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CitizenKeen posted:I've read that agents/publishers are souring on series from first-time authors. How do you tailor a novel to stand on its own, while also making it the first of many? Or is that a fool's errand? Safety Biscuits' advice is really good, but I don't think it's true agents and publishers are souring on series. Annecdotal, but I chat with three first-time authors whose publisher recently signed them for series (and one of the authors really didn't want to do a sequel). When it comes to agents, what they don't want is for you to waste time working on a series if the first book doesn't sell, but in my experience they're really keen for the sequel potential exist and will do their best to sell Your Book + As Yet Unwritten Book 2.
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Rad-daddio posted:Does anyone have good sources for low cost editing? I'm finishing up the first in a series of fiction novels, and I've been seeing costs around 800-1100 usd and up for a 100k word manuscript. My intent is to use the first manuscript, and begin the long and painful search for an agent as I continue the series. So, if that's what it really costs then so be it. Unless you don't have beta readers/crit partners to run it past, you don't really need to drop money on a professional edit before querying agents. Agents will read for voicing/characterisation/plotting, and if you have those then most will work with you to polish the manuscript. Once you have an agent, they will also discourage you from immediately starting work on the second book in a series - if they don't sell your first book then writing a second book that will never see the light of day is a waste of your time (unless your series is loosely connected enough that each book stands alone, which might be the case for a cozy mystery). You're better off developing a solid synopsis for the second book so the first book can be sold with sequel potential, and then starting a new project so you'll have a larger back catalogue for your agent to sell from.
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# ¿ Oct 18, 2020 11:57 |
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wolberius posted:Hello everyone. This is my first post here and you come highly recommended. I have finished a manuscript for a horror novel and I'm in the process of querying it to agents. I hope to receive your feedback on my cover letter. Without further ado, this is what I have: Apologies if this sounds harsh! - 'I have no doubt my novel would interest you' feels a little presumptuous. - 130,000 words is about what you could get away with for a fantasy novel. Horror novels are usually <100,000. You might want to make another editing pass to cut that word count or you're likely to get rejections based on that alone. - Meanwhile, your pitch itself is a little short. You could safely add another 100 words to make things clearer. Focus on who Lilian is, what she wants, and what's keeping her from getting it, because at the moment we don't know anything about her beyond the plot that happens to her, and have no reason to care about her. "[Intrepid reporter/loner high school student/bored office worker] Lilian is hunting for her missing best friend, [NAME], when a demon saves her life [from a hellhound/mugger/speeding pizza delivery guy]. Although she's initially [terrified/sceptical/aroused], Lilian realises that these man-eating monsters may be connected to [NAME]'s disappearance, and decides to [learn how to fight them/team up with the demon that saved her/give up on her quest and hide under the bed]. But there's more at stake than [NAME]'s life; the demons are behind a string of grizzly murders, and that may only be the start of the horrors. Now Lilian needs to decide whether finding [NAME] is worth facing down everything that hell can throw at her armed with only [a bad attitude/a green belt in jujitsu/fledgling demonic powers of her own]." just to be clear, this is very bad! But hopefully it gives an idea of how you could shift the emphasis to Lilian and her choices. - Terms like 'Netherworld' and 'Demon Hunters' aren't great when we don't know what they mean within the context your story. - I could be wrong, but The Haunting of Hill House is a slow, claustrophobic and ambiguous psychological horror, and it really doesn't sound like a good comp for a book full of fast-paced demon chases. Honestly, the current pitch's emphasis on warring supernatural factions and Lilian developing cool demonic powers makes this book sound more like YA or urban fantasy than horror. (You will also, ideally, want all your comps to have been from within the last few years, both Haunting and Let The Right One In are too old). Sally Forth fucked around with this message at 11:34 on Sep 13, 2022 |
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wolberius posted:I have revised my letter, using some of the pointers you gave. I was initially under the impression that the synopsis had to be reduced to 2, but rather just 1 paragraph and that I had to be very concise about what happens in the novel. I have taken your advice and that of some others here to build a more compelling blurb. I have essentially traded general things about myself and the novel for room to elaborate on the story. I have decided to drop the Horror genre as I believe it can stand on its own in dark fantasy/grimmdark too. It would give me more flexibility too. I hope to avoid the YA genre altogether, despite my MC's age and where the story takes place. You and others have suggested specifically naming the number of murders and the town's name. These are not given in the story either, so I chose to omit them. Here is the updated version, thank you for your help so far: This is a significant improvement! Well done!
