Don't use thumbnails, it's annoying as hell to have to click on every single image in order to be able to see anything. Also you should differentiate the narration and explanation somehow. And decide whether you want the LP to be narrative or informative because this frankly fails at both; lots of pointless words where there shouldn't be (your hero's backstory isn't interesting or relevant to anything) and lots missing where they should be (why did you choose to do with her what you did with her?). You might also want to explain the relations between these games and the better-known Endless Legend. And so on and so on. Hell, I'd recommend scrapping this and running it through the Sandcastle. anilEhilated fucked around with this message at 15:55 on Jul 10, 2017 |
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