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This moon thing is really dumb. And lame. And other ableist insults.ThaumPenguin posted:It doesn't feel like Homestuck It feels like bad fanfiction.
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# ? Dec 23, 2016 20:46 |
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ThaumPenguin posted:There's just something missing from this is it the fact that the characters are talking to each other WHILE trying to accomplish something, instead of the story doing chatlogs when the characters are loving around wasting time and relegating them actually putting effort into things into either cutscenes or explaining it after the fact
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# ? Dec 23, 2016 20:46 |
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Anyway, Jane will just regenerate since there was nothing heroic about her death ...or she'll die a Just death for being an unrepentant bourgeois oppressor, which would admittedly be an interesting twist for the story to take
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# ? Dec 23, 2016 20:50 |
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why are they having this involved conversation via snapchat instead of using the talky-parts of their cellphones e: like, i think the snapchat gimmick worked really well for the end credits sequence, but the longer this goes on the more strained it gets
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# ? Dec 23, 2016 20:51 |
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AriadneThread posted:why are they having this involved conversation via snapchat instead of using the talky-parts of their cellphones Severe oxygen deprivation tend to do bad things to people's decision-making skills, and there ain't much oxygen in space
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# ? Dec 23, 2016 20:55 |
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AriadneThread posted:why are they having this involved conversation via snapchat instead of using the talky-parts of their cellphones A metaphor for the comic as a whole
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# ? Dec 23, 2016 20:55 |
Plom Bar posted:Jane is presently where the moon is about to be blown up, but others are converging on that location and it is a Very Big Mystery what's going to happen next They're gonna kill off Jane Which actually gives me a little bit of hope for Cohen as a writer
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# ? Dec 23, 2016 21:07 |
For real though, i know i said Snapchat was the worst possible medium for this, but the more this drags on, the more worster it gets. It's now bad storytelling-wise, accessability-wise AND storywise because yeah seriously who the hell is gonna take a selfie, write a long-rear end thing on it, and send it, when their irrelevant friend is about to make like a stormtrooper on the Death Star. This is makin' me angry!!!!!!!
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# ? Dec 23, 2016 21:09 |
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I can't tell if posting the updates on snapchat is too Avant-garde for me, or not Avant-garde enough
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# ? Dec 23, 2016 21:16 |
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It's just really not a great medium for actual storytelling. Worked for the credits, worked for halloween shenanigans, not working for this.
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# ? Dec 23, 2016 21:18 |
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I've never used snapchat as I've been a grumpy old man since the age of nine
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# ? Dec 23, 2016 21:20 |
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Jack Noir is maybe not dead?!?!? If so, hurrah. Also, Welovefine is having a holiday sale on "selected" vinyls and plushes. "Selected" means all the Beta kid vinyls except Dave are $5 off. e: Also, bring back USENET.
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# ? Dec 23, 2016 21:49 |
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Hemingway To Go! posted:is it the fact that the characters are talking to each other WHILE trying to accomplish something, instead of the story doing chatlogs when the characters are loving around wasting time and relegating them actually putting effort into things into either cutscenes or explaining it after the fact Yeah, basically. Homestuck traditionally interspersed sudden flashes of animated activity with long periods of talking and thinking. Having people talk while doing things feels very different. Also speaking as someone who highly values having records of all my online conversations, Snapchat makes me feel dirty.
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# ? Dec 23, 2016 22:01 |
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plus the dialogue tended to have moments of comedy this just feels like they're explaining the scene within the confines of their quirk. Which is what I imagine the difference between fanfiction and writing the comic is e: Jane's line in particular feels off. Jape and mystery, oh my!!!!!
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# ? Dec 23, 2016 23:45 |
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I preferred when the epilogue's social media platform of choice was this thread Oh God I'm turning into a hater, aren't I
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# ? Dec 23, 2016 23:53 |
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ThaumPenguin posted:I preferred when the epilogue's social media platform of choice was this thread we might be negative, but we love you all now say how for a scene where the moon is about to explode and a character is going to die, there's pretty much no tension
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# ? Dec 23, 2016 23:56 |
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here's an album of the updatesThaumPenguin posted:I preferred when the epilogue's social media platform of choice was this thread Freak Futa's was clearly the superior epilogue,so no.
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# ? Dec 23, 2016 23:58 |
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Ammat The Ankh posted:here's an album of the updates roxy sure developed a p bad fashion sense on earth c also i cant remember because it's been ages but weren't the felt widely known to be enemies, hence a whole wing of the plan dedicated to fighting them
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# ? Dec 24, 2016 00:05 |
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I don't understand these updates There's never any real buildup, everything just gets resolved nearly instantly. Like it seemed somewhat promising back when the snapdates appeared to show John becoming unhappy and restless with how things had turned out, but nothing really happened with that.
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# ? Dec 24, 2016 00:15 |
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John seeming unhappy and restless was in the credits, which was the last thing Hussie wrote. Cohen took over for the next update, which was John happy and dressed like a vampire and all happy like nothing ever happened. e: aaaaaaand that's it for Bec Noir I guess. i can't even muster a snarky comment
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# ? Dec 24, 2016 00:17 |
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Clawtopsy posted:plus the dialogue tended to have moments of comedy And mistaking typing quirk for character voice.
