

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22 Eargesplitten
Oct 10, 2010



 Okay, that all makes sense. I'll probably post an example of it in here for you to rip apart critique once I write it.

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The Something Awful Forums > The Finer Arts > Creative Convention > Fiction Writing Advice and Discussion: Read. Write. Crit. Repeat.