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Hiveminded
Aug 26, 2014

AbstractNapper posted:

I did like the writing in this, the humor and the more serious parts, but when it got very deep/ philosophical or when certain characters struggled to give explanations, I was kind of lost. There were some spelling errors (some were deliberate, but some were apparently missed by QA testing) and then there was the particular way the characters spoke, and all those made certain (especially long) sentences hard to read and make sense (I am also not a native English speaker, so that factors in too) ... I guess some dialogue was also intentionally abstract, left incomplete or was supposed to make little sense. But I am left with the feeling that I didn't really understand certain characters' motivations or explanations for their actions.

Yeah, a lot of the attempts at some kind of deep or philosophical insight felt very hit-or-miss (often miss), though admittedly that kind of dialogue is extremely appropriate for a bunch of cynical young adults struggling with self-actualisation.

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