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ThirdEmperor
Aug 7, 2013

BEHOLD MY GLORY

AND THEN

BRAWL ME
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wgG7dtGmmrUPwO9oRGdmANQu8yohuB0tBUcKkJNufKk/edit?usp=drivesdk

Looking for general feedback on the first part before I talk about my intentions for the extended piece. Much appreciated and I'll return the favor of course.

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ThirdEmperor
Aug 7, 2013

BEHOLD MY GLORY

AND THEN

BRAWL ME
Can I ask who commented on my piece? I think we should say in thread when we do, so that the various perspectives can be kept clear. Otherwise I'mma be confused as gently caress.

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