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# ? Dec 24, 2016 00:20 |
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So, I guess Jane is evil now?
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# ? Dec 24, 2016 00:26 |
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Rand Brittain posted:So, I guess Jane is evil now? I guess???????? who the gently caress even knows anymore e: maybe Post-Retjohn Jane was a horrible sociopath, much like Post-Retjohn Dave is a huge weenie "These nice gentlemen I tried to murder with a fork in Collide are here to help!", so it seems she became a dumb evil, too. Clawtopsy fucked around with this message at 00:30 on Dec 24, 2016 |
# ? Dec 24, 2016 00:28 |
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Caliborn was right
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# ? Dec 24, 2016 00:34 |
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I'm getting some major "Like Father Like Son" vibes from this. Just you know, gender-swapped and adopted
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# ? Dec 24, 2016 00:40 |
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it certainly makes Roxy a terrible friend "hey jane you're acting more and more like the person i apparently hated so much i stabbed them to death, please tone that down" gonna be v disappointed if Roxy's reply isn't "hey whoa let's cool it on the slave collars, bb." with some level of distress e: oh wow, that is, uh. Sure a picture of Jane? Clawtopsy fucked around with this message at 01:05 on Dec 24, 2016 |
# ? Dec 24, 2016 00:43 |
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Clawtopsy posted:it certainly makes Roxy a terrible friend She's literally ordering people into the oven
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# ? Dec 24, 2016 01:30 |
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Honestly it just seems like Jane is sounding and acting like Nanna to me. Which is kind of what I'd have expected an adult Jane to be like.
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# ? Dec 24, 2016 01:33 |
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Oh hey! A snapchat update happened while I was out doing Holiday stuff with my family! Neat! So I guess Jane is evil now, good for her. Maybe her character will actually get a chance to do something interesting now or develop in some way. Although the last time she turned evil it was kind of just a deadend that went no where and accomplished nothing, so who knows how this'll play out. Also, Clover got a job as a social media manager! Hopefully he'll switch the update format to something other than fuckin' snapchats.
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# ? Dec 24, 2016 01:51 |
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i take everything back homestuck is loving trash
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# ? Dec 24, 2016 02:38 |
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I am Homestuck. Kill me now while you still have a chance.
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# ? Dec 24, 2016 02:56 |
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Closed-Down Pizza Parlor posted:Homestuck is good and I like it, actually. Closed-Down Pizza Parlor posted:i take everything back homestuck is loving trash Woah, pretty fast turn around there Closed-Down Pizza Parlor. I mean, I'm not saying you're wrong though. Anyway, although I'm not sure I like the way this plot point was executed I think the concept behind it is interesting. The idea of Jane turning evil (for real this time, not just because of mind control) is something that could actually be potientially fascinating, but right now it just feels rushed instead of being an organic development that feels natural to the character. It's like a switch has been flipped that turned Jane from "boring business woman" to "boring evil fascist". Edit: The Lobotomy Kid posted:I am Homestuck. Kill me now while you still have a chance. If I did that you'd just go God tier or come back as a dream ghost or get thrown into a sprite kernel or Goku would make a wish on the seven Dragonballs to resurrect you or some other bullshit like that. Space Cadet Omoly fucked around with this message at 03:34 on Dec 24, 2016 |
# ? Dec 24, 2016 02:59 |
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I don't even know what's going on because I have to catch up using the tumblr that compiles these as they come out, and a tumblr blog is only slightly better than a snapchat as it presents everything backwards.
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# ? Dec 24, 2016 02:59 |
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GunnerJ posted:I don't even know what's going on because I have to catch up using the tumblr that compiles these as they come out, and a tumblr blog is only slightly better than a snapchat as it presents everything backwards. don't worry it doesn't really make any sense
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# ? Dec 24, 2016 03:42 |
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Ammat The Ankh posted:She's literally ordering people into the oven
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# ? Dec 24, 2016 04:01 |
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The art in the snaps is cute enough but otherwise these are kind of hot garbage. I don't know why I'm even surprised at this point.
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# ? Dec 24, 2016 04:03 |
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There's a few more snapchats that I'm too lazy to link to: Jane goes into the future by a week somehow for some reason and then the moon gets blown up after all. Calliope and Roxy accomplish nothing.
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# ? Dec 24, 2016 05:40 |
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Space Cadet Omoly posted:There's a few more snapchats that I'm too lazy to link to: Jane goes into the future by a week somehow for some reason and then the moon gets blown up after all. Calliope and Roxy accomplish nothing. I assume Cans punched her
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# ? Dec 24, 2016 05:41 |
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it seems she gets in the oven herself, a move known as the 'reverse hitler'
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# ? Dec 24, 2016 05:45 |
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Clawtopsy posted:it seems she gets in the oven herself, a move known as the 'reverse hitler' Oh that could work too but it's more boring
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# ? Dec 24, 2016 05:48 |