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Mel Mudkiper
Jan 19, 2012

At this point, Mudman abruptly ends the conversation. He usually insists on the last word.

Patrick Spens posted:

Can you expand on this? Because it seems obviously wrong to me.

Because commercial success is a representation of the text's success as a product, not as an experience. It is taking art and rendering it Pepsi.

Besides that, even as a product, the measurement is false. The idea that the "appeal" (as ambiguous a measurement as one could ever assume to ask for) can be determined through popular success is the same that suggesting Coke is better than Pepsi on an objective level because it sells more worldwide. And that is something as superficial as a soda flavor. Imagine taking that same broken logic and trying to extrapolate it into art.

Measuring the success of a product only speaks to its qualities as a product. You cannot measure to the artistic merit of something through the lens of product and consumption. The idea that we can is part of the cultural brainwashing of capitalism.


MockingQuantum posted:

I'm sort of lucky that I dodged both of those, I got to see Frankenstein and To Kill A Mockingbird murdered instead, and I had read both before they got forcibly deconstructed, so at least I had a chance to enjoy them on their own merits.


I think I lucked out the most in never having to read The Old Man and the Sea in high school because its one of my favorite books, but I absolutely know high school would have killed it.

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Peel
Dec 3, 2007

the use of commercial success as a proxy for artistic quality runs into the immediate problem of marketing practices as a confounding variable

Doctor Faustine
Sep 2, 2018

Mel Mudkiper posted:

The two most miserable experiences I can remember in high school were The Scarlet Letter and Lord of the Flies, and both of thes books were essentially hijacked in the name of a sort of objective puzzle solving reading. I hope one day to return to those books, especially Scarlet Letter, and allow myself to find my own way through the text instead of having to decode what it means that the seaweed made a green A.

My teacher in high school mercifully avoided the "book as puzzle box" approach to The Scarlet Letter. Instead we got like a month of "Is Hester feminist?" to the exclusion of nearly anything else one might talk about when reading The Scarlet Letter which was its own kind of stupid, but at least it was easy to ignore and just forge ahead with my own reading of the story. It's easily my favorite American novel and, for better or weirder, it kick-started my lasting obsession with the Puritans.

Thranguy
Apr 21, 2010


Deceitful and black-hearted, perhaps we are. But we would never go against the Code. Well, perhaps for good reasons. But mostly never.

Mel Mudkiper posted:

Because commercial success is a representation of the text's success as a product, not as an experience. It is taking art and rendering it Pepsi.

Besides that, even as a product, the measurement is false. The idea that the "appeal" (as ambiguous a measurement as one could ever assume to ask for) can be determined through popular success is the same that suggesting Coke is better than Pepsi on an objective level because it sells more worldwide. And that is something as superficial as a soda flavor. Imagine taking that same broken logic and trying to extrapolate it into art.

Measuring the success of a product only speaks to its qualities as a product. You cannot measure to the artistic merit of something through the lens of product and consumption. The idea that we can is part of the cultural brainwashing of capitalism.

Most art forms originated in popular entertainment, including all or nearly all of the storytelling arts. (The remainder originated as entertainment or status-signaling for cultural elites.) A criticism that lacks any language or interest in discussing what makes such a work succeed as entertainment has lost something fundamental and important, whether out of pure hipsterism or foolish Marxism.

The difference between the popularity of Coke and Pepsi may come down to marketing, but the difference between the popularity of both of those over carrot juice can be attributed to something real about popular taste and the neurochemical effects of caffeine and processed sugars.

TheGreatEvilKing
Mar 28, 2016





The Priory of the Orange Tree: Christian Allusions in the Hands of Gay Feminism

The Priory of the Orange Tree is a recent novel by Samantha Shannon reinventing the medieval legend of St George and the Dragon from a feminist perspective. It takes place in an Elizabethan England analogue attempting to prepare for the awakening of "The Nameless One", an evil dragon of fire sealed away for a thousand years. Sound familiar?

The quote that literally opens this book posted:

And I saw an angel coming down out of heaven, having the key to the Abyss and holding in his
hand a great chain. He seized the dragon, that ancient serpent, who is the devil, or Satan, and bound him for a thousand years.

He threw him into the abyss, and locked and sealed it over him, to keep him from deceiving the nations any more until the thousand years were ended

-Revelation 20.1-3

The problem the book runs into is that it seemingly wants to talk about Christianity, medieval chivalry, and its relationship to women without involving anything that resembles Christianity at all. Here, I'll spoil a big reveal.

Shannon posted:

"I had not seen Galian [the St George stand in] for many years. But when he heard of the plague and the Nameless One wreaking terror in Lasia, he sought me out again, pleading for my help. His dream, you see, was to unite the warring kings and princelings of Inys under one crown, and to rule a country according to the Six Virtues of Knighthood. To do that, he had to earn their respect with a great deed. He wanted to slay the Nameless One, and to do that, he would need my magic. Like a fool, I gave it him, for by this time I loved him not as a mother. I loved him as companions do. In return, he swore he would be mine alone.

