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Eeyup, Avan sure is the boisterous anime protagonist type with that scene with Chloe.
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Isn't it already considering the Valkyrs?
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Dec 6, 2019 19:20
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You posted the last chunk of the combat section twice, also there is a pair of repeat images in the beginning of the Chloe event when they're talking about the painting and the end of the Anisette event.
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Dec 15, 2019 18:43
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ON THE GREEN! I wonder we can evolve this even further by just having the summaries and still get the point across.
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Jan 28, 2020 20:30
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You messed up one of the portraits at the end of the first conversation. Although it's kinda fun to see Cosette shouting that she doesn't need any friends.
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Feb 9, 2020 18:58
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Well that was dumb and somewhat tactless. Also you messed up one of the portraits during the Avan punches Zeri conversation and the tags are a bit of a mess at one place too.
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Feb 22, 2020 09:49
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A wee bit compressed if anything. Also Julianna going "Buuh... politics?" while talking to Zeri was probably the only genuinely amusing bit instead of just of the stuff that was really meant to be funny.
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Feb 25, 2020 11:59
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You may need to go over the bread conversation bit again. I spotted at least one typo:quote:Um, do you mind if I ask what made you two dedide to stay here on campus? And an incorrect headshot Edit: Last one got fixed.
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Feb 27, 2020 22:51
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 Ya know, I don't think that's how you heal PTSD. Just saying.
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Feb 29, 2020 02:46
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One of the portraits in the demolitions conversation is off, it's Avan instead of Brixy. Also its Attack not Atack. Update on previous page by the way.
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Mar 2, 2020 00:04
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Poil posted:
 Bravo.
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Mar 2, 2020 16:08
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: Wha? What happened? Where am I?
1: Hey, Zeri!
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I'm amazed you didn't went with "I'm going to pop my Uber" for when Aliasse decides to fight.
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