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fbsw
Mar 3, 2016

Drink-Mix Man posted:

Here's a list of various non-dance, non-modular, electronic experiments I've been happiest with...

https://soundcloud.com/eric-zak/sets/meditation-for-dogs

i really like tracks 1 2 and 5. good poo poo!

i'm not a musician but i made a halo themed song awhile back for a friend's thing and i thought it would fit really well in a 14 year old's subpar COD montage
https://soundcloud.com/user-494523396/blue-haze

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zaepg
Dec 25, 2008

by sebmojo

Your stuff sounds like it could be in an Xbox or PS2 game :yaycloud:

MrSargent
Dec 23, 2003

Sometimes, there's a man, well, he's the man for his time and place. He fits right in there. And that's Jimmy T.
Cross-post from the electronic music thread since no one has responded:

Ok, so I finally have assembled a track that I would like some feedback on. A couple notes on this:

-Style is probably closest to House/Deep House
-The track is not finished, I cut it off at 4:00 for this demo but there is probably a minute and half left I want to finish it with
-Also planning to add a few elements to make it more interesting (lead after the drop, some random fx)
-The arrangement is relatively simple, I was really trying to focus on learning and applying production techniques
-Mastering is very minimal

I really appreciate anyone who takes the time to listen and anyone who provides notes. This is the first thing I have ever felt comfortable sharing so I look forward to getting outside feedback.

https://soundcloud.com/bradley-freeman-3/driftwalk-wip/s-9QpUI

Edit: Fixed Link

MrSargent fucked around with this message at 22:32 on Jan 9, 2017

Drink-Mix Man
Mar 4, 2003

You are an odd fellow, but I must say... you throw a swell shindig.

Sounds like a decent clean mix to me so far, nothing really stood out to me to give criticism on except that it seemed to be lacking some of the exact elements you said you are planning on adding later. I guess one small thing is that my ears expected to hear some ducking compression after the drop. Maybe that's something that gets added later, but it's so ubiquitous in tracks like this these days that it was kind of noticeable that I didn't get it.

I'd say it's off to a good start, I'd encourage you to finish it and post the more finished product for more detailed feedback.

MrSargent
Dec 23, 2003

Sometimes, there's a man, well, he's the man for his time and place. He fits right in there. And that's Jimmy T.

Drink-Mix Man posted:

Sounds like a decent clean mix to me so far, nothing really stood out to me to give criticism on except that it seemed to be lacking some of the exact elements you said you are planning on adding later. I guess one small thing is that my ears expected to hear some ducking compression after the drop. Maybe that's something that gets added later, but it's so ubiquitous in tracks like this these days that it was kind of noticeable that I didn't get it.

I'd say it's off to a good start, I'd encourage you to finish it and post the more finished product for more detailed feedback.

Thanks so much for taking the time to listen and provide feedback, it is much appreciated. For your comment regarding expecting some ducking compression after the drop, was there a particular element that you thought wasn't ducking quite enough when the kick hits? I sidechained most of the tracks to the Kick, but adjusted the ratio & threshold accordingly for each track so some (like the crash and reverse crash) are very obviously ducking where others (like the pads) duck just enough to let the kick punch through. I will experiment with adjusting the threshold on the sidechain compressor for the pads track (i think that's probably what you are referring to as not ducking much) and see what works.

My wife actually wrote some lyrics for this track that I think are perfect. Now its just a matter of getting her confident enough to record them for me (she has a great voice but doesn't sing as often as she used to). A nice bottle of wine should do the trick.

Drink-Mix Man
Mar 4, 2003

You are an odd fellow, but I must say... you throw a swell shindig.

MrSargent posted:

Thanks so much for taking the time to listen and provide feedback, it is much appreciated. For your comment regarding expecting some ducking compression after the drop, was there a particular element that you thought wasn't ducking quite enough when the kick hits? I sidechained most of the tracks to the Kick, but adjusted the ratio & threshold accordingly for each track so some (like the crash and reverse crash) are very obviously ducking where others (like the pads) duck just enough to let the kick punch through. I will experiment with adjusting the threshold on the sidechain compressor for the pads track (i think that's probably what you are referring to as not ducking much) and see what works.

On second listen I did hear what you did with the sidechaining. I think maybe my ear has been tainted by hearing a lot of tracks lately where the pads and other instrumentation is pumping exaggeratedly. I'd take it with a grain of salt, though, that's not necessarily something I'm even all that into.

MrSargent
Dec 23, 2003

Sometimes, there's a man, well, he's the man for his time and place. He fits right in there. And that's Jimmy T.
Thanks for the feedback dude. I wanted to make sure I was headed in the right direction in terms of mixing those few elements correctly. Slowly trying to add more interesting complexity to fill it out.

