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Tezzor
Jul 29, 2013
Probation
Can't post for 3 years!
Continuing Remedial Cinematography Chat:

There is a concept in photography called the "rule of thirds." Basically the idea is that you want the component parts of your image to fit along vertical and horizontal 1/3 divisions of the image, and the image be structured so its component elements be centrally bisected on these imaginary lines or have their edges touching these lines and appear mostly inside the imaginary slices they create.




Now with this in mind let's look at some memorable images from the last two Star Wars movies:



Rey and Finn run from an explosion. The vertical lines roughly correspond to the beginning of Rey and Finn in the frame. The top horizontal line frames Rey's face and touches the top of Finn's head. The bottom line corresponds roughly to the horizon. The characters are shot so the character in front has her head in the upper third, body in the middle third, and legs in the bottom third. The character behind has his upper body in the middle third and his lower body in the lower third.



Kylo and stormtroopers menace a village. The top horizontal line doesn't correspond to much, maybe part of the tower. The bottom horizontal line again corresponds to the horizon (funny that) on the left and is an imaginary line cutting through all the doomed villagers' necks. The left vertical line neatly bisects Kylo. The right vertical borders the star warsy tower thingy in the background.



Obi-Wan and Evil Anakin fight in front of a lava explosion. The top line corresponds to nothing. The bottom line roughly marks their crotches if we're being generous. The left line bisects Obi-Wans's foot, but his foot is nowhere near most of his silhouette. The right line corresponds to nothing.



Anakin kneels before Monster Mash and pledges his loyalty to the graveyard smash. The focus of the frame is on Palpatine. The top line is too low to frame Palpy's head, too high to border Anakin's head, and otherwise corresponds to nothing, a pretty impressive feat in a frame with so much poo poo in the background. The bottom line is too low to correspond to the start of Palpatine's legs, a bit too low to border the thing to Anakin's left, and too high to border the line of color in the back The left line successfully borders Anakin's silhouette and with the bottom line defines him in top and bottom. The right line corresponds to nothing.

Tezzor fucked around with this message at 00:37 on Jan 20, 2016

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Cnut the Great
Mar 30, 2014

Red posted:

One of them in the Clone Wars CGI series is voiced by George Takei. And his character is a morbidly obese Neimoidian.

So I'd enjoy seeing that guy pop up.

Nute Gunray is the best. He's completely in over his head and after he gets trounced in Episode I he seems to be the only villain who even remotely realizes it. Over the course of the movies he spends most of his time loudly breaking the fourth wall by pointing out how dumb everyone's being by acting like silly, mustache-twirling bad guys from a 1930's Republic adventure serial.

Nute posted:

"This is getting out of hand…now there are two of them!"

Nute posted:

"She can’t do that! Shoot her or something!"

Nute posted:

"Safe? Chancellor Palpatine managed to escape your grip, General. Without Count Dooku, I have doubts about your ability to keep us safe!"

If all the bad guys had only just listened to Nute (and if he'd listened to himself), they'd all still be alive right now. He's like the General Tagge of the prequels:

General Tagge posted:

And what of the Rebellion? If the Rebels have obtained a complete technical readout of this station, it is possible, however unlikely, that they might find a weakness and exploit it.

He knows exactly what kind of movie he's in. He's like, "Hello? We're the baddies, guys! We might want to start actually subverting some villainous tropes at some point if we want to make it to Episode IV."

Cnut the Great
Mar 30, 2014

Tezzor posted:

Continuing Remedial Cinematography Chat:

There is a concept in photography called the "rule of thirds." Basically the idea is that you want the component parts of your image to fit along vertical and horizontal 1/3 divisions of the image, and the image be structured so its component elements be centrally bisected on these imaginary lines or have their edges touching these lines and appear mostly inside the imaginary slices they create.




Now with this in mind let's look at some memorable images from the last two Star Wars movies:



Rey and Finn run from an explosion. The vertical lines roughly correspond to the beginning of Rey and Finn in the frame. The top horizontal line frames Rey's face and touches the top of Finn's head. The bottom line corresponds roughly to the horizon. The characters are shot so the character in front has her head in the upper third, body in the middle third, and legs in the bottom third. The character behind has his upper body in the middle half and his lower body in the lower half.



