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Bob Quixote
Jul 7, 2006

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In on the ground floor and eager to read more about the stupid society based entirely on that one joke from Firefly.

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Bob Quixote
Jul 7, 2006

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Panzeh posted:

It's odd how easy it is to write drow in a way that isn't so obviously a dude going through a divorce projecting onto paper but somebody has to not do it.

I mean, the most absolutely generous interpretation possible is that a better writer could maybe use the role reversal in their societies gender-power dynamics to point out how hosed up that kind of thing is but in practice it usually just comes out as :females:

Bob Quixote
Jul 7, 2006

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Panzeh posted:

It probably certainly would from this group of writers. A better writer could probably write a profoundly inequitable, dysfunctional, and evil society in a way that makes far more sense than what we have here.

Just re-write some already existing piece of dystopian fiction but throw in a lot more spiders and piwafwi's.

OP, any idea of when you'll be ready to post the next chapter?

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