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The Something Awful Forums > The Finer Arts > Creative Convention > Writing Feedback
 
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FormerPoster
Aug 5, 2004

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I actually read a dozen pages or so when you first posted your story, but it was so far afield from what I'm used to reading that I really have no idea if it's good or bad. Slow moving stories that are more about interior struggles than specific events are...they're hard to pull off. Really hard. 9 times out of 10, they're boring as poo poo, and 1 time out of 10 they're completely nonsensical. I'm pleased to report yours mostly made sense, but as for anything beyond that, I have nothing useful to offer you. Sorry.

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