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I wouldn't mind some constructive criticism on my current project Kobayashi Maru. Like my previous major project, Weapon Brown, I am beginning it as a webcomic with the dream of turning it into a comic book series. All comments welcome, (except those that mock my tiny genitals. See? Beat you to it! Why even go there? No woman will!) The premise (which I am still trying to turn into an elevator pitch) is "What if the Start Trek TV show was just propaganda in a genuine Start Trek future? Here's what that universe would actually be like." 
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PMush Perfect posted:The only woman in the image wearing a skintight body suit and doing the stereotypical back-breaking T&A pose did not make a good first impression for me. The fact that you did not recognize the woman in the center as being a woman is doubly damning! :bigtran:
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thatbastardken posted:It kinda feels like it's trying too hard to be edgy, and I say that as someone who genuinely enjoyed Weapon Brown. I guess the problem is "What if the federation was really bad?" isn't exactly undiscovered country, even within star trek itself, and you have to mine pretty deep to get anything new out of the concept. Oh God... kill me if I ever come across as "edgy" (it hits my ear like "Poochie"!) I may not be striking the right note, but I am not trying to make the Federation "bad", just no better or worse than, say, America is today. Thanks for your thoughts! I have to go now. My home planet needs me.
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