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 Week 543 CritsGiven all the earnest chat last thread re: doing crits, I have decided to dust off my highly complex crit sheet of six questions and use it on your stories! Template available here. I say it a lot but the bottom line is you have been qualified to crit since you learned how to read and need no further permissions from anyone. Give the template a try if you're stuck for how to start. Anyway. Admirality Flag Albatrossy_Rodent flerp Idle Amalgam Thranguy rohan Flyerant BeefSupreme
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#lunaIRC.moonlighters 900 words Prompt: Strange Logs (week 179) lungulate (420grazeit@marecrisium.net.luna) has joined #moonlighters <lungulate> right so which of you wankers released *lions* into mare crisium?!? <lungulate> youse all know how hard it’s been getting the zebra pop stable and im p sure that poo poo comes out *my* o2 ration *solar_pride shrugs. <solar_pride> Could have been anybody. <regolith||groundpoundin> sounds like a u problem tbqh, just put up a fence lmao <lungulate> not funny rocksucker, you havent seen them jump <Albedo> Yeah, Lun’s right. I ‘cri-see’ why she won’t take this ‘lion’ down… *regolith||groundpoundin sighs *lungulate sighs *solar_pride sighs. <regolith||groundpoundin> jfc alb get a life <Albedo> Isn’t that what we’re all doing? lungulate quit (time to print a big fuckoff gun) <solar_pride> She’s joking, right? <solar_pride> Right??? ### Albedo (humoroushumus@new_horizons.org.luna) has joined #moonlighters <Albedo> Reg, do me a favour? <regolith||o2crackin> depends <Albedo> Could you see your way to maybe not destroying my lichen? I’m trying to build a soil profile for the entire southern hemisphere. <regolith||o2crackin> ur lichen? <regolith||o2crackin> theyre in my quarry u clown <Albedo> Okay… I just think it sort of defeats the point of what we’re doing here if you’re going to feed it all into a crusher. <regolith||o2crackin> aye sure ill just shut this down and we can all asphyxiate precisely 6.32 sols later lmao <regolith||o2crackin> take it up with solar added loads of big mouthbreathers without asking anyone pride <lungulate> dont worry, im *working* on that *solar_pride smacks their head off the desk. <solar_pride> Reg, mate, that DM was in confidence. <Albedo> We all knew it was you. <solar_pride> Apex predators are a critical part of a balanced ecosystem! <solar_pride> And as God is my witness, have you seen them run in low grav? *lungulate is now known as lungulate-has-a-magrifle <lungulate-has-a-magrifle> i will soon <regolith||o2crackin> drat lol <solar_pride> Lungulate if you touch so much as a hair of their glorious flowing manes… <lungulate-has-a-magrifle> <<< try me bitch <solar_pride> Oh I will. <Albedo> Take it to DMs, you two. I had to flush my entire cache after last time. <lungulate-has-a-magrifle> prude <regolith||o2crackin> anyway alb heres my offer <regolith||o2crackin> ill shift the outflow pipes and blow ur spores away from my site <regolith||o2crackin> but u need to let me do my thing down here ok or this whole shebang goes up in a lack of flames <regolith||o2crackin> because no oxygen <Albedo> I guess that’s fair. But I’m still not ‘lichen’ where this is going. lungulate-has-a-magrifle quit (no) solar_pride quit (booo) regolith||o2crackin quit (u did that on purpose) ### <Albedo> Lovely breeze this morning. solar_pride (halunamatata@leo.co.luna) has joined #moonlighters <solar_pride> LICHEN??? solar_pride quit (connection lost) <regolith||windmakin> u lichen deez nuts lol <Albedo> Bit lowbrow, but I respect the effort. solar_pride (halunamatata@leo.co.luna) has joined #moonlighters <solar_pride> WHY IS IT GROWING ALL OVER MY TRANSMITTER, ALBEDO. <lungulate> your capslock too looks like <regolith||windmakin> just scrape it off <solar_pride> Says the dude who literally invented atmospheric circulation to get rid of it. solar_pride quit (connection lost) <regolith||windmakin> ok nobody grass on me <Albedo> I haven’t sown so much as one blade of it in months mate. <regolith||windmakin> thats not what that means u tube <lungulate> he knows *regolith||windmakin facepalms solar_pride (halunamatata@leo.co.luna) has joined #moonlighters solar_pride quit (connection lost) solar_pride (halunamatata@leo.co.luna) has joined #moonlighters <solar_pride> This sucks. <Albedo> That’s just not true. It’s high quality stuff, Earth make. <Albedo> You might say it’s the real ‘upper crust’ of lichen. <solar_pride> Listen here you standup comedy washout solar_pride quit (connection lost) ### regolith||nitrofixin (bawjaws@oxygen_nation.net.luna) has joined #moonlighters <regolith||nitrofixin> did i just hear a gun go off <regolith||nitrofixin> nice <solar_pride> HOW is that ‘nice’? <regolith||nitrofixin> sufficient atmo density pal <solar_pride> So very glad your priorities are set correctly. <regolith||nitrofixin> ty ty yw <lungulate> keep posting nerds, im reloading <Albedo> What’s your tally? <lungulate> fukken *none*, canny bastards wont stop jumping <Albedo> I guess life really does find a way. <Albedo> To not get shot on the Moon by a magrifle. <solar_pride> Okay Lun, you win. Everyone, I’m sorry I released the lions without asking. Got a bit carried away. <solar_pride> But please let me just come tranquillise most of them? And leave a few in-place at your discretion? Otherwise you’ll end up having to shoot a lot of zebra later. <lungulate> … <lungulate> fine <lungulate> but im doing the tranqing <solar_pride> How about we do it together? <solar_pride> Been a while since we hung out… <lungulate> ok tho if any of them go for us i reserve the right to light em up like gods arsehole <solar_pride> Agreed. <Albedo> Awww. That’s sweet. <regolith||nitrofixin> dinnae spoil the moment u eejit ### <lungulate> not sure these baobabs look right <lungulate> https://marecrisium.net.luna/mypics/work/wtfisthis.png <Albedo> No kidding. Looks like trees in this gravity grow real weird. <solar_pride> At least they made it past the ‘get eaten by out-of-control zebra’ phase, huh? FANCY THAT. <lungulate> yeah yeah ok sure fine <solar_pride> <3 <regolith||cloudseedin> i like it tbh <regolith||cloudseedin> proper ancient horror from before the dawn vibes <Albedo> Yeah. Almost Lovecruftian. <Albedo> *Lovecraftian. <regolith||cloudseedin> THIS MF SAID LOVECRUFTIAN <solar_pride> LOVECRUFTIAN <lungulate> LOVECRUFTIAN regolith||cloudseedin has changed the channel topic: ‘ALMOST LOVECRUFTIAN’ <Albedo> Oh I see how it is.
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Cephas posted:I think we still need a third judge for this week. Any bites? If so please post in Thunderdome proper. Thanks! 
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INTERPROMPT I swear by all that's sweet and holy that I'll- 80 words
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