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jivjov
Sep 13, 2007

But how does it taste? Yummy!
Dinosaur Gum
Yeah; I wasn't a huge fan of how Butters' interactions with the Almighty was all literal MMO trappings. It's a cute punchline...but it's completely at odds with how Michael talked about it in earlier books

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Ornamented Death
Jan 25, 2006

Pew pew!

I think it's been strongly hinted, if not outright stated (either in the books or by Jim himself) that a lot of the magic surrounding the swords adapts itself to each wielder. So while Michael's experience is very much that of the stereotypical medieval knight, the same trappings wouldn't "fit" Butters, for lack of a better term.

jivjov
Sep 13, 2007

But how does it taste? Yummy!
Dinosaur Gum

Ornamented Death posted:

I think it's been strongly hinted, if not outright stated (either in the books or by Jim himself) that a lot of the magic surrounding the swords adapts itself to each wielder. So while Michael's experience is very much that of the stereotypical medieval knight, the same trappings wouldn't "fit" Butters, for lack of a better term.

I mostly meant in the sense of how explicit things are for Butters. Literal Quest Giving NPCs.

Vicissitude
Jan 26, 2004

You ever do the chicken dance at a wake? That really bothers people.
I wonder how the same man would have appeared to Michael. With Butters he had the glowy ! to follow, which ties into free will since he always has the option of not doing that sidequest. I wonder if it would have been a ray of light from above. Interesting note, Michael would have been able to help just as well from his medic training as a corpsman.

Avalerion
Oct 19, 2012

jivjov posted:

I mostly meant in the sense of how explicit things are for Butters. Literal Quest Giving NPCs.

Maybe Butters wouldn't have gotten it if it was less explicit.

420 Gank Mid
Dec 26, 2008

WARNING: This poster is a huge bitch!

Think of it as the tutorial level, sometimes the game has to beat you over the head with some of the mechanics before it can get subtle.

RockyB
Mar 8, 2007


Dog Therapy: Shockingly Good
Just seen that amazon has a synopsis of the next laundry files book:

quote:

Bob Howard's career in the Laundry, the secret British government agency dedicated to protecting the world from the supernatural, has involved brilliant hacking, ancient magic, and combat with creatures of pure evil. It has also involved a wearying amount of paperwork and office politics, and his expense reports are still a mess.

Now, following the invasion of Yorkshire by the Host of Air and Darkness, the Laundry's existence has become public, and Bob is being trotted out on TV to answer pointed questions about elven asylum seekers. What neither Bob nor his managers have foreseen is that their organization has earned the attention of a horror far more terrifying than any demon: a government looking for public services to privatize.

Interesting if rather British concept, our government does have a habit of privatising every single thing it thinks it can get away with. If anyone thinks selling off our defence against eldritch horrors might be going a bit too far, well just look at what happened with QinetiQ / DSTL in the defence sector. Then National Rail, then British Gas, then the recent Post Office fiasco...

Shame about the ~six month wait though.

seaborgium
Aug 1, 2002

"Nothing a shitload of bleach won't fix"




420 Gank Mid posted:

Think of it as the tutorial level, sometimes the game has to beat you over the head with some of the mechanics before it can get subtle.

Well when Sasha and Micheal were heading to the airport in one of the earlier books, they were discussing that they could each perceive Nicodemus and the other Denariians inside the airport, but they each felt it differently. I think Sasha smelled rotten food, but for Micheal it was more like a Detect Evil spell from D&D. I think it definitely is based on the personality of the wielder.

Ika
Dec 30, 2004
Pure insanity

RockyB posted:

Interesting if rather British concept, our government does have a habit of privatising every single thing it thinks it can get away with. If anyone thinks selling off our defence against eldritch horrors might be going a bit too far, well just look at what happened with QinetiQ / DSTL in the defence sector. Then National Rail, then British Gas, then the recent Post Office fiasco...

Shame about the ~six month wait though.

Isn't most of the six month wait because the book was just about done, brexit happened, and stross said that his entire satire of the british government was much tamer than reality and he had to rewrite it all?

NerdyMcNerdNerd
Aug 3, 2004
Finished the first Mercy Thompson book today. Wasn't nearly as Anita-Blakey as I thought it might be. I kept expecting it to suddenly jerk the wheel and veer off into paranormal romance, but it stayed the course. I would peg it somewhere between Dresden Files and Magic Bites.

Wizchine
Sep 17, 2007

Television is the retina
of the mind's eye.

