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ThirdEmperor posted:Can I ask who commented on my piece? I think we should say in thread when we do, so that the various perspectives can be kept clear. Otherwise I'mma be confused as gently caress. Can you fix ur bad doc tho e: nvm, QPQ and I managed to hack our way through it: my line crits and summary are both in the comments. Obliterati fucked around with this message at 19:06 on Mar 28, 2018 |
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RgFuoJjfvbaa4TU8y4cOc5bbYpyu6iabaV-Mfwg3PG4/edit?usp=sharing So I'm writing off my TD entry from this week because it is Bad. I was worried about what I was going to replace it with until I remembered this thing that I was supposed to do a second draft of. This is intended for the competition in place of whatever it was I was doing on that island. It's just over 3k words and I am interested in whatever feedback you got.
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