"Blindex by love, I gave him Ascalon, the sword I had forged in starlight and fire. To Lasia he rode, to the city of Yikala." She let out a huff. "What I had not realized was what else Galian wanted. To unite the Insycan rulers and strengthen his claim, he desired a queen of royal blood - and when he saw Cleolind Onjenyu, he wanted her. Not only was she unwed and beautiful, but in her veins ran the old blood of the South

You know a little of what happened next. Cleolind disdained my knight and took up his sword when he was injured. She wounded the Nameless One and disappeared with her handmaidens into the Lasian Basin, there to bind herself forever in marriage to the orange tree.

This version of the St George legend is that St George wanted power for himself, so he got his adoptive witch mother to give him a magic sword and went to fight Satan to rescue a princess. Instead of a noble knight, he was a cowardly poltroon who went down like a chump. The princess grabbed the sword, stabbed Satan, found the Biblical forbidden fruit and ate of it while fleeing into the desert. This turned her into a wizard and she and another queen used their wizard powers to cast Satan into the Abyss for a thousand years.

Meanwhile Galian the Deceiver (St George) went back to Inys (England) and lied about how the dragon would be sealed while his family sat the throne. He then founded the "virtudom" religion founded on the six chivalric virtues...and there my confusion began. The medieval St George legend has the saint bring the (muzzled) dragon into the town and offer to kill it if the townsfolk convert. This makes sense. What doesn't make sense is these virtues being venerated outside a Christian context, because Jesus was incredibly important to a medieval knight. The body of Christian thought that went into tales like the Quest for the Grail is replaced with a shallow parody where the Deceiver and 6 knights (one for each virtue) welcome believers into heaven and proclaim themselves the only true faith, but does not attempt to grapple with the questions Christianity does. The religion has the trappings of Christianity such as "the sign of the sword" and calling itself Virtudom instead of Christendom, but it fails to be a meaningful critique of medieval culture and just comes off like this:



The waters are further muddied by the Pope/Monarch family descended from the Deceiver all being women, raising the question of whether this intended to be a masculine power structure opposed by the True Faith of the Mother Goddess - the Witch Princess - or just another authority in a world run by women. At least one of the Six Knights is a woman

I suspect there is a statement about how Christianity spread by appropriating pagan myths - as seen by the princesses being overwritten by the Deceiver - and is historically associated with control. Ignoring the multitude of pagan faiths used to control empires (Pharoah? What are you doing here?), the characters all seem fine using virtudom as a means of control to mobilize armies against Satan.

Ultimately the book's themes are undermined by Shannon's desire to "worldbuild" out of a mixture of history and legend. The climactic battle echoes Sir Francis Drake defeating the Spanish armada, with the fleets of Elizabethan England, ancient China, shogunate Japan, and a bunch of friendly Asian dragons facing the Spanish fleet led by Satan, his dragons, and the "Draconic Army" made of various medieval monsters from when the dragons banged animals. This turns a conflict historically between Catholics and Protestants into a spiritual battle between the leader of the Catholic Church and literal Satan, who rather than deceiving the nations gets about 3 lines before a bunch of superpowered women stab him to death.

All this said, I can't write the book off entirely. The dialogue is actually written in period-appropriate language and the word choices aren't anachronistic - something that sets the book miles above most contemporary fantasy. That said, the prose is merely competent, not great. Here's her description of The Nameless One, a legendary, Satanic evil:

Shannon posted:

She had heard stories of the beast. Every child had grown up hearing about the nightmare that had crawled out of the mountain to ravage the world. She had seen images of him, richly painted in gold-leaf and red lacquer, with blots of soot-ink where eyes ought to be.

No artist had captured the magnitude of the enemy, or the way the fire inside made him smouldering. They had never seen it for themselves. His wingspan was the length of two Lacustrine treasure ships. His teeth were as black as his eyes. The waves crashed and the thunder rolled.

It's not nearly as awful as much of the dreck in these threads, but it's not great. Lacustrine treasure ships do not exist. I have no idea how big they are. I assume they are Chinese junks? It also falls into the trap of having no emotion. This is the ancient serpent sealed away for 1000 years, the beast whose rising heralds the end of days and you just dispassionately describe his appearance? Yeesh.

I was going to do a bit on the absurdity of gay marriage being legal in a world run by feudalism that values the continuation of a pure bloodline, but it's really just a microcosm of how the novel tries to blend ancient and modern and results in a whole plausible by neither.

Mr. Steak
May 9, 2013

by Jeffrey of YOSPOS

Mel Mudkiper posted:

taking art and rendering it Pepsi.

this is a nonsensical analogy but it would be a really good thread subtitle

Take the plunge! Okay!
Feb 24, 2007



Thranguy posted:


The difference between the popularity of Coke and Pepsi may come down to marketing, but the difference between the popularity of both of those over carrot juice can be attributed to something real about popular taste and the neurochemical effects of caffeine and processed sugars.