NerdyMcNerdNerd posted:

Finished the first Mercy Thompson book today. Wasn't nearly as Anita-Blakey as I thought it might be. I kept expecting it to suddenly jerk the wheel and veer off into paranormal romance, but it stayed the course. I would peg it somewhere between Dresden Files and Magic Bites.

One of my favorite series. The relationship stuff is a large part of the stories, but never cringe-worthy or shower-worthy. Briggs is a good writer.

-Fish-
Oct 10, 2005

Glub glub.
Glub glub.

I'm gonna go against the flow and advise avoiding the Mercy Thompson series. It definitely never reaches Anita Blake levels of supernatural sex, but the romance arc still majorly ruins the series. The first few books are really promising but the romantic relationship gets into this poorly written sub/dom thing with her boyfriend as the dom, just with every instance of the words "sub" and "dom" replaced with "pack" and "alpha". This gets incredibly bad at the point where Mercy is raped by someone who drugs her with a mind control serum and is dealing with PTSD from it. Her boyfriend cures her of being raped and having PTSD by being ~sooo alpha <3 <3 <3~ and forcing himself on her while they're alone in his house.. That was the fourth or fifth book I think? I noped out hard at that point. See also, the women of the werewolf tribes ALL know Mercy and just hate her because unlike them, she can shapeshift whenever she wants, so she can have babies since she won't kill them by shapeshifting if she doesn't want to.

Number Ten Cocks
Feb 25, 2016

by zen death robot
Thanks for the above warning, I've had enough of male authors writing cringe inducing stuff like that disrespecting women.

NerdyMcNerdNerd
Aug 3, 2004

-Fish- posted:

This gets incredibly bad at the point where Mercy is raped by someone who drugs her with a mind control serum and is dealing with PTSD from it. Her boyfriend cures her of being raped and having PTSD by being ~sooo alpha <3 <3 <3~ and forcing himself on her while they're alone in his house..

This kills the book.

I was willing to put aside the other stuff as a product of the setting, even if it was a little 'eh'. Oh well. The last one is kind of funny because I just assumed it was some of the ones that actually knew her.

Proteus Jones
Feb 28, 2013



Number Ten Cocks posted:

Thanks for the above warning, I've had enough of male authors writing cringe inducing stuff like that disrespecting women.

But it's written by a woman?

Mars4523
Feb 17, 2014

NerdyMcNerdNerd posted:

This kills the book.

I was willing to put aside the other stuff as a product of the setting, even if it was a little 'eh'. Oh well. The last one is kind of funny because I just assumed it was some of the ones that actually knew her.

It's another point in favor for the Kate Daniels series that it doesn't have any of this poo poo. The lore stuff is pretty bullshit, but the characters are more or less solid.

wheatpuppy
Apr 25, 2008

YOU HAVE MY POST!

-Fish- posted:

I'm gonna go against the flow and advise avoiding the Mercy Thompson series. It definitely never reaches Anita Blake levels of supernatural sex, but the romance arc still majorly ruins the series. The first few books are really promising but the romantic relationship gets into this poorly written sub/dom thing with her boyfriend as the dom, just with every instance of the words "sub" and "dom" replaced with "pack" and "alpha". This gets incredibly bad at the point where Mercy is raped by someone who drugs her with a mind control serum and is dealing with PTSD from it. Her boyfriend cures her of being raped and having PTSD by being ~sooo alpha <3 <3 <3~ and forcing himself on her while they're alone in his house.. That was the fourth or fifth book I think? I noped out hard at that point. See also, the women of the werewolf tribes ALL know Mercy and just hate her because unlike them, she can shapeshift whenever she wants, so she can have babies since she won't kill them by shapeshifting if she doesn't want to.

In general, Patricia Briggs has a problem with using rape as a crutch when she wants to add drama or make a flat character seem more interesting. See the entire back story for the Alpha and Omega series, for example.

Proteus Jones
Feb 28, 2013



wheatpuppy posted:

In general, Patricia Briggs has a problem with using rape as a crutch when she wants to add drama or make a flat character seem more interesting. See the entire back story for the Alpha and Omega series, for example.

What I hate about her books are the fact the women are strong because of the authority/strength they get from their über-male mate.

I've just started the October Daye series. It seems pretty good, but I've been let down before so preparing for the worst.

Khizan
Jul 30, 2013


Mars4523 posted:

It's another point in favor for the Kate Daniels series that it doesn't have any of this poo poo. The lore stuff is pretty bullshit, but the characters are more or less solid.

