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HEY GUNS
Oct 11, 2012

FOPTIMUS PRIME

Libluini posted:

Also, my personal knowledge of yiddish is zero, so everything related to that will just pass me by. Like, it will orbit Earth over my head, so far away is it from my personal experience.
it sounds enough like german that you miiiight be able to fake your way through a conversation

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Grand Fromage
Jan 30, 2006

L-l-look at you bar-bartender, a-a pa-pathetic creature of meat and bone, un-underestimating my l-l-liver's ability to metab-meTABolize t-toxins. How can you p-poison a perfect, immortal alcohOLIC?


It's close enough to German even I can mostly understand Yiddish and my German sucks from a solid decade of disuse.

captkirk
Feb 5, 2010
I'm seeing this quote being passed around by some folks to draw a parallel to modern culture to a Roman culture prior to the fall of the empire.

quote:

“The five marks of the Roman decaying culture:

1. Concern with displaying affluence instead of building wealth;

2. Obsession with sex and perversions of sex;

3. Art becomes freakish and sensationalistic instead of creative and original;

4. Widening disparity between very rich and very poor;

5. Increased demand to live off the state." - Edward Gibbon

How well supported is Gibbon here? At first read, I assumed this didn't actually come from Gibbon because it smells of a reading of history too much through a modern lens.

my dad
Oct 17, 2012

this shall be humorous
oh no, dick went this way instead of that way, the empire is doomed

Power Khan
Aug 20, 2011

by Fritz the Horse

captkirk posted:

I'm seeing this quote being passed around by some folks to draw a parallel to modern culture to a Roman culture prior to the fall of the empire.


How well supported is Gibbon here? At first read, I assumed this didn't actually come from Gibbon because it smells of a reading of history too much through a modern lens.

If you said that this was taken directly from a Breitbart article, nobody would be surprised.

HEY GUNS
Oct 11, 2012

FOPTIMUS PRIME

captkirk posted:

I'm seeing this quote being passed around by some folks to draw a parallel to modern culture to a Roman culture prior to the fall of the empire.


How well supported is Gibbon here? At first read, I assumed this didn't actually come from Gibbon because it smells of a reading of history too much through a modern lens.
there;s no way a dude writing in the mid 18th century said that. if it's not completely made up, it's gotta be post-Romantic, possibly post 1913. The words are modern, the ideas expressed are modern

edit: he didn;t say it. He did say this though:

quote:

The main culprits in Rome’s decline, as he saw it, were not ordinary citizens misbehaving, growing dissolute, or creating bad art. They were degenerate and immoral rulers, foreign invaders, and (most problematic for modern Christian readers) Christian converts and clergymen.
https://historicalhorizons.org/2014/08/29/the-trouble-with-quotes-on-the-internet/

HEY GUNS fucked around with this message at 19:01 on Jul 25, 2017

Libluini
May 18, 2012

I gravitated towards the Greens, eventually even joining the party itself.

The Linke is a party I grudgingly accept exists, but I've learned enough about DDR-history I can't bring myself to trust a party that was once the SED, a party leading the corrupt state apparatus ...
Grimey Drawer

HEY GAIL posted:

it sounds enough like german that you miiiight be able to fake your way through a conversation

Except with me. :v:


Grand Fromage posted:

It's close enough to German even I can mostly understand Yiddish and my German sucks from a solid decade of disuse.

If that's true, it could be I've even talked with people using Yiddish without me noticing. (I'm stupid and bad at identifying languages not named English or German, it's all either gibberish or a bad accent to me. I'd probably misidentify someone using Yiddish as East Frisian or something equally stupid.)



captkirk posted:

I'm seeing this quote being passed around by some folks to draw a parallel to modern culture to a Roman culture prior to the fall of the empire.


How well supported is Gibbon here? At first read, I assumed this didn't actually come from Gibbon because it smells of a reading of history too much through a modern lens.

No, this sounds like Gibbons alright. The problem is, those five points are varying degrees of garbage and I wouldn't trust any of it.

Edit: Wait it's not Gibbon? Hell, seems my hatred of Gibbon has lead me astray.

HEY GUNS
Oct 11, 2012

FOPTIMUS PRIME

Libluini posted:


Edit: Wait it's not Gibbon? Hell, seems my hatred of Gibbon has lead me astray.
it's difficult to "feel" your way through writing style in a language that isn't your first one, but gibbon is far more eloquent.

Also a number of the ideas, and the vocabulary they're expressed in, are really modern. Like, thinking that "living off the state" is even a thing you can do, much less objecting to it, is not a thing a guy from the 1700s would be concerned with. His conception of "the state" would be far different from our abstract, impersonal view, which has been shaped by a whole fuckton of bureaucracy. There are laws in place to feed poor people, but an abstract large entity called "the state" isn't what handles that, the parish is.

