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SlothfulCobra posted:...so I guess the writer forgot about the murder conviction that Feral's still got under her belt. That or Patrick killed everybody who cared about it. Her agreement was most likely leniency in exchange for "donate a bunch of organs," not "endure surgical perma-hell." Feral's still keeping up her end of the bargain, so the agreement stands.
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Paladinus posted:It was the judge who didn't convict the rape bro. And as we all know when a judge dies, all their verdicts are annulled. i think that only happens with vampire judges.
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Calaveron posted:Comic would've been redeemed if instead of the dullest, most trite and clichéd song they had gone with Sir Mix a lots classic It worked in Waynes World.
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# ? Nov 5, 2016 01:23 |
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tbh i think the writer has realised that feral is by far the most popular character and obviously decided to give her more emphasis in the story than she otherwise would have had. but i don't think he understands WHY she's the most popular character and her having the most complicated and interesting story was a happy accident that he'll now blow out of the water by showing us too much and getting ham all over everything
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# ? Nov 5, 2016 02:52 |
Cool so they're just going to drop that whole plot line. On to the lesbian action I guess. It's really kind of weird that like almost the entire fanbase of this comic distilled feral to "she got tortured BUT MORE IMPORTANTLY SHE'S GAY SHE SHOULD gently caress EVERY FEMALE CHARACTER". Most of the comments either keep trying to tell the writer to pair her up with anything with tits, or arguing with people who think Allison was in the wrong by somehow acting like Feral didn't do the whole operation thing willingly and it seems like the authors are starting to buy into the fan approach to things?
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Avshalom posted:tbh i think the writer has realised that feral is by far the most popular character and obviously decided to give her more emphasis in the story than she otherwise would have had. but i don't think he understands WHY she's the most popular character and her having the most complicated and interesting story was a happy accident that he'll now blow out of the water by showing us too much and getting ham all over everything this is my feeling as well and it makes me extremely sad
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# ? Nov 5, 2016 03:09 |
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It's been really apparent that the authors aims for this comic way outstrip his writing for a long time now
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# ? Nov 5, 2016 03:33 |
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Avshalom posted:but i don't think he understands WHY she's the most popular character she's a lesbian in a webcomic
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Hogge Wild posted:she's a lesbian in a webcomic Dude this is what webcomics ARE.
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# ? Nov 5, 2016 05:24 |
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Falstaff posted:Her agreement was most likely leniency in exchange for "donate a bunch of organs," not "endure surgical perma-hell." Feral's still keeping up her end of the bargain, so the agreement stands. Yeah, maybe, but there's no halfway house, no giving back the possessions she came in with, no parole officer to check in on her, no acknowledgement of anything. You don't just let somebody walk no questions asked with a plea bargain, especially not a bargain predicated on continued service. It's also pretty lovely from the perspective of Feral's personal welfare too. Are they paying Feral any for her organs, or do they just expect her to go off and find a job and apartment on her own? You'd think they'd give their golden goose something better than just turning her loose to bunk in a college student's apartment.
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# ? Nov 5, 2016 05:30 |
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I am far from averse to adorable gay girls in my webcomics, and I'm normally loathe to call gay romance pandering cuz come on almost any media representation is usually a step up... But yeah this is pandering. A gay bridge too gay far.
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# ? Nov 5, 2016 08:38 |
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something something death of the author
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Captain Oblivious posted:I am far from averse to adorable gay girls in my webcomics, and I'm normally loathe to call gay romance pandering cuz come on almost any media representation is usually a step up... Does it make it better if the artist is a lesbian herself?
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# ? Nov 5, 2016 11:05 |
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Speaking as someone who generally thinks lesbians are incredibly awesome, the idea of an actual gay woman reading this page and not wincing multiple times, let alone drawing it and lettering the dialogue, is really disheartening e: I just got my best friend and the person whom I most admire freed from a torture prison like nobody in history has ever had to endure, my first question is not "What would you like to do" it's "Do you want to go to the gay meat market and get laid?" e: hell how about "Do you want some privacy for a while" Flesh Forge fucked around with this message at 11:32 on Nov 5, 2016 |
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Daphnaie posted:Does it make it better if the artist is a lesbian herself? No, it actually raises more questions.
