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I don't know if I can stomach another bad chitoryu12 book thread. I'm forgetting what good books look like
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Apr 4, 2018 21:53
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I'm not much of a gun person but I'm guessing that the love interest in this book will be the Glock that Frank's holding. Pitt will run into the Glock on the street downtown without her business attire (the silencer) on and it'll kick off an initially tense but sexually charged professional relationship that will eventually turn into something more.
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Apr 5, 2018 14:39
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Renegret posted:I'm not much of a gun person but I'm guessing that the love interest in this book will be the Glock that Frank's holding. Pitt will run into the Glock on the street downtown without her business attire (the silencer) on and it'll kick off an initially tense but sexually charged professional relationship that will eventually turn into something more. still a better love story than RPO etc etc
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Apr 5, 2018 14:40
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I'm so excited for the amazing plot twist which reveals that Grant is actually A Bad Guy.
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Apr 10, 2018 15:14
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chitoryu12 posted:Also I've read ahead. This book is starting to get wonderful. I'll give you one hint: This is the best bad book ever
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Apr 12, 2018 16:19
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Mel Mudkiper posted:why are the vampires evil it's dumb fun, you're not supposed to think about it
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Apr 12, 2018 17:01
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Orthodox Rabbit posted:can vampires eat regular food Have you ever seen a vampire poop? I know I haven't.
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Apr 12, 2018 19:12
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JUST MAKING CHILI posted:I bet either Grant gets turned into a vampire Khizan posted:I think Grant is going to go work for the government. What's the difference!!!!!!!! hyuck hyuck hyuck
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Apr 13, 2018 13:48
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Clipperton posted:No you're not dude, you're just saying "the politics of this book are bad" which everyone already agrees with. You need to demonstrate that enjoying a scene of guys mowing down chupacabras with CAWSes will inevitably turn you into a Proud Boy. Excuse me I may not know much about guns but I googled what a CAWS is and found out that it's made by H&K That means it's bad because Correia taught me that H&K is bad praise gun jesus, the mulcher of wrights and human noses
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Apr 13, 2018 16:39
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chitoryu12 posted:Correia is actually a Saiga fanboy.  I am too, apparently!
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Apr 13, 2018 16:42
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I like the part where the good guys fight the monsters.
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Apr 14, 2018 20:35
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Internet Wizard posted:It took a really long time but it was really cool when the good guys finally showed up and handcuffed the villains and beat one of them up a bit. agreed he loving deserved it
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Apr 15, 2018 12:11
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You don't have to Really, it's okay
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Apr 16, 2018 16:14
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Orthodox Rabbit posted:what if this book is actually pro-vampire propaganda The vampire pee tape is real.
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Apr 16, 2018 17:03
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hey OP we've gone about 30 pages without any gratuitous violence. I'm getting a little itchy here when do we get our next dose of zombie killing gun porn
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Apr 16, 2018 18:01
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That derail would've been much more worthwhile if it was a debate trying to figure out if vampires poop. We never did figure that out.
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Apr 17, 2018 00:15
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Orthodox Rabbit posted:If an orc becomes a vampire does that make it double racist if you shoot it The racism is in two opposite directions so they cancel each other out and it becomes racist to not shoot the vampire orc.
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Apr 17, 2018 18:29
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40k orks are da best orks and Correia isn't clever enough to make something better e: at least we should be getting another fight scene soon I was getting a little itchy
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Apr 19, 2018 12:42
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hnnng yeah that's the good stuff
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Apr 19, 2018 16:08
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chitoryu12 posted:Make Holly the protagonist instead.
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Apr 20, 2018 15:59
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vio-lence :clap: :clap: vio-lence :clap: :clap:
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Apr 30, 2018 17:51
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I liked this book better when the plot didn't exist.
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May 2, 2018 14:32
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Proteus Jones posted:I do appreciate that everyone not part of MHI wants to murder Pitt as soon as they meet him. And half of MHI too. When the whole world is full of assholes.... .....maybe you're the rear end in a top hat, Pitt?
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May 2, 2018 15:47
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It'd be more believable if you told me that Julie was completely hosed in the head due to her traumatic history and has a hard time maintaining meaningful relationships, and that Pitt is just another wild swing of a woman who just can't figure herself out.
