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roomforthetuna
Mar 22, 2005

I don't need to know anything about virii! My CUSTOM PROGRAM keeps me protected! It's not like they'll try to come in through the Internet or something!

chitoryu12 posted:

I like how we went from an author who tries his hardest to avoid writing difficult action scenes to an author who starts an action scene on page 7 that takes up the whole rest of the first chapter.
Yeah, this contrast is really striking.
Cline's Monster Hunter International, chapter one:

My boss turned into a werewolf. I grabbed a gun and shot him repeatedly. He kept coming, so I shoved a desk into him and he fell out of the window and died. "I learned that move from watching Hong Kong Phooey," I said.

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