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Tollymain
Jul 9, 2010

by Jeffrey of YOSPOS

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SuperHappy
Aug 22, 2004

feel the rhythm with your hands

Mafiosa posted:

Thanks! :unsmith: I'm glad you're enjoying it.

I'm enjoying it too! :)

Elysiume
Aug 13, 2009

Alone, she fights.
This is really cool and I'm sad that there isn't more.

Avshalom
Feb 14, 2012

by Lowtax

Elysiume posted:

This is really cool and I'm sad that there isn't more.
There soon will be, I think the latest page was only yesterday and it updates at least once a week, usually thrice as per its schedule except when there's some sort of IRL disaster.

tinaun
Jun 9, 2011

                  tell me...
Note that the story is actually ending on friday. There's 2 pages left.

Tollymain
Jul 9, 2010

by Jeffrey of YOSPOS
... one page, right?

e: oh, the author said it's a two-page update on her blog

on another note, claire must really like ice cream :downs:

Tollymain fucked around with this message at 17:00 on Nov 20, 2014

Matlock Birthmark
Sep 24, 2005

I wanted this to happen!!
Soiled Meat
Huh, that's interesting in this Monster Pulse update.

Maybe Violet isn't the actually in charge of this situation after all. It looks her monster is influencing/controlling her.

Tollymain
Jul 9, 2010

by Jeffrey of YOSPOS
well so much for my theory of "violet's just kind of a weirdo" :stonk:

SlothfulCobra
Mar 27, 2011

The heart want wants what it wants. :v:

Literally Kermit
Mar 4, 2012
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SlothfulCobra posted:

The heart want wants what it wants. :v:

The heart wants to be a Stand and have bizarre adventures :black101:

Red Bones
Aug 9, 2012

"I think he's a bad enough person to stay ghost through his sheer love of child-killing."


Octopus Pie is crammed full of little one panel gags like that, it's a fantastic comic to re-read and examine all the stuff going on in it.

Babysitter Super Sleuth
Apr 26, 2012

my posts are as bad the Current Releases review of Gone Girl

Literally Kermit posted:

The heart wants to be a Stand and have bizarre adventures :black101:

「Bad Brains」 is clearly a powerful ability, but violet's critical mistake was forgetting that Bina is the Jotaro in this situation and 「Owner of a Lonely Heart」is this universe's version of Star Platinum.

100 HOGS AGREE
Oct 13, 2007
Grimey Drawer
Apothecia is over!

Tenebrais
Sep 2, 2011

100 HOGS AGREE posted:

Apothecia is over!

Overall I'm left kind of wondering what it was all really about. It was engaging but it didn't seem to say very much.

100 HOGS AGREE
Oct 13, 2007
Grimey Drawer
I feel like it was a story where a girl basically groomed herself into being a vessel for a weird fungus hate alien through the decisions she made based on the interactions she had with it. I think at the end he didn't take her over or consume her like he did to the region he desolated but they actually merged together.

Jackard
Oct 28, 2007

We Have A Bow And We Wish To Use It
Overall, don't think I liked it very much.

Tunicate
May 15, 2012

Red Bones posted:

Octopus Pie is crammed full of little one panel gags like that, it's a fantastic comic to re-read and examine all the stuff going on in it.

Are they all Boulet?

Feline Mind Meld
Jun 14, 2007

I'm pretty creeped out

Tunicate posted:

Are they all Boulet?

The resemblance is actually pretty uncanny :mmmhmm:

But no that is supposed to be a ton of Marek-looking motherfuckers. He's the ex she's running to forget about.

Pick
Jul 19, 2009
Nap Ghost

Tenebrais posted:

Overall I'm left kind of wondering what it was all really about. It was engaging but it didn't seem to say very much.

It felt like one of the stories that is mostly buildup but can't really have a satisfying payoff. That's my impression having followed it through.

Matlock Birthmark
Sep 24, 2005

I wanted this to happen!!
Soiled Meat

Tenebrais posted:

Overall I'm left kind of wondering what it was all really about. It was engaging but it didn't seem to say very much.

Ya, that's how I feel as well. I'm going to consider it more like a short web comic story. It built up a lot then ended quickly.
That said, given the details we were provided, I'm not sure where else you'd take the story, so I'm not really that upset at how it ended.

Jackard
Oct 28, 2007

We Have A Bow And We Wish To Use It
It was pretty much "welp" the webcomic. Lots of things going wrong but you just don't give a gently caress

Jackard fucked around with this message at 23:28 on Nov 21, 2014

AriadneThread
Feb 17, 2011

The Devil sounds like smoke and honey. We cannot move. It is too beautiful.


I feel like it would have had more impact without the 'flash forward to the future' bit
I think I remember someone saying that something like that had been the original plan??? Am I remembering that right?
I dunno, I didn't dislike exactly, and the art was pretty good throughout. I liked the color scheme.