This analogy is nonsensical. Are you trying to say we evolved to seek out trashy genre fic?

Mr. Steak
May 9, 2013

by Jeffrey of YOSPOS

Take the plunge! Okay! posted:

This analogy is nonsensical. Are you trying to say we evolved to seek out trashy genre fic?

both of them got kind of weird with their metaphors, but what thranguy said in his first paragraph is very smart and good

Take the plunge! Okay!
Feb 24, 2007



onsetOutsider posted:

both of them got kind of weird with their metaphors, but what thranguy said in his first paragraph is very smart and good

I think that’s getting uncomfortably close to the old “well, Dickens was very popular in his time, so (current genre author) will be considered a classic one day”, which is just plain wrong. There is nothing wrong with having a Marxist or feminist critical reading of a literary work. They are often extremely good at describing why certain popular yet worthless works capture wide audiences. The said audiences wouldn’t like to hear what they have to say about their favorite works, though. Trying to hand wave some of the major approaches to literary criticism away by describing them as hipsterish is both snide and ignorant.

Mr. Steak
May 9, 2013

by Jeffrey of YOSPOS

Take the plunge! Okay! posted:

I think that’s getting uncomfortably close to the old “well, Dickens was very popular in his time, so (current genre author) will be considered a classic one day”, which is just plain wrong. There is nothing wrong with having a Marxist or feminist critical reading of a literary work. They are often extremely good at describing why certain popular yet worthless works capture wide audiences. The said audiences wouldn’t like to hear what they have to say about their favorite works, though. Trying to hand wave some of the major approaches to literary criticism away by describing them as hipsterish is both snide and ignorant.

i won't speak for thranguy, but my interpretation of his post was not that the factor of "entertainment" is in any way superior or more essential than any of the other factors focused on in literary critisism. just that it should be considered as well. and that dismissing it out of hand is to ignore a large part of how the literary world functions

Take the plunge! Okay!
Feb 24, 2007



onsetOutsider posted:

i won't speak for thranguy, but my interpretation of his post was not that the factor of "entertainment" is in any way superior or more essential than any of the other factors focused on in literary critisism. just that it should be considered as well. and that dismissing it out of hand is to ignore a large part of how the literary world functions

I think entertainment is highly subjective. A book I find entertaining might bore you out of your skull and vice versa. A book that is more entertaining (as in, more people would find it entertaining if they read it) won’t necessarily sell better if it has poor marketing etc. But the biggest problem of that argument for me is that it goes against my expectation that literary criticism shouldn’t be based on factors outside the text that is being criticized.

Llamadeus
Dec 20, 2005
I think that guy just wants people to quit criticizing and mocking popular and entertaining author Brandon Sanderson

Mel Mudkiper
Jan 19, 2012

At this point, Mudman abruptly ends the conversation. He usually insists on the last word.

Thranguy posted:

Most art forms originated in popular entertainment, including all or nearly all of the storytelling arts. (The remainder originated as entertainment or status-signaling for cultural elites.) A criticism that lacks any language or interest in discussing what makes such a work succeed as entertainment has lost something fundamental and important, whether out of pure hipsterism or foolish Marxism.

You are deliberating obfuscating my objection to your argument. Plenty of critical readings look at reasons behind why a text became popular. There are entire schools of sociological criticism that look at the unique factors in a culture that lead to a text becoming well-known. No one is arguing there is no value in exploring why a text hit a zeitgeist.

The issue is your assertion is that its success as a "product" is a way to measure its success as "art." This is the point of saying you take art and render it pepsi. At some point in a capitalist culture, everything becomes a "brand" or "product". In this way, things either become successful or non-successful not because of the merits of the text, but because of the merits of the brand associated with the text. A brand being recognizable ends up becoming a selling point for the brand, and at that point the actual merits of the text are entirely superficial. High sales speak more to the success of marketing and distribution than they speak to the success of the [i]text[i]

Also, please explain to me how Marxist criticism is foolish :allears:


onsetOutsider posted:

i won't speak for thranguy, but my interpretation of his post was not that the factor of "entertainment" is in any way superior or more essential than any of the other factors focused on in literary critisism. just that it should be considered as well. and that dismissing it out of hand is to ignore a large part of how the literary world functions

Entertainment is not discounted in criticism. Any good subjective criticism will look at what elements of a text create significance for the reader and respond to them. The issue is that "high sales" doesn't equal "more entertaining." The problem with using sales to measure "entertainment" is that it is trying to use the market to assert a subjective value.