Kylo and stormtroopers menace a village. The top horizontal line doesn't correspond to much, maybe part of the tower. The bottom horizontal line again corresponds to the horizon (funny that) on the left and is an imaginary line cutting through all the doomed villagers' necks. The left vertical line neatly bisects Kylo. The right vertical borders the star warsy tower thingy in the background.



Obi-Wan and Evil Anakin fight in front of a lava explosion. The top line corresponds to nothing. The bottom line roughly marks the where their legs leave their torso if we're being generous. The left line bisects Obi-Wans's foot, but his foot is nowhere near most of his silhouette. The right line corresponds to nothing.



Anakin kneels before Monster Mash and pledges his loyalty to the graveyard smash. The focus of the frame is on Palpatine. The top line is too low to frame Palpy's head, too high to border Anakin's head, and otherwise corresponds to nothing, a pretty impressive feat in a frame with so much poo poo in the background. The bottom line is too low to correspond to the start of Palpatine's legs, a bit too low to border the thing to Anakin's left, and too high to border the line of color in the back The left line successfully borders Anakin's silhouette and with the bottom line defines him in top and bottom. The right line corresponds to nothing.

LOL. Dude, you literally don't know what you're talking about. Please stop embarrassing yourself. Trust me. This is the wrong thread.

Natural 20
Sep 17, 2007

Wearer of Compasses. Slayer of Gods. Champion of the Colosseum. Heart of the Void.
Saviour of Hallownest.

RBA Starblade posted:

The joke was it's dense in what it gets across as opposed to whatever was crammed in it.

Then we're in complete agreement. It's /really/ hard to tell if people are joking in this thread.

Tezzor
Jul 29, 2013
Probation
Can't post for 3 years!

Prolonged Priapism posted:



Help, I'm so confused!

If this scene was in the prequels it would appear through a window while Kylo and Han talked about their feelings on a couch

RBA Starblade
Apr 28, 2008

Going Home.

Games Idiot Court Jester

Yorkshire Tea posted:

Then we're in complete agreement. It's /really/ hard to tell if people are joking in this thread.

Yep, I was just being silly. :v:

quote:

LOL. Dude, you literally don't know what you're talking about. Please stop embarrassing yourself. Trust me. This is the wrong thread.

I'm surprised we've gone this long before breaking out the mspaint honestly.

quote:

If this scene was in the prequels it would appear through a window while Kylo and Han talked about their feelings while walking down a hall

Dr. Poz
Sep 8, 2003

Dr. Poz just diagnosed you with a serious case of being a pussy. Now get back out there and hit them till you can't remember your kid's name.

Pillbug

Prolonged Priapism posted:



Help, I'm so confused!

You must be if you're trying to use a scene from the final confrontation to refute the core argument.

Waffles Inc.
Jan 20, 2005

Tezzor posted:

If this scene was in the prequels it would appear through a window while Kylo and Han talked about their feelings on a couch

i think you'll find that this scene is in star wars episode 7 the force awakens though???

Neo Rasa
Mar 8, 2007
Everyone should play DUKE games.

:dukedog:

Frackie Robinson posted:

I'm iffy on the look of some stuff in the prequels, but Coruscant is consistently striking and beautiful. On Coruscant business isn't a distraction from the setting, it is the setting.

I was going to say something similar to this. Like do half the people in this thread die from sensory overload heart attack if they walk into a major city?

Mechafunkzilla
Sep 11, 2006

If you want a vision of the future...

Tezzor posted:

Continuing Remedial Cinematography Chat:

There is a concept in photography called the "rule of thirds." Basically the idea is that you want the component parts of your image to fit along vertical and horizontal 1/3 divisions of the image, and the image be structured so its component elements be centrally bisected on these imaginary lines or have their edges touching these lines and appear mostly inside the imaginary slices they create.