Jack B Nimble
Dec 25, 2007


Soiled Meat
Regarding that fall o' Rome checklist you'd consult once trump is president, Here's a more modern, popular history view of what is still an intriguing question:

https://www.amazon.com/dp/B01N9ZJXZJ/ref=dp-kindle-redirect?_encoding=UTF8&btkr=1

Edit: I should clarify Mike Duncan specifically says that while it's silly to compare the fall of Rome to the USA, the fall of the Roman REPUBLIC contains a lot more interesting parallels.

Jack B Nimble fucked around with this message at 19:11 on Jul 25, 2017

The Belgian
Oct 28, 2008
The whole list is stupid, but how did they get the live of the state thing? Is there a group of people out there who think Rome was socialist?

Libluini
May 18, 2012

I gravitated towards the Greens, eventually even joining the party itself.

The Linke is a party I grudgingly accept exists, but I've learned enough about DDR-history I can't bring myself to trust a party that was once the SED, a party leading the corrupt state apparatus ...
Grimey Drawer

HEY GAIL posted:

it's difficult to "feel" your way through writing style in a language that isn't your first one, but gibbon is far more eloquent.

Also a number of the ideas, and the vocabulary they're expressed in, are really modern. Like, thinking that "living off the state" is even a thing you can do, much less objecting to it, is not a thing a guy from the 1700s would be concerned with. His conception of "the state" would be far different from our abstract, impersonal view, which has been shaped by a whole fuckton of bureaucracy. There are laws in place to feed poor people, but an abstract large entity called "the state" isn't what handles that, the parish is.

It also probably doesn't help that I always thought Gibbon was someone from the 19th century, not the loving 1700s! (This probably again, because I'm kind of insular in my knowledge: When I was seriously reading stuff about ancient cultures all the time, nearly 100% of it was written by Germans from the 19th century (the rest just from Germans, just not super-ancient ones). So when Gibbon was mentioned, I think I must have assumed that he also was from the 19th century, and just never bothered to check.)

This is by the way the reason why every time I bring up really ancient history, I tend to quote German sources like Hans J. Nissen. It gets even dumber when you get one of his books, open up the appendix and realize he is quoting field specialists from all over the world -and then realize this prejudice you have is completely loving unfounded and you feel like an rear end.

Now to make this post have a reason to exist, you should all try to get Hans J. Nissen's "Geschichte Alt-Vorderasiens", if you can read German. Sadly, I don't think his works are available in English. His style is a bit dry, but he gives you a nice overview about the ancient civilizations of Mesopotamia and the surrounding areas.The book spans the time from 15000 BC up to the Achaemenid Empire, so it also includes stuff like the Ubaid period.

If you can read it, you should get it.

feedmegin
Jul 30, 2008

The Belgian posted:

The whole list is stupid, but how did they get the live of the state thing? Is there a group of people out there who think Rome was socialist?

I mean to be fair panem et circenses.

fishmech
Jul 16, 2006

by VideoGames
Salad Prong

The Belgian posted:

The whole list is stupid, but how did they get the live of the state thing? Is there a group of people out there who think Rome was socialist?

Poorer citizens of Rome and a few of the other major cities rely on the grain/bread rations as a a staple -> therefore the majority of the entire empire relied on The Evil State -> therefore evil socialism destroyed Rome!!

skasion
Feb 13, 2012

Why don't you perform zazen, facing a wall?

The Belgian posted:

The whole list is stupid, but how did they get the live of the state thing? Is there a group of people out there who think Rome was socialist?

Probably from the state grain dole (in the later empire, this was replaced by heavily subsidized bread, salt, meat, and wine). People with a modern day axe to grind about welfare programs love to complain about this as having ruined everything, and indeed in the late republic a number of politicians made attempts to cut down on the numbers of people claiming it, but it was never successfully abolished and by the imperial period no one cared to try. It's hard to make any factual statement as to how much of a drain it was on government resources or how much it contributed to the collapse of the empire in the west, which makes it ideal target for modern "but what if...WERE ROME?!?!,!?!?" type projections.

OneTruePecos
Oct 24, 2010

Libluini posted:

Now to make this post have a reason to exist, you should all try to get Hans J. Nissen's "Geschichte Alt-Vorderasiens", if you can read German. Sadly, I don't think his works are available in English.

He's been translated, for example see https://www.amazon.com/Early-History-Ancient-Near-9000-2000/dp/0226586588/, but the quality is ... not great.

The Belgian
Oct 28, 2008
Oh right, forgot about the bread thing. I gues there's some logic behind it even if it's stupid.

Libluini
May 18, 2012

I gravitated towards the Greens, eventually even joining the party itself.

The Linke is a party I grudgingly accept exists, but I've learned enough about DDR-history I can't bring myself to trust a party that was once the SED, a party leading the corrupt state apparatus ...
Grimey Drawer

OneTruePecos posted:

He's been translated, for example see https://www.amazon.com/Early-History-Ancient-Near-9000-2000/dp/0226586588/, but the quality is ... not great.