Mr. Steak
May 9, 2013

by Jeffrey of YOSPOS

Mel Mudkiper posted:

The issue is that "high sales" doesn't equal "more entertaining." The problem with using sales to measure "entertainment" is that it is trying to use the market to assert a subjective value.

i completely agree with you there.

Karia
Mar 27, 2013

Self-portrait, Snake on a Plane
Oil painting, c. 1482-1484
Leonardo DaVinci (1452-1591)

Before I start, I want to thank you for this, and reinforce the message:

TheGreatEvilKing posted:

Don't touch the poop
The last thread devolved into people invading the Brandon Sanderson thread to post literary masterpieces like "penis". Just don't. Yea, it's funny most of the discussion in that thread is surface level, or that Brandon Sanderson is supposedly writing this great saga about divinity while removing all mystery and wonder from any depiction of gods, but we really don't need to be in there.
I don't like this book. But other people are totally welcome to, and any criticism I have are solely of the book and author, not of its readers. Yes, I am analyzing this book because it's very popular on these forums and I want to see what all the hype is about. But I have no interest in making GBS threads on something that other people like. Let's keep the critique inside the thread and focused on the text.



Way of Kings Part 4

The first three installments of this read-along of Way of Kings focused solely on technical aspects. The first showed that Sanderson's prose is boring and uninteresting. The second took a look at his much-vaunted world-building in the Purelake, a massive lake hundreds of miles across that has lucky fish. The third went through the remained of the Purelake interlude and demonstrated that it has no plot relevance, no thematic importance, and serves no purpose in the story besides acting as a callout to some of Sanderson's other books and his weird extended universe thing.

I am currently on page 309, out of 1252. That puts me almost exactly 25% of the way through this book. Given that a lot of books would be wrapping up by this page count, I think it's worth checking in on each of our MC's and seeing what they've been up to.



Kaladin Stormblessed

quote:

"The world just changed, Gaz. I died down at that chasm. Now you've got my vengeful spirit to deal with."
...
"We're going to start over new, you and I. Clean. And I want you to understand something from the start. I'm already dead. You can't hurt me."
Kaladin. is the commoner son of a backwater Alethi surgeon, who somehow ended up in the army for currently undisclosed reasons. As Sham has pointed out, his character archetype is paladin. He's got a magic fairy that follows him around, and magic powers that he doesn't know about. He got betrayed by his commander and thrown into slavery for undisclosed reasons. He was eventually sold to the Alethi army's bridge crews, basically suicide troops that lead the charge, and fell into serious depression. At the end of act 1, he was just about to kill himself when his fairy convinced him to "try again". After the interlude, he starts trying to get his bridge crew in better shape so they'll survive longer.
Kaladin annoys me. He's just... not very interesting as a character. He's badass, then gets depressed for a while, then feels better, and then he's immediately badass again. Tor did a blog post about how this book is about mental illness and "broken people saving the world." So far I'm not impressed. I'm equally unimpressed by the class warfare theme that Sanderson tries to use Kaladin for. I'll give the book a bit more time before I dig too much into those, though.
Also, his character arc is... not what you'd expect.

quote:

"You were right, Father," Kaladin whispered. "You can't stop a storm by blowing harder. You can't save men by killing others. We should all become surgeons. Every last one of us..."
He spends the rest of the book realizing that, yes, you can save people by killing people.



Shallan Davar

quote:

Sometimes, she wondered how it had come to this. She was the quiet one, the timid one, the youngest of five siblings and the only girl. Sheltered, protected all her life. And now the hopes of her entire house rested on her shoulders.
Their father was dead. And it was vital that remain a secret.
Shallan is a young noblewoman and scholar. Her family is on the verge of financial collapse due to her late father's financial mismanagement. He recently died in currently undisclosed mysterious circumstances (which it's implied Shallan may have had something to do with), but they're trying to hide that. She's trying to raise money for her family by stealing a magical McGuffin from an infamous scholar, Jasnah Kholin. In order to do this, she needs Jasnah to take her on as an apprentice. In act 1, Shallan asked Jasnah to take her on. Jasnah said no. Shallan asked Jasnah again. Jasnah said no, but read some more books and I'll take you on in five years. Shallan goes out and buys some books and Jasnah agrees to take Shallan on. Oh, and we haven't been told it yet, but she's got magic powers. She's got a quick tongue and likes to draw. Oh, and she's ugly!

quote:

She was pale-skinned in an era when Alethi tan was seen as the mark of true beauty, and though she had light blue eyes, her impure family line was manifest in her auburn-red hair. Not a single lock of proper black. Her freckles had faded as she reached young womanhood - Heralds be blessed - but there were still some visible, dusting her cheeks and nose.
Remember, pale skin and red hair are ugly in this book. Shallan may be interesting. Or she may be boring. I don't know. She hasn't done anything yet. I don't remember a thing about her from the last time I read this, so I suspect she remains boring. But there is one positive: she'd undoubtedly dislike her own book.

quote:

"See, she was too discriminating. The body needs many different foods to remain healthy. And the mind needs many different ideas to remain sharp. Wouldn't you agree? And so if I were to only read those silly romances elf books you presume my ambition can handle, my mind would grow sick as surely as your sister-in-law's stomach."
Some hypocritical judgement of other fantasy authors, or a rare moment of self reflection on Sanderson's part? You decide.