Now with this in mind let's look at some memorable images from the last two Star Wars movies:



Rey and Finn run from an explosion. The vertical lines roughly correspond to the beginning of Rey and Finn in the frame. The top horizontal line frames Rey's face and touches the top of Finn's head. The bottom line corresponds roughly to the horizon. The characters are shot so the character in front has her head in the upper third, body in the middle third, and legs in the bottom third. The character behind has his upper body in the middle half and his lower body in the lower half.



Kylo and stormtroopers menace a village. The top horizontal line doesn't correspond to much, maybe part of the tower. The bottom horizontal line again corresponds to the horizon (funny that) on the left and is an imaginary line cutting through all the doomed villagers' necks. The left vertical line neatly bisects Kylo. The right vertical borders the star warsy tower thingy in the background.



Obi-Wan and Evil Anakin fight in front of a lava explosion. The top line corresponds to nothing. The bottom line roughly marks the where their legs leave their torso if we're being generous. The left line bisects Obi-Wans's foot, but his foot is nowhere near most of his silhouette. The right line corresponds to nothing.



Anakin kneels before Monster Mash and pledges his loyalty to the graveyard smash. The focus of the frame is on Palpatine. The top line is too low to frame Palpy's head, too high to border Anakin's head, and otherwise corresponds to nothing, a pretty impressive feat in a frame with so much poo poo in the background. The bottom line is too low to correspond to the start of Palpatine's legs, a bit too low to border the thing to Anakin's left, and too high to border the line of color in the back The left line successfully borders Anakin's silhouette and with the bottom line defines him in top and bottom. The right line corresponds to nothing.

It's actually kind of amazing to witness such a potent combination of confidence and ineptitude. The rule of third is not prescriptive, nor is it an objective metric of quality.

According to your criteria, this is a badly composed shot:

Mechafunkzilla fucked around with this message at 19:28 on Jan 19, 2016

ZoCrowes
Nov 17, 2005

by Lowtax

Tezzor posted:

Continuing Remedial Cinematography Chat:

Anakin kneels before Monster Mash and pledges his loyalty to the graveyard smash. The focus of the frame is on Palpatine. The top line is too low to frame Palpy's head, too high to border Anakin's head, and otherwise corresponds to nothing, a pretty impressive feat in a frame with so much poo poo in the background. The bottom line is too low to correspond to the start of Palpatine's legs, a bit too low to border the thing to Anakin's left, and too high to border the line of color in the back The left line successfully borders Anakin's silhouette and with the bottom line defines him in top and bottom. The right line corresponds to nothing.

I'm going to go out on a limb and say that David Tattersall and George Lucas are a bit past Remedial Cinematography. You do realize there's a lot more to shot construction than the rule of thirds or slapping a grid in your viewfinder right? That's something that is taught in Photo I to orient people to the basics of framing a shot. You're making yourself look foolish. I'm not a huge fan of the prequels but you can't deny the mastery of craft that went into them.

corn in the fridge
Jan 15, 2012

by Shine
You're comparing still photographs to frames from a movie I'm not sure how strictly the "rule of thirds" applies here

piratepilates
Mar 28, 2004

So I will learn to live with it. Because I can live with it. I can live with it.



That Kubrick, his movies sure always look like poo poo, probably should have read a textbook and learned about this thirds rule

Empress Theonora
Feb 19, 2001

She was a sword glinting in the depths of night, a lance of light piercing the darkness. There would be no mistakes this time.

Neo Rasa posted:

I was going to say something similar to this. Like do half the people in this thread die from sensory overload heart attack if they walk into a major city?

quote:

Nancy is Plato's playground. Ernie Bushmiller didn't draw A tree, A house, A car. Oh, no. Ernie Bushmiller drew THE tree, THE house, THE car. Much has been made of the "three rocks." Art Spiegelman explains how a drawing of three rocks in a background scene was Ernie's way of showing us there were some rocks in the background. It was always three. Why? Because two rocks wouldn't be "some rocks." Two rocks would be a pair of rocks. And four rocks was unacceptable because four rocks would indicate "some rocks" but it would be one rock more than was necessary to convey the idea of "some rocks."

A Nancy panel is an irreduceable concept, an atom, and the comic strip is a molecule. With Five Card Nancy we create new molecules out of Ernie's atoms.