Eric Danger
Jan 15, 2017

Evangelist of Atheism
I produce music. I don't compose or play much. I like turning classical music into EDM (or just plain electronic, but dance is my favorite)

https://soundcloud.com/eric-danger

Eric Danger
Jan 15, 2017

Evangelist of Atheism

MrSargent posted:

Thanks so much for taking the time to listen and provide feedback, it is much appreciated. For your comment regarding expecting some ducking compression after the drop, was there a particular element that you thought wasn't ducking quite enough when the kick hits? I sidechained most of the tracks to the Kick, but adjusted the ratio & threshold accordingly for each track so some (like the crash and reverse crash) are very obviously ducking where others (like the pads) duck just enough to let the kick punch through. I will experiment with adjusting the threshold on the sidechain compressor for the pads track (i think that's probably what you are referring to as not ducking much) and see what works.

My wife actually wrote some lyrics for this track that I think are perfect. Now its just a matter of getting her confident enough to record them for me (she has a great voice but doesn't sing as often as she used to). A nice bottle of wine should do the trick.

I think you may be trying a little too hard with the sidechain compression. When you have a four-to-the-floor beat like that, there's no real penalty for just ducking the entire mix to the kick drum. With a short (~50 ms) release, any worthwhile compressor can let your kick be heard without "pumping". You can even use a multiband compressor to compress let's say just the frequencies below 2KHz. If you check out my soundcloud, the track "Opus 666", I did exactly that with a 909 kick. It doesn't have as much treble "presence" as the drum in your track; it's more of a boom than a thump.

MrSargent
Dec 23, 2003

Sometimes, there's a man, well, he's the man for his time and place. He fits right in there. And that's Jimmy T.

Eric Danger posted:

I think you may be trying a little too hard with the sidechain compression. When you have a four-to-the-floor beat like that, there's no real penalty for just ducking the entire mix to the kick drum. With a short (~50 ms) release, any worthwhile compressor can let your kick be heard without "pumping". You can even use a multiband compressor to compress let's say just the frequencies below 2KHz. If you check out my soundcloud, the track "Opus 666", I did exactly that with a 909 kick. It doesn't have as much treble "presence" as the drum in your track; it's more of a boom than a thump.

Thanks a lot for the feedback. I actually went back and started tweaking with the compression settings a bit to get them to play a little more together. Is there a particular part that is sidechained too much or is it more general for the whole track. I focused on tweaking the crashes.

Incredulous Dylan
Oct 22, 2004

Fun Shoe

AARO posted:

The Rhodes on that Roland is absolutely sick.

Months later and I have still not managed to record anything with the Rhodes on this thing, haha. I am not worthy :sweep:. Another month, another Soundcloud thingy. Just some simple piano playing, but maybe that's your thing?

https://soundcloud.com/incredulousdylan/the-one-i-love

Might just be my love of Bach, but I liked your stab at Toccata and Fugue in D Minor a lot, Eric Danger!

Eric Danger
Jan 15, 2017

Evangelist of Atheism

MrSargent posted:

Thanks a lot for the feedback. I actually went back and started tweaking with the compression settings a bit to get them to play a little more together. Is there a particular part that is sidechained too much or is it more general for the whole track. I focused on tweaking the crashes.

When I said "trying too hard", I didn't mean it was overdone. It sounds fine. I just meant that you may be making unnecessary extra work for yourself by ducking the parts separately. I generally mix everything except for the kick down to a single bus and put the sidechained compressor on that. Doing it that way also gives the music an almost subliminal pulse. Some pros actually make the compression obviously audible (volume pumping), but I'm not a fan of that sound.

Thanks for the listen, Dylan. Toccata and Fugue in D Minor is one of my favorite classical pieces.

Iucounu
May 12, 2007


My little prog rock recording project just released a new album:

https://soundcloud.com/metamusique/sets/spatterlight

Insanite
Aug 30, 2005

Iucounu posted:

My little prog rock recording project just released a new album:

https://soundcloud.com/metamusique/sets/spatterlight

Neat organ on Parting the Veil!

My shimmery indie rock band just put out an album. The full thing is up at all of the usual digital music services, but we've put a few tracks up on SoundCloud, too. Have a listen!

https://soundcloud.com/whitecassettemusic

Insanite fucked around with this message at 23:37 on Jan 17, 2017

baby puzzle
Jun 3, 2011

I'll Sequence your Storm.

Insanite posted:

Neat organ on Parting the Veil!

My shimmery indie rock band just put out an album. The full thing is up at all of the usual digital music services, but we've put a few tracks up on SoundCloud, too. Have a listen!

https://soundcloud.com/whitecassettemusic

I got "buried by the sea" going in my head out of nowhere today.