Szeth-son-son-Vallano, Truthless of Shinovar

quote:

Szeth-son-son-Vallano, Truthless of Shinovar, wore white on the day he was to kill a king. The white clothing was a Parshendi tradition, foreign to him. But he did as his masters required and did not ask for an explanation.
Szeth is a slave from a country we don't know anything about. He was cast out by his people for some (say it with me: currently undisclosed) betrayal. Now he's bound to follow the orders of anyone holding his Oathstone (literally just some rock. And when I say holding it, I literally mean holding it. Pick it up off the ground, you're his master.) In the prologue, he assassinated King Gavilar with his magic powers at the command of the Parshendi (evil black/red people.) After that, he appeared in the third interlude, where he was bought by a crimelord who's going to use him as a thug (but doesn't know about his magic powers.) But everybody knows that this is just a reminder that he exists until Sanderson decides to make him plot-relevant. After all:

quote:

What would these men say if they knew that the man who emptied their chamber pot was a Shardbearer and a Surgebinder? A Windrunner, like the Radiants of old? The moment he summoned his blade, his eyes would turn from dark green to pale - almost glowing - sapphire, a unique effect of his particular weapon.
Szeth has a lot of potential as a character. There's a lot of pathos that you could get from a slave desperately trying to hide his real capabilities from his master because he doesn't want to kill. But it's spoiled by the fact that Sanderson doesn't give him any page space. It's also spoiled by prose like this.

quote:

Szeth gloried in being wasted; each day he was made to clean or dig instead of kill was a victory. That evening five years ago still haunted him. Before then, he had been ordered to kill - but always in secret, silently. Never before had he been given such deliberately terrible instructions.
Kill, destroy, and cut your way to the king. Be seen doing it. Leave witnesses. Wounded but alive....
Pass.



Dalinar Kholin

quote:

You must unite them, the strange, booming words had told him. You must prepare. Build of your people a fortress of strength and peace, a wall to resist the winds. Cease squabbling and unite. The Everstorm comes.
Dalinar, aka the Blackthorn, is a Highprince of Alethi widely renowned for his skill in combat, and the brother of the deceased King Gavilar. He commands an army in the revenge war against the Parshendi. However, he's getting sick of the other Highprinces' attitudes towards the war, since they're just treating it as a game for political and economic advantage. Rather than focusing on personal advantage, Dalinar is obsessed with protecting the new king out of guilt for failing to protect his brother. He is also researching his brother's dying last words: "You must find the most important words a man can say." Most significantly, he is our first hint that there's actually a plot to this book: he has started having prophetic dreams telling him that something ominous is about to happen.
Dalinar (and thus the actual plot) was only introduced after the interludes. Since he's only gotten twenty or thirty pages so far, I'll withhold judgement on him.



This is a complete summary of everything important that's happened in 310 pages. To summarize: Kaladin got carted around as a slave, tried to kill himself, and now he's trying to get the bridge crew to work out. Shallan begged for an apprenticeship until she got it. Szeth assassinated a king for reasons we don't know. Dalinar had some dreams, wagged his finger at some of the other Highprinces for their gamesmanship, and he's learned that the book actually has a plot. All of this is punctuated with a half dozen different battle scenes, none of which are interesting.

All of the characters have a lot of backstory that they're explicitly refusing to tell us. All pertinent questions about the world at large are ignored until Sanderson decides he wants to reveal them (why did the Parshendi have Gavilar assassinated? What are these weird spren things? What does the prelude set thousands of years ago have to do with anything?) No overarching themes have shown up: classism is only in Kaladin's story. The search for knowledge is only in Shallan's story. And Szeth and Dalinar haven't had enough page time to establish any themes. Everything is just drawn out and out and out to fill up page space.

No wonder this is 1200 pages long. We're 300 pages in and nothing has happened.

Karia
Mar 27, 2013

Self-portrait, Snake on a Plane
Oil painting, c. 1482-1484
Leonardo DaVinci (1452-1591)

Intentional doublepost: is there any feedback on my format here? Due to this book's scale and impact on the genre, I felt it deserved more than just a single effort-post. However, with the shocking lack of content in this book, I couldn't justify a chapter-by-chapter readalong like BotL did for Rothfuss. There really just isn't enough to the story. My compromise was to do a series of posts each focusing on a specific aspect of the writing (prose, characters, worldbuilding, etc. Soon I'll start going into specific themes.) Is this approach working for people? I've still got another 950 pages, so I have plenty of time to tailor this to the thread.

