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thornghost posted:If I know one thing about women, it is that they are ALWAYS waking up. Like once a day at the very least. This seems quite realistic. I tend to have the opposite problem.
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# ? Sep 28, 2012 16:17 |
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Every chapter should start out with the POV character being woken up by morning sunlight. All of them
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# ? Sep 28, 2012 16:55 |
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thornghost posted:Fixed it. There's your recipe right there. Blade_of_tyshalle posted:Perhaps you've heard of anal fisting, Arbite. But what about anal fisting with a roasted glazed lamb shank, followed by a delicious rear end-to-mouth? Goddamn it people, I'm not the one who decided they should be 13 and 15. I'm transcribing WCW commentary in lieu of tits because otherwise we're all going get arrested instead of rich. These are the palate cleansing/afterglow chapters. Here, have some Major Gunns and come back when you've calmed down.
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# ? Sep 28, 2012 17:03 |
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Which characters are you writing about? Only Ardi and Brendan (and their respective partners) are underaged. Sensa is good to go.
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# ? Sep 28, 2012 19:14 |
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Uh, all the girls in those tapestries are over eighteen.
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# ? Sep 28, 2012 21:19 |
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IRQ posted:I tend to have the opposite problem. You're a girl goon? Well, it all makes sense.
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# ? Sep 28, 2012 21:27 |
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Wait, how would that make anything more understandable
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# ? Sep 28, 2012 21:28 |
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whowhatwhere posted:Wait, how would that make anything more understandable A_H is used to women being repulsed by him.
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# ? Sep 28, 2012 21:35 |
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A GLISTENING HODOR posted:A_H is used to women being repulsed by him. Women aren't repulsed by me and I'm not into them anyway.
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# ? Sep 28, 2012 21:56 |
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whowhatwhere posted:Wait, how would that make anything more understandable I'm not even sure A_H knows what he thought he meant there.
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# ? Sep 28, 2012 21:58 |
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Man, everything I write is still coming out straightlaced, even when it's trying to intentionally be bad (the opposite of 50 Shades, I guess??). And everything posted here is too ridiculous, so it ends up right in the middle of: straight erotic -> too over the top -> so bad that it's terribly bad that it's funny.
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# ? Sep 28, 2012 22:06 |
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SaviourX posted:Man, everything I write is still coming out straightlaced, even when it's trying to intentionally be bad (the opposite of 50 Shades, I guess??). And everything posted here is too ridiculous, so it ends up right in the middle of: How hard can it be? Just crib from Stephanie Meyer. e: there should totally be a POV character so heartbroken by a breakup that there's three blank pages.
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# ? Sep 28, 2012 22:09 |
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A GLISTENING HODOR posted:e: there should totally be a POV character so heartbroken by a breakup that there's three blank pages.
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# ? Sep 28, 2012 22:21 |
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Urdnot Fire posted:That can be Brendan after he finds out whatsherface is really a guy. It'll make his later acceptance that much more poignant. Motion carries.
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# ? Sep 28, 2012 22:26 |
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A GLISTENING HODOR posted:Randroid aside, look at that nerd's ergonomic keyboard with trackball. He doesn't just have a trackball. He swapped out the standard ball for an 8-ball. I know and love that trackball - Kensington Turbo Mouse. It is a god amongst mice. And not only is it discontinued, but they didn't write win7 drivers for it. Truly a sad sad day for me. Their new version sucks rear end, and they made the ball slightly smaller to accommodate their terrible solution to page scrolling ( a ring around the ball ). Not only does the new model feel cheap - but you can no longer swap in a pool ball. That mouse was the only thing that really helped my carpal tunnel. I learned to mouse with both hands to use it. It is one of the best interfaces ever. And now its gone. Feel all my nerd rage.
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# ? Sep 29, 2012 00:29 |
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Trackballs sucked, clit mice were the best.
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# ? Sep 29, 2012 00:48 |
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kcroy posted:He doesn't just have a trackball. He swapped out the standard ball for an 8-ball. I know and love that trackball - Kensington Turbo Mouse. Masturbationrage.txt
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# ? Sep 29, 2012 02:07 |
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Arbite posted:Goddamn it people, I'm not the one who decided they should be 13 and 15. I'm transcribing WCW commentary in lieu of tits because otherwise we're all going get arrested instead of rich. These are the palate cleansing/afterglow chapters. Here, have some Major Gunns and come back when you've calmed down. I'm gonna be reading your chapters first because I'm very intrigued on how the hell you're working this stuff into it. Will there be a Lord Poppa of the Pump too?
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# ? Sep 29, 2012 04:35 |
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savinhill posted:I'm gonna be reading your chapters first because I'm very intrigued on how the hell you're working this stuff into it. Will there be a Lord Poppa of the Pump too? BAH GAWD KING, POUND FOR POUND, JOFFREY BARATHEON IS THE BEST drat ATHLETE IN WESTEROS! WHAT'S THIS? *HOLLA IF YA HEAR ME* YOUNG GRIFF HAS RUN IN THE RING, KING, HE'S RUN INTO THE RING AND, GODDAMN, THIS HAS TURNED INTO A SLOBBERKNOCKER. WHO IS THIS? MAGIC UNBELIEVABLE MOVE BAH GAWD, KING, HE'S PULLED OFF AN UNBELIEVABLE, UNDESCRIBABLE MOVE! KING? KING? ...KING? BAH GAWD, HE'S ASCENDED THE IRON THRONE IN ONE STROKE! WHAT A KING! WHAT AN UNBELIEVABLE ATHLETE! IS IN FACT ROBERT STRONG
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# ? Sep 29, 2012 04:56 |
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You gotta mention Jeffrey's 42" pythons, brother.