It doesn't have any of the rape stuff that I noticed, but the Kate Daniels books are still ruined by the terrible werewolf "oh so ~alpha~" stuff. You can pretty much describe the plot of each book as "Interesting capable female protagonist gets in over her head and has to be rescued by her werewolf alpha millionaire pack leader boyfriend."

OmniBeer
Jun 5, 2011

This is no time to
remain stagnant!

flosofl posted:

What I hate about her books are the fact the women are strong because of the authority/strength they get from their über-male mate.

I've just started the October Daye series. It seems pretty good, but I've been let down before so preparing for the worst.

It's been ages since I read early October Daye, but if I recall.. I enjoyed the first book, then there was a slight dip into stereotypical annoying plot fare, and then it got enjoyable again.

It's a series I really enjoy- for the characters especially- but kinda like Dresden, I definitely remember a quality dip in the beginning.

Mars4523
Feb 17, 2014

flosofl posted:

What I hate about her books are the fact the women are strong because of the authority/strength they get from their über-male mate.

I've just started the October Daye series. It seems pretty good, but I've been let down before so preparing for the worst.
It's weird because it's a false interpretation of real world wolf packs, which are built around a breeding pair and not a dominant male. The Pax Arcana series does something interesting with this in the second book. Main character John notes that female leaders in the clan of werewolves he's joined obtained power through their spouses, not their own competence/skills, which strikes a nerve with the noncombatant female logistician who would make a far better pack leader than the macho alpha male dude who has the job.

Khizan posted:

It doesn't have any of the rape stuff that I noticed, but the Kate Daniels books are still ruined by the terrible werewolf "oh so ~alpha~" stuff. You can pretty much describe the plot of each book as "Interesting capable female protagonist gets in over her head and has to be rescued by her werewolf alpha millionaire pack leader boyfriend."
I don't know about that. There are 2 books in which Kate needs to be rescued by her love interest. The first one is after she takes a magic sword to the gut for the team, and in the second she keeps a less physically capable male character alive long enough for them to be rescued.

Fallorn
Apr 14, 2005
Anyone read any of the kindle unlimited Urban Fantasy? I want to talk about some of those series because they are wonderful popcorn fiction.
Steve McHugh's Hellequin Chronicles are super fun to read and stories take over a large period of time with things years ago coming up and messing with the world.
Richard Raley's The King Henry Tapes has a main character nicknamed foul mouth and the world building I highly enjoy it is a fun read and characters have growth and development that is enjoyable to see develop.

Closer to the John Ringo and Larry Correia end of the spectrum. (I don't share many personal views with them but I enjoy the tales they weave)
Michael Anderle's Kutherian Gambit books are entertaining to read and I get a new one just about every month on kindle unlimited. The man knows how to be prolific and cross promote other series and authors and writes about how to be indie and make money.

Lets talk about the stuff that is in the genre that maybe is ebook only and fun to read.

Dienes
Nov 4, 2009

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College Slice

Khizan posted:

It doesn't have any of the rape stuff that I noticed, but the Kate Daniels books are still ruined by the terrible werewolf "oh so ~alpha~" stuff. You can pretty much describe the plot of each book as "Interesting capable female protagonist gets in over her head and has to be rescued by her werewolf alpha millionaire pack leader boyfriend."

I really liked it when she hosed up his bachelor's pad to assert herself and indicate her interest.

Blackfish
Sep 12, 2007

we have to be prepared to smoke a thousand joints before our quest is complete

flosofl posted:

What I hate about her books are the fact the women are strong because of the authority/strength they get from their über-male mate.

I've just started the October Daye series. It seems pretty good, but I've been let down before so preparing for the worst.

There's no rape or sexual assault at all in October Daye.

Toby is strong on her own merits. She does have love interests but I never felt like she was subsumed by her partners. It is a little rough in the beginning but Rosemary and Rue was her first published book. It quickly became one of my favorite series.

Mars4523
Feb 17, 2014

Fallorn posted:

Anyone read any of the kindle unlimited Urban Fantasy? I want to talk about some of those series because they are wonderful popcorn fiction.
Steve McHugh's Hellequin Chronicles are super fun to read and stories take over a large period of time with things years ago coming up and messing with the world.
Richard Raley's The King Henry Tapes has a main character nicknamed foul mouth and the world building I highly enjoy it is a fun read and characters have growth and development that is enjoyable to see develop.

Closer to the John Ringo and Larry Correia end of the spectrum. (I don't share many personal views with them but I enjoy the tales they weave)
Michael Anderle's Kutherian Gambit books are entertaining to read and I get a new one just about every month on kindle unlimited. The man knows how to be prolific and cross promote other series and authors and writes about how to be indie and make money.