:cripes: Dear god I have another 950 pages to go.

TheGreatEvilKing
Mar 28, 2016





Fine by me.

I really think the darkeyes/light eyes stuff is more of a racism deal, just with eyes instead of skin.

I'll have more to say once you get to a certain part.

Sham bam bamina!
Nov 6, 2012

ƨtupid cat

Karia posted:

Is this approach working for people?
It's good.

Xotl
May 28, 2001

Be seeing you.

Karia posted:

Everything is just drawn out and out and out to fill up page space.

No wonder this is 1200 pages long. We're 300 pages in and nothing has happened.

Oddly, I'd appreciate a little more detail on just how Sanderson manages to waste so many pages. What goes into 300 pages of fluff; what does that fluff look like? Is he a rampant worldbuilder, a repressed dressmaker like Robert Jordan was, someone who likes endless pages of pointless conversation, something else? I'm getting the sense that a lot of it is worldbuilding, but is it literally all storing up future plot seeds?

Xotl fucked around with this message at 01:17 on Mar 18, 2019

A human heart
Oct 10, 2012

Pacho posted:

Also, I've been meaning to talk about this for a while. It seems that in anglo schools there's a lot of emphasis in analyzing a text for themes and while I don't think it's a bad excercise, maybe it's a bit too much for young kids. Here in my country in South America the main focus of literature classes in primary and secondary school is mastery of the language (and that's the metric by which a book is considered proper literature) and you're supposed to just enjoy the books because the language conveys meaning in an aesthetically interesting way; later in school we go a bit into style/prose but I didn't touch thematic analysis until college, when you're taking specific lit courses and wanna delve into theme, genre, symbolism, semiotics, etc.

Somewhere in the old thread someone mentioned that making high school kids in the US do thematic analysis kinda burns them on good books because it makes them think that reading *real* literature is homework and it kinda made sense but since I don't live there I don't have a good perspective on the issue, only my outsider view

it does seem like anglo americans have problems with reading because they dont get told that sentences are the basic building block and that you need to look at that stuff before getting into themes and other similar things. if i was a cool smart man with a lot of time maybe i'd write a big ol effort post about how this is the root of contemporary anglo american fiction being mostly bad.

MockingQuantum
Jan 20, 2012



A human heart posted:

it does seem like anglo americans have problems with reading because they dont get told that sentences are the basic building block and that you need to look at that stuff before getting into themes and other similar things. if i was a cool smart man with a lot of time maybe i'd write a big ol effort post about how this is the root of contemporary anglo american fiction being mostly bad.

I would love to read that, personally.

Mel Mudkiper
Jan 19, 2012

At this point, Mudman abruptly ends the conversation. He usually insists on the last word.

I appreciate the Xenogears ref by the way

Karia
Mar 27, 2013

Self-portrait, Snake on a Plane
Oil painting, c. 1482-1484
Leonardo DaVinci (1452-1591)

Xotl posted:

Oddly, I'd appreciate a little more detail on just how Sanderson manages to waste so many pages. What goes into 300 pages of fluff; what does that fluff look like? Is he a rampant worldbuilder, a repressed dressmaker like Robert Jordan was, someone who likes endless pages of pointless conversation, something else? I'm getting the sense that a lot of it is worldbuilding, but is it literally all storing up future plot seeds?

Worldbuilding is the biggest factor. And it's definitely not all for plot purposes. How much do you want to know about currency? We've gotten probably five pages collectively describing how they use glowing magical gems embedded in glass spheres as money, and how they leave them outside during storms to recharge the magic. Did you know that you can use them as reading lights? Or for lighting during surgery? But it's better if they're all the same kind of gem, because otherwise they give off different colors. Or how about worms? We've got a page describing how to remove worms from their crops so they won't eat all the grain. Or we can talk about the Purelake, and how it's a single lake hundreds of miles wide with lucky fish. Four pages. And of course, we get constant interruptions in the middle of all the battle scenes to talk about how cool their magic armor and swords are. Or we can talk about spren. There's this one kind that shows up around dead chasmfiends. Nobody knows why. I don't know if it's important but now you know! Isn't that interesting?

It all adds up. Really fast.

TheGreatEvilKing posted:

I really think the darkeyes/light eyes stuff is more of a racism deal, just with eyes instead of skin.

I'll have more to say once you get to a certain part.

Not sure what you're referring to, but please share once we get there! I see a classism theme based on how much he plays up the "games of nobles with peasants caught in the middle" aspect for the war. The "go to war to gain renown so you can marry the noble girl" thing also strikes me as more of a class thing. But there's a lot I don't remember about this book.

Whatever it ends up as, I hope it's better than Mistborn's "the lower classes were genetically engineered to be subservient and better at manual labor after we wrecked the ecosystem" thing. That was certainly interesting.

A human heart posted:

if i was a cool smart man with a lot of time maybe i'd write a big ol effort post about how this is the root of contemporary anglo american fiction being mostly bad.