Danyull
Jan 16, 2011

Insanite posted:

Neat organ on Parting the Veil!

My shimmery indie rock band just put out an album. The full thing is up at all of the usual digital music services, but we've put a few tracks up on SoundCloud, too. Have a listen!

https://soundcloud.com/whitecassettemusic

I found you on Google Play and added a couple songs from this to my playlist. Keep it up dude, this poo poo is good.

Insanite
Aug 30, 2005

baby puzzle posted:

I got "buried by the sea" going in my head out of nowhere today.


Danyull posted:

I found you on Google Play and added a couple songs from this to my playlist. Keep it up dude, this poo poo is good.

Thanks a bunch!

Coohoolin
Aug 5, 2012

Oor Coohoolie.
This is my personal soundcloud to showcase the kind of guitar/vocals folk stuff I play around pubs, mostly Scottish and Irish stuff. This is a small demo I recorded at the local college with one of the sound engineering students in their studio. Fairly basic but does the trick.
https://soundcloud.com/elijah-fynmore/sets/songs-of-scotland

And this is the wee folk band I've started. I'm swapping mandolin, guitar, and vocals, your man from Donegal on guitar, bodhrán, and vocals, and your man from Wirral on five string banjo, mouth harp, and vocals. Been recording our rehearsals/sessions in the pub with my phone/H4zoom.

4 songs with the zoom:
https://soundcloud.com/user-365559034/sets/23012017a

12 songs with the phone:
https://soundcloud.com/user-365559034/sets/oneills18-01-2017

AARO
Mar 9, 2005

by Lowtax
I recorded a cover of Can's The Thief

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yr04krVJyOc

Drink-Mix Man
Mar 4, 2003

You are an odd fellow, but I must say... you throw a swell shindig.

AARO posted:

I recorded a cover of Can's The Thief

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yr04krVJyOc

Well done!

AARO
Mar 9, 2005

by Lowtax

Thanks man. I really like the guitar part. My eleven rack is really cool.

AARO fucked around with this message at 01:26 on Jan 30, 2017

Grand Prize Winner
Feb 19, 2007


Coohoolin posted:

This is my personal soundcloud to showcase the kind of guitar/vocals folk stuff I play around pubs, mostly Scottish and Irish stuff. This is a small demo I recorded at the local college with one of the sound engineering students in their studio. Fairly basic but does the trick.
https://soundcloud.com/elijah-fynmore/sets/songs-of-scotland

And this is the wee folk band I've started. I'm swapping mandolin, guitar, and vocals, your man from Donegal on guitar, bodhrán, and vocals, and your man from Wirral on five string banjo, mouth harp, and vocals. Been recording our rehearsals/sessions in the pub with my phone/H4zoom.

4 songs with the zoom:
https://soundcloud.com/user-365559034/sets/23012017a

12 songs with the phone:
https://soundcloud.com/user-365559034/sets/oneills18-01-2017

Dude, awesome. You sound a kinda like Dick Gaughan, which ain't ever a bad thing. Are all the songs trad or are there originals?

Like your take on Froggy Went A-Courtin', more midwestern than southern on the vocals. Makes it sound more... singer-songwritery than I usually hear it.



VVV: from the accent, I'd guess Puerto Rico

Grand Prize Winner fucked around with this message at 07:16 on Feb 1, 2017

AARO
Mar 9, 2005

by Lowtax
Coohoolin I just wanted to tell you that your music is great.


Where are you from?

AARO fucked around with this message at 04:47 on Feb 1, 2017

Drink-Mix Man
Mar 4, 2003

You are an odd fellow, but I must say... you throw a swell shindig.

I've been puttering with this sort of groove thing. Maybe you can tell me if it's ready to be a thang?

https://soundcloud.com/eric-zak/cloud-blvd-1

Drink-Mix Man fucked around with this message at 08:46 on Feb 1, 2017

AARO
Mar 9, 2005

by Lowtax

Drink-Mix Man posted:

I've been puttering with this sort of groove thing. Maybe you can tell me if it's ready to be a thang?

https://soundcloud.com/eric-zak/cloud-blvd-1

Take the part from 2:45-3:14 and make the entire song like that. gently caress all the rest, that is the part right there.

beatlegs
Mar 11, 2001

First original thing I've done in awhile. Made by recording everything into my little Tascam digital 8 track then mixing.

https://soundcloud.com/mike-dole/hydra

Steiler Drep
Nov 30, 2004
what?
https://soundcloud.com/dimatrod

I run my own kind of semi production/recording thing in my house. Just yesterday released my band's album, and being from/in Costa Rica, the whole scene thing really does narrow into producers/"engineers" so very recently I started working with increasingly more artists. Check it out for kind of post-punk/shoegaze/pop-punk in english AND spanish :dance: , I should be uploading a couple of EPs this month and the following.