Jerry Moriarty, artist of "Jack Survives," says: "I believe there is a formula of Hume, Humor and Humest. Ernie Bushmiller and I are Hume."

-Scott McCloud, "Five Card Nancy"

Nancy loving owns but not literally every frame of a Star Wars movie needs to be composed like a Bushmiller panel.

Waffles Inc.
Jan 20, 2005

yeah the rule of thirds post is maybe the worst post in the whole thread, and that includes posts in the segment of the thread wherein someone tried to convince everyone that the starkiller isn't a death star

HUNDU THE BEAST GOD
Sep 14, 2007

everything is yours
Nancy owns, and the absolute funniest thing is that those rule of thirds posts just show that the prequel sample shots are exceptionally composed.

Neo Rasa
Mar 8, 2007
Everyone should play DUKE games.

:dukedog:

Tezzor posted:

Continuing Remedial Cinematography Chat:

There is a concept in photography called the "rule of thirds." Basically the idea is that you want the component parts of your image to fit along vertical and horizontal 1/3 divisions of the image, and the image be structured so its component elements be centrally bisected on these imaginary lines or have their edges touching these lines and appear mostly inside the imaginary slices they create.




Now with this in mind let's look at some memorable images from the last two Star Wars movies:



Rey and Finn run from an explosion. The vertical lines roughly correspond to the beginning of Rey and Finn in the frame. The top horizontal line frames Rey's face and touches the top of Finn's head. The bottom line corresponds roughly to the horizon. The characters are shot so the character in front has her head in the upper third, body in the middle third, and legs in the bottom third. The character behind has his upper body in the middle half and his lower body in the lower half.



Kylo and stormtroopers menace a village. The top horizontal line doesn't correspond to much, maybe part of the tower. The bottom horizontal line again corresponds to the horizon (funny that) on the left and is an imaginary line cutting through all the doomed villagers' necks. The left vertical line neatly bisects Kylo. The right vertical borders the star warsy tower thingy in the background.



Obi-Wan and Evil Anakin fight in front of a lava explosion. The top line corresponds to nothing. The bottom line roughly marks the where their legs leave their torso if we're being generous. The left line bisects Obi-Wans's foot, but his foot is nowhere near most of his silhouette. The right line corresponds to nothing.



Anakin kneels before Monster Mash and pledges his loyalty to the graveyard smash. The focus of the frame is on Palpatine. The top line is too low to frame Palpy's head, too high to border Anakin's head, and otherwise corresponds to nothing, a pretty impressive feat in a frame with so much poo poo in the background. The bottom line is too low to correspond to the start of Palpatine's legs, a bit too low to border the thing to Anakin's left, and too high to border the line of color in the back The left line successfully borders Anakin's silhouette and with the bottom line defines him in top and bottom. The right line corresponds to nothing.

If you have time, could you come to the Comic Book Movie Megathread and offer your thoughts and insight on the cinematography of the 2012 film The Avengers?

SuperMechagodzilla
Jun 9, 2007

NEWT REBORN

Tezzor posted:

lots of words

You're absolutely nailing the "it's different!", but floundering badly on the "it's worse!" - let alone the "it's bad!" That's why come across as an odd pattern-recognition thing to us: looking at a picture of a fire and counting the number of embers. I'm talking the very definition of "failing to see the forest for the trees".

Like, we understand that you like Ralph McQuarrie's design work, but there's only so much you can accomplish by saying he didn't work on a given movie. McQuarrie didn't work on a lot of movies. So when it comes to interpreting the films in front of you, it's all the same stuff about "CGI" and wholesale-rejecting rejecting the basic premise of the films (they're a big campy costume drama interspersed with Lord of The Rings battles).

Tezzor posted:

rule of thirds

That's really not how the rule works. The rule of thirds means that, in a basic assymetrical composition, the most important thing onscreen should rest around one of the four crosses (+).

It's not about just lining up the lines, and it doesn't apply when the subject is deliberately placed in the center of the frame!

Neurolimal
Nov 3, 2012

computer parts posted:

It tells me a lot about Jakku, it's not like she blew up the AT-AT herself.