And it's only the old, outdated 1st edition. You poor, English-speaking bastards. In 2012, his publisher Oldenbourg Verlag brought out a far superior, completely revised and updated version.

Also the phrase "lavishly illustrated" just makes me smile. In my German original version, there's exactly zero illustrations. There are a couple maps at the end, that's it.

Edit:

Ouch, those comments! The original can be dry as a brick sometimes, but it's fairly easy to understand. Nissen writes some long sentences sometimes, though. I'm guessing that's why the translator is goofing this up: I was warned in university to keep my English sentences short, or I would confuse my English readers. I guess this translator instead decided short, easy-to-understand sentences are for the weak.

Arglebargle III
Feb 21, 2006

Never trust a gibbon IMO.

Jack B Nimble
Dec 25, 2007


Soiled Meat
Slight derail but..Short sentences are good for general utilitarian writing but, like, Faulkner style long sentences are good too? Has opinion really turned so far against long sentences in, say, academia/college? Like I know journalists have to write for everyone, but are long sentences just bad now?

cheetah7071
Oct 20, 2010

honk honk
College Slice

Jack B Nimble posted:

Slight derail but..Short sentences are good for general utilitarian writing but, like, Faulkner style long sentences are good too? Has opinion really turned so far against long sentences in, say, academia/college? Like I know journalists have to write for everyone, but are long sentences just bad now?

I think more to the point English and German have different sorts of long sentences and a direct translation will be hard to follow because of that

homullus
Mar 27, 2009

Jack B Nimble posted:

Slight derail but..Short sentences are good for general utilitarian writing but, like, Faulkner style long sentences are good too? Has opinion really turned so far against long sentences in, say, academia/college? Like I know journalists have to write for everyone, but are long sentences just bad now?

It depends on whom you ask. The more you care about your readers' understanding of your ideas, the more you should be writing shorter sentences. This is true in every context without exception. When you have other priorities -- long traditions, others' expectations, a desire to demonstrate your ability to write complex English -- then you probably won't.

SlothfulCobra
Mar 27, 2011

skasion posted:

Probably from the state grain dole (in the later empire, this was replaced by heavily subsidized bread, salt, meat, and wine). People with a modern day axe to grind about welfare programs love to complain about this as having ruined everything, and indeed in the late republic a number of politicians made attempts to cut down on the numbers of people claiming it, but it was never successfully abolished and by the imperial period no one cared to try. It's hard to make any factual statement as to how much of a drain it was on government resources or how much it contributed to the collapse of the empire in the west, which makes it ideal target for modern "but what if...WERE ROME?!?!,!?!?" type projections.

Weren't most of the big bronze age civilizations working with command economies anyways? When the state controls most of the grain, they're going to end up being the distributor of it every so often.

fishmech
Jul 16, 2006

by VideoGames
Salad Prong

SlothfulCobra posted:

Weren't most of the big bronze age civilizations working with command economies anyways? When the state controls most of the grain, they're going to end up being the distributor of it every so often.

I don't think it's really accurate to call it a command economy when they're only really dealing with one, albeit major, aspect of the whole economy. Especially when very little was touched by the state power when far away from the government center itself.

Power Khan
Aug 20, 2011

by Fritz the Horse

cheetah7071 posted:

I think more to the point English and German have different sorts of long sentences and a direct translation will be hard to follow because of that

German accademic writing can and will pile up incredible constructs that are next to impossible to follow? Why? I was told that this constitutes good writing and deep understanding of the matter, and the person said that with a completely straight face.

It's the complete opposite ofc. The more banal the insight, the harder they will try to mask it with collosal expressions and lenghty sentences.

I loving hate it.

Chichevache
Feb 17, 2010

One of the funniest posters in GIP.

Just not intentionally.

JaucheCharly posted:

The more banal the insight, the harder they will try to mask it with collosal expressions and lenghty sentences.

I thought that was literally the goal of all undergrad classes regardless of discipline. :confused:

HEY GUNS
Oct 11, 2012

FOPTIMUS PRIME

JaucheCharly posted:

German accademic writing can and will pile up incredible constructs that are next to impossible to follow? Why? I was told that this constitutes good writing and deep understanding of the matter, and the person said that with a completely straight face.

It's the complete opposite ofc. The more banal the insight, the harder they will try to mask it with collosal expressions and lenghty sentences.

I loving hate it.
you're also the people who will squeeze a subject dry of all possible informational value no matter what it does to the flow or interest of your writing. the intro to a perfectly good biography of matthias gallas was loving ruined when the guy decided he had to describe the history of the city of trent, which is where gallas was born. who caaaaaaaares

Eela6
May 25, 2007
Shredded Hen

Chichevache posted:

I thought that was literally the goal of all undergrad classes regardless of discipline. :confused:

Math tries to break it's students of this habit, with limited success.

