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Kalli posted:This is probably Bomani Jones' best and most predictive work: Jordan Shipley. 
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Played around with the art in this one, let me know what you guys think http://www.thedrawplay.com/comic/prince-amukamara-to-the-jags/
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Febreeze posted:Played around with the art in this one, let me know what you guys think I was going to mention something. It's not bad, just different
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Mar 15, 2016 16:55
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The premise is hilarious
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Febreeze posted:Played around with the art in this one, let me know what you guys think
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Febreeze posted:Played around with the art in this one, let me know what you guys think
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Mar 15, 2016 17:26
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I like your new style a whole lot. Reminds me of those HQ web comics. Do what you want obviously.
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I like the new art style for some stuff and the old art style for other stuff. I have been no help. I bid you adieu.
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Mar 15, 2016 17:31
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I like the new style, but your usual style might be better for certain types of jokes.
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Mar 15, 2016 17:33
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I like the new stuff better than the old stuff.
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Mar 15, 2016 17:35
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Old is better. Change is bad!
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It won't replace the old style, this one was kind of an accident. I thought it looked terrible but then I turned off the linework layer and it looked great, so I cleaned it up and saved a lovely looking comic and made it kind of interesting. Glad to see some people like it, so maybe I'll incorporate elements of it in the future. vvvv I'll test that on the next comic you get a cameo in, Eifert Febreeze fucked around with this message at 18:41 on Mar 15, 2016 |
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I think you should use the linework from this one and the color/shading from mustard's comics.
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Mar 15, 2016 18:05
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I think it kinda dulls down your art style
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Febreeze posted:Played around with the art in this one, let me know what you guys think Change is bad. Also every new stadium sucks, Dick Butkus is still the greatest Linebacker ever, I hate the new Dr. Who and there hasn't been a good JRPG since the Super Nintendo.
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I think that art style works best with no coloring and just shading
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Febreeze posted:Played around with the art in this one, let me know what you guys think Hahah, loving "Pear Inc."
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Athanatos posted:I think it kinda dulls down your art style I agree with this.
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Mar 15, 2016 19:44
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I like the old style better, the new one seems kind of... blobby?
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Febreeze posted:Played around with the art in this one, let me know what you guys think I feel you should rastafy them by ... ten percent or so.
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NC-17 posted:I feel you should rastafy them by ... ten percent or so. So just a few dredlocks?
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I think the new art style could work with flashbacks or introspections, but the old art style is iconic.
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Crunkjuice posted:I think the new art style could work with flashbacks or introspections, but the old art style is iconic. Yeah, I feel like I am watching like season 1 Simpsons with the new art style. It's not terrible, it's just...different.
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I don't like it. It looks like an Adobe Flash comic circa 2003.
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Shath Hole posted:Yeah, I feel like I am watching like season 1 Simpsons with the new art style. It's not terrible, it's just...different.  Man I am showing my age
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sam bradford lmao posted:Those Simpson animations during early episodes of Tracy Ullman I fail to see a problem my friend 
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Mar 15, 2016 20:38
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Looks OK to me, kind of like a Flash animated cartoon. It's always interesting to see when artists experiment.
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It makes them look a little more professional. Not professional as in "better" or "superior" more professional as in "I could see a newspaper cartoon or a major blog cartoon looking like this" It does come off as a little colder though and as Athanatos said it kind of seems duller by comparison. Maybe use it for NFLol if that's still a thing?
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Mar 15, 2016 22:28
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I like it. I also think it'd be cool to experiment with different styles every once in a while just to mix things up. Your original style is still the best though.
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Like one of the cool things about webcomics is watching the artist grow through the years as their craft improves from better tech and more practice. If you want to change things up, absolutely go for it. Penny Arcade is a good example (but a bad comic) because the guy when he started was loving awful and then he became legitimately really good EDIT: Jesus christ I checked the site or the first time in like two years and what the gently caress is this
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I think it looks good and you should put your hands into a running lawn mower if you ever consider drawing your old style again.
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Mel Mudkiper posted:Like one of the cool things about webcomics is watching the artist grow through the years as their craft improves from better tech and more practice. If you want to change things up, absolutely go for it. I don't believe they even do the comics anymore. They only really work with the PAX stuff anymore, and even then it's mostly delegation.
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Crunkjuice posted:I think the new art style could work with flashbacks or introspections, but the old art style is iconic.
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Mel Mudkiper posted:Like one of the cool things about webcomics is watching the artist grow through the years as their craft improves from better tech and more practice. If you want to change things up, absolutely go for it. We're gonna fight, mother fucker  
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Chilichimp posted:We're gonna fight, mother fucker Dr McNinja domination 24/7/365
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Penny Arcade had a time when it was cool and watching the artist dramatically improve was awesome but they are phoning it in so hard now
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Looking at the new comic again, what might be also something to consider is that it doesn't immediately look like your art. Considering how often your poo poo is stolen having a really identifiable style probably helps a lot
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Febreeze posted:Penny Arcade had a time when it was cool and watching the artist dramatically improve was awesome but they are phoning it in so hard now Yeah PA's art isn't all that appealing now, but he kept experimenting with his art style over the years and came up with some cool styles over the years for different themes. Keep trying different things...I like the Prince comic and I'd like to see you try different styles for different types of comics.
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Febreeze posted:Penny Arcade had a time when it was cool and watching the artist dramatically improve was awesome but they are phoning it in so hard now Holy poo poo when did they turn into Rescue Rangers?
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Chilichimp posted:We're gonna fight, mother fucker Why is tetris underwater?
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