Lets talk about the stuff that is in the genre that maybe is ebook only and fun to read.
The Daniel Faust and Harmony Black series by Craig Schaefer are all on Kindle Unlimited. They're good to great urban fantasy with a darker tone, but they're not overly edgy in the way that a lot of darker UF gets. If Dresden Files is the benchmark for male led urban fantasy, Faust is considerably above par.

Dienes posted:

I really liked it when she hosed up his bachelor's pad to assert herself and indicate her interest.
Yeah, that was one of the more hosed up bits "shapeshifter bullshit" in the series that you see in a lot of urban fantasy, wherein personal boundaries are for normal muggles and not the Macho Alpha Male Adonis of a love interest, but Kate gets to nicely flip the script and indulge in some criminal-in-real-life romcom pranks of her own.

Mars4523 fucked around with this message at 01:19 on Jan 6, 2017

Robot Wendigo
Jul 9, 2013

Grimey Drawer

NerdyMcNerdNerd posted:

Finished the first Mercy Thompson book today. Wasn't nearly as Anita-Blakey as I thought it might be. I kept expecting it to suddenly jerk the wheel and veer off into paranormal romance, but it stayed the course. I would peg it somewhere between Dresden Files and Magic Bites.

I stalled out at about a 100 pages into it. The alpha male werewolf bullshit--and Mercy's reaction to it--was getting to be a bit much. What with Curran in the Kate Daniels series and take your pick of any werewolf in Mercy, it seems the key to finding love in the UF universe is to be an arrogant prick and just watch the women swoon.

torgeaux
Dec 31, 2004
I serve...

flosofl posted:

What I hate about her books are the fact the women are strong because of the authority/strength they get from their über-male mate.

I've just started the October Daye series. It seems pretty good, but I've been let down before so preparing for the worst.

That's simply not true about the Briggs series. An early criticism in the thread was that the female lead is more powerful than the werewolves. Mercy doesnt derive power from the wolves and isn't connected to the wolves until about book 5. The other series makes a point of separating the power of the lead from boyfriend power.

The romance stuff is badly written, but can also be skipped without the story suffering.

Oroborus
Jul 6, 2004
Here we go again
We're only a few months from the 3rd anniversary of Skin Game coming out. I wonder if we will get any more information before that.

I wonder if we should be worried he is having this much trouble writing it.

EVGA Longoria
Dec 25, 2005

Let's go exploring!

Oroborus posted:

We're only a few months from the 3rd anniversary of Skin Game coming out. I wonder if we will get any more information before that.

I wonder if we should be worried he is having this much trouble writing it.

Iirc he got divorced and remarried since Skin Game, so I don't think it's trouble writing it, just stuff beside that getting in the way

NerdyMcNerdNerd
Aug 3, 2004

wheatpuppy posted:

In general, Patricia Briggs fantasy authors have a problem with using rape as a crutch when they want to add drama or make a flat character seem more interesting.

I would just like to read about swords and magic and mythical creatures fighting and stuff without my books taking a sudden header into the rape end of the pool, thanks fantasy/UF authors.

Robot Wendigo posted:

I stalled out at about a 100 pages into it. The alpha male werewolf bullshit--and Mercy's reaction to it--was getting to be a bit much. What with Curran in the Kate Daniels series and take your pick of any werewolf in Mercy, it seems the key to finding love in the UF universe is to be an arrogant prick and just watch the women swoon.

The 'alpha' stuff doesn't bother me so much anymore, probably because it is in every drat piece of fiction that focuses on shape-shifters, even if they are cats or birds or whatever. That DBZ Alpha-Aura kind of thing werewolves do is also oddly prevalent.

The arrogance thing is just common in every genre, and... I guess I'll give more of a pass because it can be kind of hard to get the hang of writing someone that comes across as confident, but not arrogant. It isn't so bad as long as the guy does things that show he is a good guy under all that brass.

I dunno about the werewolves in Mercy Thompson, at least in the first book. Adam's a bit brash sometimes, but that seems part of his relationship with Mercy. She yanks his chain knowing full well how he'll react, and he makes a show of being annoyed. It made sense to me because coyotes normally slot into the trickster archetype anyways.

On the other hand, of the two chill wolves in the book, one was magic, and the other was gay.

Kind of wonder if you could write a werewolf UF book without all the dumber alpha stuff and the usual baggage, or if it would just bomb hardcore because the target demo won't buy anything else.

