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mewse
May 2, 2006

ultrachrist posted:

I never understood Forewards or whatever you call them (NOT prologues). They always spoil the book. Why put them at the beginning? Put them at the end.

Yeah I will skip foreword and introduction but not prologue - would these people skip epilogues? Seems silly

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mewse
May 2, 2006

cumpantry posted:

hello everyone i'm going to attempt to frankenstein some romance fantasy litrpg to life in hopes of crumbing together KU sales. here is a very brief prologue, this thread reminding me some significant and scary population of readers skip them, from being too weighty i assume. anyway be rough with me it's ok :angel:

I gave it a shot, my comments prefixed with hyphens

https://pastebin.com/5DGpivRX

mewse
May 2, 2006

juggalo baby coffin posted:

Now the country is well established, having used non-sentient undead labor to basically create a socialist state, with the world's first necromancy university.

but that's all basically window dressing

Forced labour (skeleton army) and genetic nobility (necromancers) created a socialist state?

mewse
May 2, 2006

sebmojo posted:

I love my Chromebook, great battery life, can't play game for poo poo but will let you watch YouTube or whatever, turns on instantly. Lenovo Yoga 300e gen 4.

Curious about writing on a chromebook - just type stuff into google docs?

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