Life in solitude. simple life. Without family. War zone. Possible war orphan. Cruel and unforgiving world; a survivor.

You can make more inferrences from there, and it's a three second shot in a large sequence intended to inform you about Rey's character with a bare minimum of exposition.

TFA is a great movie

Guy A. Person
May 23, 2003

Tezzor posted:

Anakin kneels before Monster Mash and pledges his loyalty to the graveyard smash. The focus of the frame is on Palpatine.

I didn't think this post could get any better but then you quoted RLM directly. Well played.

Empress Theonora
Feb 19, 2001

She was a sword glinting in the depths of night, a lance of light piercing the darkness. There would be no mistakes this time.

HUNDU THE BEAST GOD posted:

Nancy owns, and the absolute funniest thing is that those rule of thirds posts just show that the prequel sample shots are exceptionally composed.

I put it to the thread that the Battle of Yavin in A New Hope is the Nanciest sequence in Star Wars. You even have the ships all operating in groups of three!

RBA Starblade
Apr 28, 2008

Going Home.

Games Idiot Court Jester

corn in the fridge posted:

You're comparing still photographs to frames from a movie I'm not sure how strictly the "rule of thirds" applies here

It was about half of the first Star War thread, and should have stayed there.

computer parts
Nov 18, 2010

PLEASE CLAP

Neurolimal posted:

Life in solitude. simple life. Without family. War zone. Possible war orphan. Cruel and unforgiving world; a survivor.

You can make more inferrences from there, and it's a three second shot in a large sequence intended to inform you about Rey's character with a bare minimum of exposition.

You can have long shots without lots of exposition.

Example:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1gpXMGit4P8

Neurolimal
Nov 3, 2012

Neo Rasa posted:

I was going to say something similar to this. Like do half the people in this thread die from sensory overload heart attack if they walk into a major city?

You can not have epilepsy and still prefer to not have your TV constantly strobe white flashes of light every .5 seconds.

You also don't need to have cancer to hate cigarettes.

Or have healthy hands and still dislike hand-writing.

Neurolimal
Nov 3, 2012

computer parts posted:

You can have long shots without lots of exposition.

Example:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1gpXMGit4P8

You can. This doesn't make short shots bad.

HUNDU THE BEAST GOD
Sep 14, 2007

everything is yours

Empress Theonora posted:

I put it to the thread that the Battle of Yavin in A New Hope is the Nanciest sequence in Star Wars. You even have the ships all operating in groups of three!

I just wanted to say Nancy owns, and how much I like the comic strip Nancy.

computer parts
Nov 18, 2010

PLEASE CLAP

Neurolimal posted:

You can. This doesn't make short shots bad.

Arguably what I posted is also a short shot. It's just not "blink and you'll miss it".

Neurolimal
Nov 3, 2012

Guy A. Person posted:

I didn't think this post could get any better but then you quoted RLM directly. Well played.

Let's be fair here, if somebody tells me they didn't at least smile at that line from the video then they are either a liar or inhuman

Tezzor
Jul 29, 2013
Probation
Can't post for 3 years!

Image one: to the left, a bunch of indistinct aliens who don't matter looking over a scene of a muddy, washed-out brown. The horizon is a jagged mess. The only color comes from the engines of starships going off to war, filled with people neither we nor anyone in the setting particularly care about. There are thousands of moving things in frame, some moving on the horizontal axis and some on the vertical. The horizontal and right vertical does not conform to the rule of thirds.

Image two: In center, the main officer of the bad guys. No motion in the background. A stark black and white color scheme with small bursts of red. The top third is sky above horizon, the middle third troops and Hux, the bottom third subcommand. The left third is troops, the middle third is command, the right third is troops.

Image three: a muted background with a small, non-moving line of red, and a red-and-black color scheme. Left bottom corner is Vader's helmet, middle is negative space, right upper corner is Kylo's helmet.

Image four: Good differentiation between foreground and background. In background, dead cartoon monster, moving plumes of smoke coming from at least 6 sources, ground littered with comical dead robots, detailed desert arena. In center, little kid Boba Fett is sad because of decapitated fanservice. This is never relevant later. Does not conform to rule of thirds.