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May 10, 2018 12:02
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Julie's mom is just jealous that she only got one page describing how hot she is when Julie got at least triple that. e: and both got less hotness screen time than abomination Renegret fucked around with this message at 14:33 on May 10, 2018 |
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May 10, 2018 14:27
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quote:"Good thing," Milo said as he spit some sunflower seeds into a paper cup. "I like the world. It would suck to blow it up. Especially since I'm engaged now." It was nice knowin' you, Milo
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May 10, 2018 21:02
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I'm betting money on some stupid time rewind/mass revival/it was just a dream because that's too many characters to eat poo poo all at once. Also, is this the first time we mention that Skippy's Brother is with them? Renegret fucked around with this message at 15:49 on May 15, 2018 |
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May 15, 2018 15:44
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I think I'm more upset about Franks than anyone else. And maybe Holly. Okay Holly too.
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May 15, 2018 17:42
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Darth Walrus posted:Am I really going to have to be the first one to bring up that the entire secondary cast got eaten by the goddamned Zerg? Our heroes never stood a chance they didn't even have to face any Ultralisks smh
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May 15, 2018 18:31
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For as dumb as that whole thing wasquote:"Earth. Every person on Earth felt it." This has the potential to be real good. I mean, it won't be good, but the potential is there.
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May 16, 2018 12:31
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I still don't understand why the crew didn't get time rewinded back to being surrounded by monsters and just killed again. How far back did they go? Why couldn't the big bad just spring his trap again? Why am I trying to make sense of this?
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May 16, 2018 14:57
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Drunken Baker posted:edit: Just so this isn't a sole, catty snip played for yucks, I've taken on board a lot of criticism from this thread regarding writing style. My biggest issue with this is the complete failure to characterize properly. I'm always forgetting who is who because, in dialogue, everyone is the loving same. Who's Milo again? I had to go back a few updates to double check if the was the gun guy because I forgot. One of the guys is also a virgin, but I forgot who. And there's a token black guy too? I think? Someone's black, I don't remember who. Then Sam started talking and, oh poo poo I forgot a Sam even existed. Most of the supporting cast are just the same person when it comes to dialogue, they just exist and nothing really makes them special. Other than that, it's hard to gently caress up the protagonist, the  girl and her chad boyfriend (because we're reminded of that every page), and the leader with deus ex machina abilities.Then finally Holly, who should still be the protagonist. Still, if she was just another dude with a vanilla background, I'd get her confused with the rest of the nobody pile. I have dubbed her the girl with an RPG. Renegret fucked around with this message at 16:04 on May 16, 2018 |
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May 16, 2018 16:01
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quote:"Actually, I was thinking that if we don't stop the CO before the moon is up, we call the Feds. They'll just nuke the place." It's happened. This book completed it's transformation into a made for TV SyFy Original movie
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Jun 12, 2018 13:03
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This book would be so much better if it just never changed from the first chapter and was just about a completely average actuary who's desperately trying to get their reports submitted on time but these gosh dang werewolves keep putting him behind schedule.
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Jun 12, 2018 18:10
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"That was my great-grandpappy's abacus!" Pitt shouted at the werewolf, moments before snapping it's neck with his bare hands.
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Jun 12, 2018 18:34
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Democratic Pirate posted:I hope the bad guys win 
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Jun 19, 2018 12:08
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chitoryu12 posted:It's more like: I couldn't follow this. Not from lack of understanding, I just didn't care.
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Jun 21, 2018 16:30
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Internet Wizard posted:And then after he saves the world by watching other people do all of the work, he murders an unarmed and potentially innocent man in cold blood. To be fair, he was a dick before he got cursed, too. Pitt's just doing the government a favor, avoiding the need to explain why we have a 500 year old guy running around.
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Jun 22, 2018 15:45
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UGHHHHHHHHH
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Jun 27, 2018 13:15
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I think I've said this before but this book would be so much better if all plot was stripped out of it, and the book was just 300 pages of Owen fighting werewolves with his bare hands.
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Jun 28, 2018 15:02
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