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# ¿ Sep 19, 2022 12:03 |
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Sailor Viy posted:Also among the people here who have experience querying, is there anything non-obvious that you wish you had known when you started out? The relationship goes both ways. Curate the list of agents you're going to query carefully and don't assume that everyone who could potentially rep your book would actually be a good fit. Check their sales in your genre - if they aren't selling to big five imprints or large indie presses then they may not be worth your time. If you get an offer, take the opportunity to speak to their clients and make sure they're happy. Don't let your eagerness to get rep drive you to sign with someone who isn't going to take your career in the direction you want it to. A bad agent (or just one who's a bad fit for you) can be a worse setback for your writing career than not finding an agent at all and having to try again with another book.
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Milkfred E. Moore posted:The other thing I found was that there was no point in personalising the query letters. I think I personalised about a dozen because the agent seemed like a good fit or represented works I really enjoyed, and those were always my quickest rejections. Maybe it was coincidence, but it always left me feeling a little bit worse to put in a bit more effort and get the same kind of response. This is true. The only time it's worth doing is if you have a real, personal connection to lean on ('we met at [X] conference', 'you liked my pitch tweet', '[your client] loved this and said you might be interested'). Even that won't get you an offer, but it will probably get you to the top of the slush pile so you can get rejected more quickly.
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# ¿ Jan 17, 2024 12:32 |
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Waffle! posted:Some of them Rose recognized from her entrance tests, and more than one that failed to protect themselves from Black Fox's sword. Some of them Rose recognized from her entrance tests; more than one had failed to protect themselves from Black Fox's sword. Some of them Rose recognized from her entrance tests, where more than one had failed to protect themselves from Black Fox's sword. quote:He then faced the kid and stepped closer to put his hand on his shield, and shoved him backwards onto his butt. quote:He stepped over the boy and continued onward, while Rose helped him back to his feet before catching up with her proctor. quote:"I'm not the bad guy. I just show them their limits." Black Fox replied.
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Waffle! posted:[snip] Some general advice:
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# ¿ Mar 14, 2024 13:15 |
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Leng posted:Hi thread, it's been a while since I've asked for a blurb crit so here goes. This is for a second book in a series, which I'm probably gonna be pitching as "Six of Crows meets The Well of Ascension" (or maybe a vastly inferior The Monster Baru Cormorant because everybody hates The Well of Ascension). I have two options that I'm debating: To give the PoV of someone who's not familiar with the series, I'd agree that Option 1 is stronger for the reasons the other gave; a list of characters with a trait or two apiece and little idea of how they're going to fit into the plot is much less interesting than a tight focus on a single character, their goals and obstacles.
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Mirage posted:If y'all don't mind, I have a blurb I've been messing with for so long that I feel like I've lost objectivity. I think I need a few more eyes on it before I begin sending it to agents. A standard query letter devotes ~250 words to the blurb text, so you've got room to expand this quite a bit. I'd also agree with Sailor Viy that the David/Nome reveal feels disjointed in such a small space, and that this would be strengthened by giving us a sense of the personal stakes for David. Isekai is a hard sell in tradpub right now, but agents are really hoping to find a breakthrough book, so if you position this right (maybe with the Space Opera comp Stuporstar suggested to show the appeal to more traditional SF readers) then you could be in with a chance.
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