Tezzor fucked around with this message at 00:41 on Jan 20, 2016

HUNDU THE BEAST GOD
Sep 14, 2007

everything is yours

Neurolimal posted:

Let's be fair here, if somebody tells me they didn't at least smile at that line from the video then they are either a liar or inhuman

I ain't like it because that's my favorite part of that movie.

Mechafunkzilla
Sep 11, 2006

If you want a vision of the future...

Neurolimal posted:

You can. This doesn't make short shots bad.

Short shots aren't inherently bad, but I did find myself being annoyed that the good shots in TFA are barely given any time to be taken in before being interrupted by a cut or by unnecessary sweeping camera movements. This is something I often feel watching JJ Abrams movies. It's a movie that looks better in stills than in motion.

Tezzor
Jul 29, 2013
Probation
Can't post for 3 years!

Mechafunkzilla posted:

It's actually kind of amazing to witness such a potent combination of confidence and ineptitude. The rule of third is not prescriptive, nor is it an objective metric of quality.

According to your criteria, this is a badly composed shot:


Uh, no it isn't? It conforms to the rule entirely?

Waffles Inc.
Jan 20, 2005

Tezzor posted:

Image one: to the left, a bunch of indistinct aliens who don't matter looking over a scene of a muddy, washed-out brown. The horizon is a jagged mess. The only color comes from the engines of starships going off to war, filled with people neither we nor anyone in the setting particularly care about. There are thousands of moving things in frame, some moving on the horizontal axis and some on the vertical. The horizontal and right vertical does not conform to the rule of thirds.

Image two: In center, the main officer of the bad guys. No motion in the background. A stark black and white color scheme with small bursts of red. The top third is sky above horizon, the middle third troops and Hux, the bottom third subcommand. The right third is troops, the middle third is command, the right third is troops.

Image three: a muted background with a small, non-moving line of red, and a red-and-black color scheme. Left bottom corner is Vader's helmet, middle is negative space, right upper corner is Kylo's helmet.

Image four: Good differentiation between foreground and background. In background, dead cartoon monster, moving plumes of smoke coming from at least 6 sources, ground littered with comical dead robots, detailed desert arena. In center, little kid Boba Fett is sad because of decapitated fanservice. This is never relevant later. Does not conform to rule of thirds.

if you're trying to be an SMG style gimmick-poster you're failing in a pretty cringe-y way op

Tezzor
Jul 29, 2013
Probation
Can't post for 3 years!

Guy A. Person posted:

I didn't think this post could get any better but then you quoted RLM directly. Well played.

Yeah, what a terrible thing for me to do, to cite a funny line from an extremely popular, comprehensive and influential film criticism that captures and explores the general consensus on the issue. What was I thinking. Surely there's some inane SMG barf I could quote that's more up your alley

Tezzor fucked around with this message at 19:52 on Jan 19, 2016

Natural 20
Sep 17, 2007

Wearer of Compasses. Slayer of Gods. Champion of the Colosseum. Heart of the Void.
Saviour of Hallownest.
This is amazing, we've got a new SMG but he agrees with my opinions.

Tezzor did you grow up on Earth 2?

Is your real name UltraMechaGodzilla?

Ravenfood
Nov 4, 2011

Tezzor posted:

Image one: to the left, a bunch of indistinct aliens who don't matter looking over a scene of a muddy, washed-out brown. The horizon is a jagged mess. The only color comes from the engines of starships going off to war, filled with people neither we nor anyone in the setting particularly care about. There are thousands of moving things in frame, some moving on the horizontal axis and some on the vertical. The horizontal and right vertical does not conform to the rule of thirds.

Image two: In center, the main officer of the bad guys. No motion in the background. A stark black and white color scheme with small bursts of red. The top third is sky above horizon, the middle third troops and Hux, the bottom third subcommand. The right third is troops, the middle third is command, the right third is troops.

Image three: a muted background with a small, non-moving line of red, and a red-and-black color scheme. Left bottom corner is Vader's helmet, middle is negative space, right upper corner is Kylo's helmet.

