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edit: nevermind!
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# ¿ Jul 4, 2022 11:48 |
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# ¿ May 9, 2024 00:18 |
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I have a song. It's called Smoke. I spent this afternoon writing the lyrics and adding singing. It's pretty much finished, I might change some things, couple little rough bits, but otherwise I'm just curious to see if anybody actually likes it, so let me know what you think. Yeah, you. https://on.soundcloud.com/Nq1LF
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# ¿ Nov 5, 2022 23:14 |
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WhyZodiac posted:I like it, was like listening to three bands I like playing together. i'm listening to your songs now. pretty smooth - you seem to have more musicianship and better production skills than i do for sure. it's kind of reminding me of father john misty, not that your voice sounds exactly like him or anything it's just that kind of voice presenting the mundane lyrics about following and liking. i like the ending of the great depression the best out of these three, the running guitar line under 'the way out' part is really nice.
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# ¿ Nov 5, 2022 23:45 |
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i didn't mean it as a criticism, i just couldn't think of another word to say the juxtaposition between the drama of the song and the everyday - actually i should've said quotidian.
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# ¿ Nov 6, 2022 00:00 |