In on the ground floor and eager to read more about the stupid society based entirely on that one joke from Firefly.
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# ¿ Oct 21, 2018 16:29 |
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# ¿ May 16, 2024 21:15 |
Panzeh posted:It's odd how easy it is to write drow in a way that isn't so obviously a dude going through a divorce projecting onto paper but somebody has to not do it. I mean, the most absolutely generous interpretation possible is that a better writer could maybe use the role reversal in their societies gender-power dynamics to point out how hosed up that kind of thing is but in practice it usually just comes out as
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# ¿ Oct 21, 2018 16:41 |
Panzeh posted:It probably certainly would from this group of writers. A better writer could probably write a profoundly inequitable, dysfunctional, and evil society in a way that makes far more sense than what we have here. Just re-write some already existing piece of dystopian fiction but throw in a lot more spiders and piwafwi's. OP, any idea of when you'll be ready to post the next chapter?
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# ¿ Oct 21, 2018 17:37 |