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I gave it a look! This is definitely the "I tried writing something for the first time" prose. At this level the feedback is going to be less "this, this and this needs fixing" and more "well this is all newbie-spew, just keep writing, you'll eventually get better". I'd suggest joining the Thunderdome for a few weeks to see if the format works for you in encouraging you to write. You'll have more luck getting line-by-line critiques there as well. If you don't enjoy TD or if you're just having fun writing your litrpg, I'd suggest working on writing that story start to finish. Come up with an outline of 50-60-ish scenes and just crank it out, you'll learn a lot just from the process of finishing it. Good luck!
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