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# ? Nov 5, 2016 11:34 |
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Daphnaie posted:Does it make it better if the artist is a lesbian herself? The author is a man. You may know him as Clevin in the comic.
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# ? Nov 5, 2016 12:16 |
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this is a dumb comic uuuuugh
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# ? Nov 5, 2016 13:27 |
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e: nah, not funny
BravestOfTheLamps fucked around with this message at 19:51 on Nov 5, 2016 |
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Strong Female Protagonist: A Gay Bridge Too Far
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# ? Nov 6, 2016 10:07 |
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lol look at this loving horseshit
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# ? Nov 8, 2016 09:10 |
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Holy poo poo gently caress this bullshit. This is the dumbest bullshit I've seen.
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# ? Nov 8, 2016 09:12 |
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Synthbuttrange posted:
That's peak webcomic. Maybe Max has also enhanced Feral's lesbian pheromones, so now all women fall in love with her. Imagine that twist. Paladinus fucked around with this message at 09:25 on Nov 8, 2016 |
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Lmao it looked like they were going somewhere with dealing with the consequences of her actions (even if it was just an internal struggle) with the whole puking into a garbage can thing but nope! Time for a few strips about how forcing people to do what you want is extremely cool and good and turns out great and your ~gay friend~ is gonna get some tail I only discovered this comic a few updates ago when someone brought it up in the general webcomics thread and I've never had so little desire to read the archives of a comic before. And I've read a lot of dumb poo poo I knew was bad going in.
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# ? Nov 8, 2016 09:30 |
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Hey feral cut off your leg and give it to her
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# ? Nov 8, 2016 09:49 |
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Atahualpa posted:Not really. Here are the highlights: I remember this episode of Dilbert.
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Synthbuttrange posted:Hey feral cut off your leg and give it to her Yeah do it
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# ? Nov 8, 2016 11:27 |
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I don't have the slightest clue what Ferals dialect is supposed to be.
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# ? Nov 8, 2016 13:51 |
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If this was a slice of life type webcomic this page would be cheesy but kinda cute. As this is sfp could we maybe resolve the big moral issue we raised 6 pages ago.
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# ? Nov 8, 2016 14:14 |
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I'm loving done
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I mean, in universe I don't blame Feral for being all psyched to be not having surgery done on her 24/7, and she was always crazy like this, but as a reader I can't help but wonder what the heck the author is going for. Maybe we'll get lucky and Allison will hurl her guts out of guilt and insanity the instant the others are off camera.
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# ? Nov 8, 2016 15:18 |
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Allison is a big weenie and has never suffered or lost anything except her dog.
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# ? Nov 8, 2016 15:30 |
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What genre is this poo poo supposed to be.
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# ? Nov 8, 2016 16:21 |
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Bad writers are often mortally afraid of meaningful conflict, the kind with stakes and consequences and etc. That's why SFP in particular has a lot of big dramatic speeches and teary-eyed faces but none of it ever amounts to anything. Bad writers today also seem to have this weird predilection to default into meaningless domestic fluff whenever possible, which is definitely what's happening here - retreating into painful, stilted Questionable Content-esque banter because it's easier and more instantly gratifying then actually trying to pursue the questions the story originally asked. Oxxidation fucked around with this message at 18:14 on Nov 8, 2016 |
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SlothfulCobra posted:What genre is this poo poo supposed to be. Feral is definitely a slice of liver character.
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# ? Nov 8, 2016 16:26 |
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I've just come from having my organs cut out of my body every few hours, without anesthesia, for a year or two HEY LITTLE LADY U SURE R PRETTY LETS HAVE HOT GAY SEX
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# ? Nov 8, 2016 17:51 |
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Hoping this goes full Josh Lesnick at the end with sweat and vaginal fluids splattering everywhere this is a sarcastic post dumbass
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Skellybones posted:Allison is a big weenie and has never suffered or lost anything except her dog. And her dog got to live to be 18 or something absurd.
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# ? Nov 8, 2016 17:55 |
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Atmus posted:And her dog got to live to be 18 or something absurd. Her dad is cancer you guys
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Lots of people are cancers, big deal
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