Image four: Good differentiation between foreground and background. In background, dead cartoon monster, moving plumes of smoke coming from at least 6 sources, ground littered with comical dead robots, detailed desert arena. In center, little kid Boba Fett is sad because of decapitated fanservice. This is never relevant later. Does not conform to rule of thirds.
The first picture obviously and directly visually links the Geonosian facility to the clones embarking and continues the theme, created by the visuals, that the clone and droid armies are two sides of the same coin.

The second is gorgeous and effective, no question. Hux is maybe small and overshadowed by the 4 dark-cloaked people behind him if I'm being picky.

The third image contains a completely unnecessary red line that does nothing to highlight anything and only distracts from the two helmets on opposite sides of the screen. A good shot, though.

As for the fourth, yeah, there's stuff going on in the background, but it is so clearly background that it is easy to ignore as background. The direct center of the frame contains all of the motion and the focus. Whether Fett's later lack of action is important or not is irrelevant to the shot: there's some excellent visual imagery in the prequels that the dialogue, acting, and plot fail to live up to. In addition, we are discussing composition. Your example of the McQuarrie crashed speeder pilot is a good one, but if the film later went on to completely ignore the effect created by the shot, it would in no way invalidate the artistry of the shot itself. Identifying the focus of the scene is simple and it shows, visually, that the Jedi war machine actually leaves devastation and orphans behind it is simple, no matter how sanitized the Kaminoans or Jedi leadership would like it to be.

Tezzor
Jul 29, 2013
Probation
Can't post for 3 years!

Ravenfood posted:

The first picture obviously and directly visually links the Geonosian facility to the clones embarking and continues the theme, created by the visuals, that the clone and droid armies are two sides of the same coin.

Yeah, I guess there's something to this, but that comes back to: is that a good idea? Robots vs. clones? Could you possibly create a war between people the audience cares about less?

quote:

As for the fourth, yeah, there's stuff going on in the background, but it is so clearly background that it is easy to ignore as background. The direct center of the frame contains all of the motion and the focus. Whether Fett's later lack of action is important or not is irrelevant to the shot: there's some excellent visual imagery in the prequels that the dialogue, acting, and plot fail to live up to. In addition, we are discussing composition. Your example of the McQuarrie crashed speeder pilot is a good one, but if the film later went on to completely ignore the effect created by the shot, it would in no way invalidate the artistry of the shot itself. Identifying the focus of the scene is simple and it shows, visually, that the Jedi war machine actually leaves devastation and orphans behind it is simple, no matter how sanitized the Kaminoans or Jedi leadership would like it to be.

Corrections: The devastation it leaves behind is of a cartoon monster, and a bunch of silly robots, on a desert planet. It leaves orphaN, singular, behind, specifically because his evil mercenary dad chose to take him into battles and war zones and then died after picking a fight with the strongest magic samurai. The Jedi are unabashedly the good guys by any metric and were forced into fighting this war by a dark wizard who looks like death.

Basebf555
Feb 29, 2008

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Fun Shoe
I was under the impression that the rule of thirds is a basic theory of photography that every beginner should learn, but that it's not uncommon for good directors to move beyond it as they develop their own personal style of composing shots.

For instance someone mentioned earlier that the rule of thirds doesn't apply when the subject is purposely placed in the center of the frame, which is a pretty big exception. There are directors(Wes Anderson) who've made their whole career out of centering the frame, so its really not an indicator of shot quality once you start talking about the best in the business.

Waffles Inc.
Jan 20, 2005

Tezzor posted:

Yeah, I guess there's something to this, but that comes back to: is that a good idea? Robots vs. clones? Could you possibly create a war between people the audience cares about less?

both the robots and clones are being used as tools; they're both slaves to causes that don't even know the real reasons they're fighting. it's overtly political.

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Serf
May 5, 2011


Tezzor posted:

Yeah, I guess there's something to this, but that comes back to: is that a good idea? Robots vs. clones? Could you possibly create a war between people the audience cares about less?

Droids vs. clones is a very interesting idea. Two armies of slaves forced to fight a war they have no stake in? I care a lot about what happens to them.

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