Tollymain
Jul 9, 2010

by Jeffrey of YOSPOS
i suspect judging by that last bit of dialogue (and jessie's characterization in general) that the fusion is not unequal. she didn't kill the monster, but she very well may have neutralized most of its potential for ill. which is about as good an ending as she could hope for, really.

Avshalom
Feb 14, 2012

by Lowtax

100 HOGS AGREE posted:

Apothecia is over!
A happy ending! :neckbeard:

Captain Bravo
Feb 16, 2011

An Emergency Shitpost
has been deployed...

...but experts warn it is
just a drop in the ocean.
I took away something completely different from Apothecia. She's not "merging" or "hosting" the monster, she's becoming one. Like Hogs said, the monster was grooming her the whole time, but I think it was grooming her to take it's place. It's basically "How to train your protege (Who will become an intergalactic mass-murderer)" the webcomic.

Tollymain
Jul 9, 2010

by Jeffrey of YOSPOS
On the other hand, the artist said this. I don't think the writer has chimed in on that though

Avshalom
Feb 14, 2012

by Lowtax

Tollymain posted:

On the other hand, the artist said this. I don't think the writer has chimed in on that though
I'm probably just oversensitive because of, you know, webcomics as a whole, but that comment string kind of makes it sound like the artist has a body-snatching fetish and we all just read the most subtle and elaborate porn in history.

thatbastardken
Apr 23, 2010

A contract signed by a minor is not binding!
she does some homestuck art and likes the character who shares a body with someone else.

thatbastardken
Apr 23, 2010

A contract signed by a minor is not binding!
i don't think it's a sex thing

ah who the gently caress am i kidding of course it is.

good comic though

Captain Bravo
Feb 16, 2011

An Emergency Shitpost
has been deployed...

...but experts warn it is
just a drop in the ocean.
I have transcribed my thoughts on this turn of events in the form of haiku.

The real ending was
a happy ending for the
Author... But not us.

fun hater
May 24, 2009

its a neat trick, but you can only do it once
Stare into the abyss and the abyss stares back, etc etc?

Morbi
Aug 7, 2013

CONTRABAND

Avshalom posted:

I'm probably just oversensitive because of, you know, webcomics as a whole, but that comment string kind of makes it sound like the artist has a body-snatching fetish and we all just read the most subtle and elaborate porn in history.

Speaking as someone who was close to Shelby (and Taz, to a much lesser degree) for a couple of years in college, yeah, that definitely sounds like something the two of them would do, unabashedly.
I can't say I personally cared for Apothecia much, especially after the timeskip. They took 89 pages to tell a horror story that probably could have been told much more powerfully in 15 or 20.

Then again, I'm hardly a stranger to pacing issues myself, so throwing stones from glass houses, I suppose.

Jackard
Oct 28, 2007

We Have A Bow And We Wish To Use It
Its no Em Caroll thats for sure

Pick
Jul 19, 2009
Nap Ghost

Jackard posted:

Its no Em Caroll thats for sure

I picked up her book, and it's one of the best things I've seen--absolutely gorgeous and paced perfectly--but I wish there were a little more tonal variation on her endings, because by the end of the volume I felt there wasn't much sting. If, for example, the final story had turned out very lighthearted, that might reflect poorly on the volume as a whole, but one happy ending somewhere along the line would have put me in the position to feel more suspense.

Numero6
Oct 10, 2012

ここは地の果て 流されて俺
今日もさすらい 涙も涸れる
ブルーゲイル

Avshalom posted:

A happy ending! :neckbeard:

Now they can do space adventures!

Cat Mattress
Jul 14, 2012

by Cyrano4747
"Dodger of taxes" is legitimately the worst crime Astra is being accused of in Astral Aves.

Oxxidation
Jul 22, 2007
The alien's dialogue in Apothecia was great but everything else about it was a goddamn mess, even the art (adult Jessie's proportions change from page to page and there's not a whole lot of actual detail except in the alien's many, many faces). Jessie's motivations were really poorly communicated, which is odd because "blow up world-eating alien cuz gently caress you" is a fairly understandable motive, and the ending was just a way to ram in the "THEY'RE NOT SO DIFFERENT AFTER ALL, SEE, SEE" conceit one more time.

Still, it was short and updated often and ended early. And again, the alien's dialogue. Got to steal those lines for something sometime.

Literally Kermit
Mar 4, 2012
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Cat Mattress posted:

"Dodger of taxes" is legitimately the worst crime Astra is being accused of in Astral Aves.

Astra's worst worst crime is heart thief because she has STOLEN OUR HEARTS.

SlothfulCobra
Mar 27, 2011

Does anybody else have trouble seeing Petunia's dad in Poppy O'Possum as something other than an owl?

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Literally Kermit
Mar 4, 2012
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SlothfulCobra posted:

Does anybody else have trouble seeing Petunia's dad in Poppy O'Possum as something other than an owl?

He is like some kinda combination of a cat, owl, and teddy bear.

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