Oroborus posted:

We're only a few months from the 3rd anniversary of Skin Game coming out. I wonder if we will get any more information before that.

I wonder if we should be worried he is having this much trouble writing it.

Didn't he finish Codex and start up Cinder Spires? He's been putting out some Dresden fiction, too. It isn't like he's just stopped writing. Maybe he'll release Peace Talks in 2017... then we can read it in two days and wait another three years for the next one.:v:

Wizchine
Sep 17, 2007

Television is the retina
of the mind's eye.
Jeeze, I guess I'm a monster. Still going to read Patricia Briggs, though.

Aerdan
Apr 14, 2012

Not Dennis NEDry

EVGA Longoria posted:

Iirc he got divorced and remarried since Skin Game, so I don't think it's trouble writing it, just stuff beside that getting in the way

Things like having to have his house re?-redone because the previous contractors hosed up and so he was living with his fiancee for a while (and thus cut off from his writing zone).

Fallorn
Apr 14, 2005

Mars4523 posted:

The Daniel Faust and Harmony Black series by Craig Schaefer are all on Kindle Unlimited. They're good to great urban fantasy with a darker tone, but they're not overly edgy in the way that a lot of darker UF gets. If Dresden Files is the benchmark for male led urban fantasy, Faust is considerably above par.

Yeah, that was one of the more hosed up bits "shapeshifter bullshit" in the series that you see in a lot of urban fantasy, wherein personal boundaries are for normal muggles and not the Macho Alpha Male Adonis of a love interest, but Kate gets to nicely flip the script and indulge in some criminal-in-real-life romcom pranks of her own.

I read Schaefer's fantasy series and while very good I have a hard time getting into the right head space to read his writing at times.


Wizchine posted:

Jeeze, I guess I'm a monster. Still going to read Patricia Briggs, though.

Doesn't mean you are a monster, it's a lot of the same stuff all over the paranormal romance and connected genres. Hell at least it isn't Kushiel's Legacy now that poo poo was hard to read for a book group.

Tunicate
May 15, 2012

Aerdan posted:

Things like having to have his house re?-redone because the previous contractors hosed up and so he was living with his fiancee for a while (and thus cut off from his writing zone).

Also his dog died.

Anias
Jun 3, 2010

It really is a lovely hat

OmniBeer posted:

It's been ages since I read early October Daye, but if I recall.. I enjoyed the first book, then there was a slight dip into stereotypical annoying plot fare, and then it got enjoyable again.

It's a series I really enjoy- for the characters especially- but kinda like Dresden, I definitely remember a quality dip in the beginning.


Blackfish posted:

There's no rape or sexual assault at all in October Daye.

Toby is strong on her own merits. She does have love interests but I never felt like she was subsumed by her partners. It is a little rough in the beginning but Rosemary and Rue was her first published book. It quickly became one of my favorite series.


The first two books are a bit rough in places as our author gets her feet under her, without being as bad as Storm Front and Fool Moon, then An Artificial Night (Book 3) compares favorably to Grave Peril.

It's definitely a series anyone who likes dresden should try out.

Number Ten Cocks
Feb 25, 2016

by zen death robot

Tunicate posted:

Also his dog died.

And his truck broke down.

Blasphemeral
Jul 26, 2012

Three mongrel men in exchange for a party member? I found that one in the Faustian Bargain Bin.

EVGA Longoria posted:

Iirc he got divorced and remarried since Skin Game, so I don't think it's trouble writing it, just stuff beside that getting in the way

Tunicate posted:

Also his dog died.

Number Ten Cocks posted:

And his truck broke down.

drat. Maybe he should start writing country music lyrics.

(I hope he doesn't actually start writing country music lyrics.)

Fallorn
Apr 14, 2005

Blasphemeral posted:

drat. Maybe he should start writing country music lyrics.

(I hope he doesn't actually start writing country music lyrics.)

Because of you the next book will actually be a country album. It's all your fault.

ConfusedUs
Feb 24, 2004

Bees?
You want fucking bees?
Here you go!
ROLL INITIATIVE!!





Oh poo poo did eyebrow dog die?

Now I'm sad. :(

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Robot Wendigo
Jul 9, 2013

Grimey Drawer

NerdyMcNerdNerd posted:


Kind of wonder if you could write a werewolf UF book without all the dumber alpha stuff and the usual baggage, or if it would just bomb hardcore because the target demo won't buy anything else.

Good point. As a fifty year old man, I'm pretty sure I'm not the target audience for romantic urban fantasy and its attendant tropes. I still enjoy it, but there is clearly a formula here that works.

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