The noun is good. The adverb is evil.

homullus
Mar 27, 2009

Eela6 posted:

The adverb is evil.

Really?

Eela6
May 25, 2007
Shredded Hen

:golfclap:

fantastic in plastic
Jun 15, 2007

The Socialist Workers Party's newspaper proved to be a tough sell to downtown businessmen.

captkirk posted:

I'm seeing this quote being passed around by some folks to draw a parallel to modern culture to a Roman culture prior to the fall of the empire.


How well supported is Gibbon here? At first read, I assumed this didn't actually come from Gibbon because it smells of a reading of history too much through a modern lens.

A list of "causes of the fall of the Roman Empire according to Edward Gibbon" which doesn't have Christianity mentioned at all, let alone not listed at the very top, is ridiculous.

OwlFancier
Aug 22, 2013

HEY GAIL posted:

yiddish and german are related but not identical, it seems
https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/feygele#English

Odd in that to me that has a much more obvious homophone with similar meaning that is probably completely unrelated.

Safety Biscuits
Oct 21, 2010

homullus posted:

It depends on whom you ask. The more you care about your readers' understanding of your ideas, the more you should be writing shorter sentences. This is true in every context without exception. When you have other priorities -- long traditions, others' expectations, a desire to demonstrate your ability to write complex English -- then you probably won't.

This is the ancient history thread, the bad opinions about writing thread is in Creative Convention.

Phobophilia
Apr 26, 2008

by Hand Knit
Also the modern weirdo white supremacists who are really obsessed with the Roman Empire are often of Anglo-Saxon descent... you know, the very barbarians they blame for destroying the Roman Empire.

Grand Fromage
Jan 30, 2006

L-l-look at you bar-bartender, a-a pa-pathetic creature of meat and bone, un-underestimating my l-l-liver's ability to metab-meTABolize t-toxins. How can you p-poison a perfect, immortal alcohOLIC?


I, white supremacist, am going to get super into this Roman state, the most inclusive ancient empire which drew enormous strength from its ability to incorporate and accept a huge diversity of peoples and cultures successfully.

Philippe
Aug 9, 2013

(she/her)

And since they were Italian, they weren't true Aryans anyway. But I don't know that, because I am a dumb

An actual question: How famous were famous people in Rome or Greece? Did people (normal working joes, not patricians) know what Socrates, Catullus, or Cicero look like? Did they care?

fantastic in plastic
Jun 15, 2007

The Socialist Workers Party's newspaper proved to be a tough sell to downtown businessmen.

Tasteful Dickpic posted:

And since they were Italian, they weren't true Aryans anyway. But I don't know that, because I am a dumb

An actual question: How famous were famous people in Rome or Greece? Did people (normal working joes, not patricians) know what Socrates, Catullus, or Cicero look like? Did they care?

In the case of 5th century Athens, the comic poet Aristophanes wrote plays satirizing various men who we know about from other sources. I'm thinking particularly of Socrates (who he portrays as a scam artist in The Clouds) and the populist politician Cleon (who he portrays as a demagogue in The Knights). The humor in those plays works without knowing the particulars of those people, but there must have been a reason Aristophanes chose to name those characters after real contemporary people.

In the Apology, Plato has his character Socrates claim that the play was how most people knew of him and so suggests that there is an atmosphere of bias against him in Athens during his trial. So I think there's something to Socrates being "famous," in the sense of his name being known from the play. But I don't think it was the celebrity kind of fame, or people being able to put a name to a face.

Phobophilia
Apr 26, 2008

by Hand Knit

Grand Fromage posted:

I, white supremacist, am going to get super into this Roman state, the most inclusive ancient empire which drew enormous strength from its ability to incorporate and accept a huge diversity of peoples and cultures successfully.

Make Rome Great Again! *loses ability to raise troops, negotiate with provincials, access to North African grain supply*

fantastic in plastic
Jun 15, 2007

The Socialist Workers Party's newspaper proved to be a tough sell to downtown businessmen.

Phobophilia posted:

Make Rome Great Again! *loses ability to raise troops, negotiate with provincials, access to North African grain supply*

That's what happens when you start letting Germans run things. :agesilaus:

HEY GUNS
Oct 11, 2012

FOPTIMUS PRIME

OwlFancier posted:

Odd in that to me that has a much more obvious homophone with similar meaning that is probably completely unrelated.
given an indefinite number of cultures with an indefinite number of languages, eventually you're gonna reach something like that. Like monkeys and typewriters but for calling a guy a putz.

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homullus
Mar 27, 2009

Safety Biscuits posted:

This is the ancient history thread, the bad opinions about writing thread is in Creative Convention.

Read some ancient history and report back.

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