Fiction Farm to Table: Artisanal crits ITT

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The Something Awful Forums > The Finer Arts > Creative Convention > Fiction Farm to Table: Artisanal crits ITT

Hi thread,

I wrote this enemies to lovers piece as a fun writing exercise in a discord and was hoping to get some crits here as well. Its very much first draft, so be warned. Also sorry it's not a novel, I don't have the stamina to write those.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/16YJnQ1WiZd6CFzFf5FEZr81u6xsob-uNTutDws1g8GQ/edit?usp=sharing

# ¿ Feb 20, 2023 18:56

# ¿ May 14, 2024 16:14

What are you looking for in terms of critique. Do you want a hype train? An Awesome, Bored, Disbelief, Confused method, or just reactions?

I just want to see if you can get a good sense of the characters and pacing. Is there anything I should add? Slow down on?

# ¿ Feb 21, 2023 17:49

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