And please do this.

Sarern
Nov 4, 2008

:toot:
Won't you take me to
Bomertown?
Won't you take me to
BONERTOWN?

:toot:

Mel Mudkiper posted:

I appreciate the Xenogears ref by the way

Same.

When it comes to bad authors cramming travelogue segments into their books, are they just ripping off the wrong things from Tolkien? I remember as a child I was overwhelmed by the Lord of the Rings, but after reading modern fantasy, Tolkien seems positively efficient. Or do you all think there's a different origin for that tendency?

Milkfred E. Moore
Aug 27, 2006

'It's easier to imagine the end of the world than the end of capitalism.'
I like seeing a good chapter-by-chapter readthrough, but I think with a lot of sf/f books the moment you start to do that you realize, like I did with Emperor's Blades, there's not really much to talk about without getting very repetitive.

Karia posted:

Worldbuilding is the biggest factor. And it's definitely not all for plot purposes. How much do you want to know about currency? We've gotten probably five pages collectively describing how they use glowing magical gems embedded in glass spheres as money, and how they leave them outside during storms to recharge the magic. Did you know that you can use them as reading lights? Or for lighting during surgery? But it's better if they're all the same kind of gem, because otherwise they give off different colors. Or how about worms? We've got a page describing how to remove worms from their crops so they won't eat all the grain. Or we can talk about the Purelake, and how it's a single lake hundreds of miles wide with lucky fish. Four pages. And of course, we get constant interruptions in the middle of all the battle scenes to talk about how cool their magic armor and swords are. Or we can talk about spren. There's this one kind that shows up around dead chasmfiends. Nobody knows why. I don't know if it's important but now you know! Isn't that interesting?

All of this stuff always feels like it's there to basically pad out a short story into a novel. Like, they write maybe 50,000 words, the publisher says that's not enough for a sf/f novel, and so they just go back and shove words in.

Karia
Mar 27, 2013

Self-portrait, Snake on a Plane
Oil painting, c. 1482-1484
Leonardo DaVinci (1452-1591)

There's this massive army that's been sitting in the middle of a barren wasteland for six years. So maybe those worms I mentioned are going to eat all the grain and there's going to be a famine and this army with overextended supply lines is going to starve?

They literally feed the army with magic. So no, that's never going to be important. It's just random factoids.

Milkfred E. Moore
Aug 27, 2006

'It's easier to imagine the end of the world than the end of capitalism.'

Karia posted:

There's this massive army that's been sitting in the middle of a barren wasteland for six years. So maybe those worms I mentioned are going to eat all the grain and there's going to be a famine and this army with overextended supply lines is going to starve?

They literally feed the army with magic. So no, that's never going to be important. It's just random factoids.

I feel there's an irony here with what Sanderson says about using magic to solve problems.

TheGreatEvilKing
Mar 28, 2016





Karia posted:

Not sure what you're referring to, but please share once we get there! I see a classism theme based on how much he plays up the "games of nobles with peasants caught in the middle" aspect for the war. The "go to war to gain renown so you can marry the noble girl" thing also strikes me as more of a class thing. But there's a lot I don't remember about this book.

I saw it more as racial due to the hereditary biological trait of eye color, but your case for classism is fairly strong too.

It's weird because I remember you can get promoted to Lighteyes so maybe I'm just wrong.

Karia
Mar 27, 2013

Self-portrait, Snake on a Plane
Oil painting, c. 1482-1484
Leonardo DaVinci (1452-1591)

TheGreatEvilKing posted:

I saw it more as racial due to the hereditary biological trait of eye color, but your case for classism is fairly strong too.

It's weird because I remember you can get promoted to Lighteyes so maybe I'm just wrong.

It's... not a perfect analogy. The genetic component is definitely a weak point in my argument. I think there's even something about mixed children have a 50-50 chance of being lighteyes or darkeyes. I think we'll get a lot more about that once Kaladin starts interacting with the lighteyes, wouldn't surprise me if one of the bad guys goes on a rant about how darkeyes are inherently inferior. Or someone might accuse Kaladin of being a reverse-racist because he hates the lighteyes or something. I'll have to see how it plays out, I really don't remember that part of the book (basically all I remember after this point is Kaladin ping-ponging between saving the day and being an idiot.) But ultimately I'll probably make an intersectional/Marxist argument here: racism is one tool that has been exploited to maintain the power of the upper class, and is closely tied to other forms of discrimination.

Supposedly darkeyes can actually become lighteyes if they win great feats in battle. But it hasn't happened in recent memory. Astonishingly, this hasn't happened to Kaladin according to the wiki.

TheGreatEvilKing
Mar 28, 2016





Karia posted:

Supposedly darkeyes can actually become lighteyes if they win great feats in battle. But it hasn't happened in recent memory. Astonishingly, this hasn't happened to Kaladin according to the wiki.

