|
feedmyleg posted:It's the story I was told "Is this publishable? Absolutely not." in the TD! Yes, the one everyone made testicle puns about. This is a competently written story that is absolutely destroyed by a 300-word opening about a man playing with his balls. Cut the opening, start with the tennis match, and then you can actually begin editing what you have. If you don't, no one will ever read past the first page.
|
#
¿
Mar 27, 2018 15:27
|
|
|
|
| # ¿ May 22, 2024 15:06 |
|