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# ? Sep 29, 2012 05:00 |
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Blade_of_tyshalle posted:You gotta mention Jeffrey's 42" pythons, brother. Nah, he got future endeavoured. YOUNG GRIFF
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# ? Sep 29, 2012 05:06 |
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You turds better be writing during the outage.
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# ? Sep 29, 2012 19:49 |
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I've done it! Clyde is dead. Chapter 5: Brendan posted:
It wasn't the fall, it was cerebral hemorrhage killed the beast. Poor thing.
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# ? Sep 30, 2012 00:16 |
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thornghost posted:Guys if you're needing inspiration to get to writing your Game of Bones chapters, just listen to this dramatic reading of Sandra Hill's "Rough and Ready". Oh my god this is like the fountain of youth for sexually frustrated and horrible writers. I feel refreshed and eager to write more abominable filth. Are you guys needing my special services?
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# ? Sep 30, 2012 10:39 |
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Fatkraken posted:Every chapter should start out with the POV character being woken up by morning sunlight. All of them Its called a motif you fools. Pedants.
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# ? Sep 30, 2012 10:41 |
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Every chapter, except for one towards the end. The audience will be freaked out and not really understand why. "She awoke suddenly to inky blackness, stars twinkling outside the window. Sensa's mind flooded with lustly thoughts as her womanhood flooded with moisture."
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# ? Sep 30, 2012 13:27 |
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"She awoke staring at the earth below her. The big black and long monolith having given her new life, a new being. She saw the universe begin. Also her snooch got wet."
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# ? Sep 30, 2012 15:24 |
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Shageletic posted:Oh my god this is like the fountain of youth for sexually frustrated and horrible writers. I feel refreshed and eager to write more abominable filth. Are you guys needing my special services? Yes, please take any chapter on the list that's hasn't been completed! I think SaviourX is actually working on his though so just don't choose one of his. Call it when you decide and then write about some quivering meat staffs!
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# ? Sep 30, 2012 16:23 |
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Well, with with chapters 5 and 20 out of the way, I think I'll keep what I got going and grab chapter 10 unless Badly Jester gainsays me in the next 24 hours.
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# ? Sep 30, 2012 17:21 |
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Azure_Horizon posted:You're a girl goon? Well, it all makes sense. You, sir, e: someone needs to change Rape Jake's name to Jape Jake. lobotomy molo fucked around with this message at 23:32 on Sep 30, 2012 |
# ? Sep 30, 2012 23:12 |
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I haven't been to this thread in ages and what
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# ? Oct 1, 2012 01:57 |
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Fly Molo posted:e: someone needs to change Rape Jake's name to Jape Jake.
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# ? Oct 1, 2012 02:12 |
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Urdnot Fire posted:The (absolute) fucker got himself banned. Goodnight, sticky prince, we barely knew ye but ye were a flash of light in the darkness, the light from a big retarded rapist lighting his own farts on fire.
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# ? Oct 1, 2012 03:22 |
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NSFW for GRRM bifocals (also Ros tits and Theon dick): GRRM vs. JK Rowling, the sequel.
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# ? Oct 1, 2012 11:42 |
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whowhatwhere posted:Ros tits Seriously, Rowling. The main character spent 90% of her screen time naked and wiping cum off/out of herself. And GRRM isn't even top tier for pervert poo poo in fantasy.
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# ? Oct 1, 2012 16:20 |
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A GLISTENING HODOR posted:And GRRM isn't even top tier for pervert poo poo in fantasy. Hell, Urban Fantasy//Paranormal Romance are technically fantasy works in good standing. On the other hand, her new book gets blurbs like "Dark, devious and devilish, JK Rowling's first post-Potter novel, The Casual Vacancy, reads like an episode of Postman Pat written by the makers of The League of Gentlemen." I would totally read the hell out of that if it didn't cost a ridiculous amount of money.
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# ? Oct 1, 2012 16:25 |
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I'll pre-empt IRQ here and question why you would pay for books anymore? Because, uh, uh, libraries, yes. Libraries.
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# ? Oct 1, 2012 16:31 |
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Kindle versions are cheaper, too.
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# ? Oct 1, 2012 16:44 |
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I heard Rowling's new book is pretty awful.
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# ? Oct 1, 2012 16:47 |
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IRQ posted:I heard Rowling's new book is pretty awful. I just looked it up and it sounds terrifyingly dull. From Wikipedia: Wikipedia posted:When Barry Fairbrother dies unexpectedly in his early forties, the little town of Pagford is left in shock. Pagford is, seemingly, an English idyll, with a cobbled market square and an ancient abbey, but what lies behind the pretty façade is a town at war. Rich at war with poor, teenagers at war with their parents, wives at war with their husbands, teachers at war with their pupils.... Pagford is not what it first seems. And the empty seat left by Barry on the parish council soon becomes the catalyst for the biggest war the town has yet seen. Who will triumph in an election fraught with passion, duplicity and unexpected revelations?
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