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Rhymefire posted:Thanks for the critiques, everyone. I'll see if I can fix it up and analyze some of the other lp's properly this time.  No, seriously. Just close the thread and let it lie. People will get it and avoid it. Once it's posted there's really no way to delete it short of the mods gassing it, and that's only done in extreme cases. Everyone else has already said everything worth saying; Sandcastle,  , read other peoples' LPs to get a feel for how things should (but not necessarily must, mind you) be done and try again when you feel comfortable. At least you're willing to learn, so that's a start. People tend to come in here fresh, faceplant, and then scared off when the Quality Control goons descend upon them, so don't get discouraged. Dragon Age 1 is one of those games that kind of begs multiple LPs just to explore all the different origin stories and how they affect the game.But honestly, unless you have a drat good reason for it, I'd actually suggest picking a different character origin because Inferior's already planted their flag firmly in Dwarven Female Noble territory so a second LP of that might be belaboring the point. But it's your choice dude.
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