Since you broke out the wiki...

on Kaladin swearing the first vow his eyes turn light. Its implied the lighteyes are the descendants of the Knights Radiant who have superpowers that are vaguely divine?

Karia
Mar 27, 2013

Self-portrait, Snake on a Plane
Oil painting, c. 1482-1484
Leonardo DaVinci (1452-1591)

Oh, hey, not remembering THAT. I'm surprised I didn't see that on the wiki, it's usually obsessively detailed. Or I just missed it while skimming. Bet he throws a temper tantrum about that one.

Yeah, seems like a point in your favor. I'll keep an eye out for that. What the hell is up with Sanderson and genetic exceptionalism? Is this some Mormon thing? Guess I need to watch Book of Mormon again.

Also I don't give a drat about spoilers. I'm reading this book for the second time so I can get the series off my to-read shelf without feeling too guilty. Post whatever evidence you want.

Antivehicular
Dec 30, 2011


I wanna sing one for the cars
That are right now headed silent down the highway
And it's dark and there is nobody driving And something has got to give

Wait, so Sanderson is writing a racism analogy where sufficient virtue can actually turn you into the privileged class? holy hell

FactsAreUseless
Feb 16, 2011

A human heart posted:

it does seem like anglo americans have problems with reading because they dont get told that sentences are the basic building block and that you need to look at that stuff before getting into themes and other similar things. if i was a cool smart man with a lot of time maybe i'd write a big ol effort post about how this is the root of contemporary anglo american fiction being mostly bad.
please do this

Silver2195
Apr 4, 2012

Antivehicular posted:

Wait, so Sanderson is writing a racism analogy where sufficient virtue can actually turn you into the privileged class? holy hell

That's not actually how it works.

Wielding a Shardblade turns your eyes light. This is not actually heritable, IIRC, and doesn't even necessarily mean that you're virtuous. People with naturally light eyes were originally seen as superior by association with them, but this has been forgotten, to the point where it's implied that people misread references to "lighteyes" in ancient texts as referring to everyone with light eyes when it originally referred only to the Shardblade-wielding Knights Radiant. While in theory you could become a lighteyes by defeating an enemy Shardblade holder in battle, it's implied that this happened rarely, if ever, in practice before Kaladin, and as Amaram's actions show, it's doubtful that a darkeyes who defeated an enemy Shardbearer would actually be allowed to keep the Shardblade. It was basically a bootstraps myth to keep the darkeyes in line.

Silver2195 fucked around with this message at 15:44 on Mar 18, 2019

Patrick Spens
Jul 21, 2006

"Every quarterback says they've got guts, But how many have actually seen 'em?"
Pillbug

Mel Mudkiper posted:

Measuring the success of a product only speaks to its qualities as a product. You cannot measure to the artistic merit of something through the lens of product and consumption. The idea that we can is part of the cultural brainwashing of capitalism.

But success as a product is connected to the qualities of the experience. Commercial success is a proxy for entertainment, not entertainment itself. If you want to make the argument that broad popularity isn't the same thing as artistic merit, I'd agree with you. But the idea that capitalist brainwashing is the only connection between "people spent money on a thing" and, "people liked a thing" is nonsense.

Antivehicular posted:

Wait, so Sanderson is writing a racism analogy where sufficient virtue can actually turn you into the privileged class? holy hell

The legitimization and de-legitimization of authority is a running theme throughout Stormlight. Dalinar and Gavilar are both jumped up thugs who seek to legitimize their power by becoming the kind of virtuous rulers who would have deserved to be kings. As a class, lighteyes are the reverse. Greedy and violent thugs who cling to the signifiers of legitimacy even after the knowledge of what light eyes meant has been forgotten.

Patrick Spens fucked around with this message at 17:42 on Mar 18, 2019

Mel Mudkiper
Jan 19, 2012

At this point, Mudman abruptly ends the conversation. He usually insists on the last word.

Patrick Spens posted:

But the idea that capitalist brainwashing the the only connection between "people spent money on a thing" and, "people liked a thing" is nonsense.

I have bad news for you

Flesnolk
Apr 11, 2012
You can’t blame literally everything on “capitalism exists”.

Mel Mudkiper
Jan 19, 2012

At this point, Mudman abruptly ends the conversation. He usually insists on the last word.

Flesnolk posted:

You can’t blame literally everything on “capitalism exists”.

I also have bad news for you

Patrick Spens
Jul 21, 2006

"Every quarterback says they've got guts, But how many have actually seen 'em?"
Pillbug

Flesnolk posted:

You can’t blame literally everything on “capitalism exists”.

I mean, we can't stop him.

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Eugene V. Dubstep
Oct 4, 2013
Probation
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Flesnolk posted:

You can’t blame literally everything on “capitalism exists”.

Name one thing I can't blame on capitalism.

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