Coohoolin
Aug 5, 2012

Oor Coohoolie.

Grand Prize Winner posted:

Dude, awesome. You sound a kinda like Dick Gaughan, which ain't ever a bad thing. Are all the songs trad or are there originals?

Like your take on Froggy Went A-Courtin', more midwestern than southern on the vocals. Makes it sound more... singer-songwritery than I usually hear it.



VVV: from the accent, I'd guess Puerto Rico

Cheers man! Gaughan is a huge influence on me, I developed my dadgad playing based on his stuff. Our version of Froggy has my mate Ferghal singing, he's from Donegal, so I think the country/folk instinct there is a bit different than the way an American might sing it. All our stuff is trad so far, no originals, although Ferghal is quite keen on the Waterboys hence that wee cover of Fisherman's Blues somewhere there.

Puerto Rico? That's a first. English is my native language but I've developed a sort of Northeastern Scottish accent and learned the local dialect after being here for 7 years. Like a (much) softer version of this, although I do sometimes slip into harsh Doric if I'm with the right people and have had enough to drink:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vDNN6NigGNM
hard-to-spell things mentioned in the video are Ruairidh (pronounced "Rury"), Duguid ("Diuchid"), Dalziell ("Di'ell"), Garioch ("Geary"), Finzean ("Fingen"), Facher ("Fack her"). Aberdeenshire has some really weird place names.

AARO posted:

Coohoolin I just wanted to tell you that your music is great.


Where are you from?

Thanks man! My mom's Irish/Jewish American and my dad's Swiss, I grew up all over the place but I've been living in Scotland in the northeast for a while now.

beatlegs
Mar 11, 2001

i did this ambient thing (a genre i dont typically do) using vocals flown in from another song and reversed

https://soundcloud.com/mike-dole/earth-syndicate

Trig Discipline
Jun 3, 2008

Please leave the room if you think this might offend you.
Grimey Drawer
:stonk: :huh:

https://soundcloud.com/danwarren/art-linkletter-you-nasty/s-HoYBu

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Trig Discipline
Jun 3, 2008

Please leave the room if you think this might offend you.
Grimey Drawer

beatlegs posted:

i did this ambient thing (a genre i dont typically do) using vocals flown in from another song and reversed

https://soundcloud.com/mike-dole/earth-syndicate

That's pretty dang cool IMO

us vs also us
Jul 8, 2007

Hello! I hope you are having a nice day!
Real happy with how this came out! I also feel very resourceful for using a snapple bottle as a slide

https://soundcloud.com/tinygarbage/back-then-1

Catchy folksy bedroom pop kinda sound

beatlegs
Mar 11, 2001

us vs also us posted:

Real happy with how this came out! I also feel very resourceful for using a snapple bottle as a slide

https://soundcloud.com/tinygarbage/back-then-1

Catchy folksy bedroom pop kinda sound

i love it

well why not
Feb 10, 2009




Hid all of my old tunes and uploaded 2 tracks this morning. Feels good to start fresh again.

'Decisions' is kinda future-bassish EDM, Sacré-Cœur is kinda ambient / orchestral wall-of-sound stuff.

Here's the link to both :

https://soundcloud.com/glxe/sets/decisions-sacr-coeur

us vs also us
Jul 8, 2007

Hello! I hope you are having a nice day!

beatlegs posted:

i love it

Thanks! Here's another:

https://soundcloud.com/tinygarbage/pulling-strings-1

beatlegs
Mar 11, 2001


i've been following you on sc for quite awhile & like your stuff. what are your influences? i often get an early-era solo mccartney vibe from your songs

us vs also us
Jul 8, 2007

Hello! I hope you are having a nice day!

beatlegs posted:

i've been following you on sc for quite awhile & like your stuff. what are your influences? i often get an early-era solo mccartney vibe from your songs

the beatles definitely and the paul songs were always my favorite other than that pretty much just pink floyd radiohead of montreal grizzly bear i would say those are the top 4

beatlegs
Mar 11, 2001

us vs also us posted:

the beatles definitely and the paul songs were always my favorite other than that pretty much just pink floyd radiohead of montreal grizzly bear i would say those are the top 4

great, your stuff is always melodic, original, goes to unexpected places that's why i like it

us vs also us
Jul 8, 2007

Hello! I hope you are having a nice day!

beatlegs posted:

great, your stuff is always melodic, original, goes to unexpected places that's why i like it

thank you so much dogg.. oh my goodness...

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beatlegs
Mar 11, 2001

us vs also us posted:

thank you so much dogg.. oh my goodness...

I'm "mike dole" on sc, one state up from you. keep it up ;)

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