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Amazing
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# ? Apr 13, 2018 19:08 |
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Mulligan leans back in his chair stroking his chin. "Bet ya didn't see THAT coming, motherfuckers!" e: Why is Memory Patrick surprised she did it? He's been reading her mind since he was 5 years old Flesh Forge fucked around with this message at 21:01 on Apr 13, 2018 |
# ? Apr 13, 2018 20:58 |
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Burkion posted:Man I completely misread this page A few days later, I'm even more pissed at myself
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# ? Apr 13, 2018 21:01 |
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Haha you had faith and hope. Dehumanize yourself and replace with mechanical logic
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# ? Apr 13, 2018 21:32 |
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Logic, eh?
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# ? Apr 13, 2018 21:33 |
So we went from "Please, think well of me," to "Murder him!" in, let's say conservatively, a minute and a half of dialogue? That about right?
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# ? Apr 13, 2018 22:21 |
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I am of the thought there was no pause just a shifting without a clutch tone change.
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# ? Apr 13, 2018 22:27 |
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Old Kentucky Shark posted:So we went from "Please, think well of me," to "Murder him!" in, let's say conservatively, a minute and a half of dialogue? That about right? i have no idea why anyones doing what the're doing right now and im willing to bet the author doesn't either
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# ? Apr 13, 2018 23:07 |
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So despite the mom being Saturday morning cartoon evil the dad dies?
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# ? Apr 13, 2018 23:15 |
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Fister Roboto posted:oh man i'm so distracted by the background changing color that i can't pay attention to this intricate plot!! To be fair the background color did blow that one commenter's mind, so Ostertag's right to use her abilities with discretion.
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# ? Apr 13, 2018 23:20 |
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Mother, I want you to kill Father. Good. Now you, Father, I want you to kill Mother. Wait. I might not have thought this through.
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# ? Apr 13, 2018 23:29 |
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I cried laughing and I cried jizz like the dad
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# ? Apr 13, 2018 23:38 |
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i wish she'd snapped his neck with her bare hands
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# ? Apr 13, 2018 23:43 |
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Tyrone Biggums posted:I cried laughing and I cried jizz like the dad The jizz wad tears were a nice touch yeah
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# ? Apr 14, 2018 00:18 |
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Tyrone Biggums posted:I cried laughing and I cried jizz like the dad
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# ? Apr 14, 2018 00:38 |
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# ? Apr 14, 2018 01:22 |
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7/10 needs the hurrrr
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# ? Apr 14, 2018 02:03 |
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Oof.
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# ? Apr 14, 2018 02:41 |
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Elephant Parade posted:This comic is never going to recover, is it lol recover
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# ? Apr 14, 2018 04:22 |
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Needs her saying "Quiet, quiet you!"
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# ? Apr 14, 2018 04:25 |
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blastron posted:Honestly if he says “Mother, kill Father and I will spare your life” and then shoots her when she does then all of this comic’s sins will be HALFWAY THERE, C’MON DO IT SHOOT THE MOM
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# ? Apr 14, 2018 04:43 |
Since his mother is a fictional sociopath she will manipulate Patrick into letting her go and like, she's gonna be the actual villain or some poo poo. As opposed to a realistic sociopath, I gather, who would just be shrieking at him real loud while making a pinched-up face and learning nothing.
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# ? Apr 14, 2018 06:27 |
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Uncle Wemus posted:So despite the mom being Saturday morning cartoon evil the dad dies? However, that would be if this was competently written. either this is all going to be skipped over and ignored because motive what motive or Patrick is going to sadly relate to Allison how sad he is about his abuse, abuse which makes people sad. There's never going to be a realistic psychological depiction of trauma in this comic, and nobody is ever going to point out how Clevin and Allison mirror Patrick's parents.
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# ? Apr 14, 2018 06:46 |
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Extremely lazy edit
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# ? Apr 14, 2018 07:07 |
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Are these pages providing angles that would work for a loss edit?
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# ? Apr 14, 2018 07:24 |
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Discendo Vox posted:Are these pages providing angles that would work for a loss edit? Not really. Loss.jpg was an action sequence, while this page about about a woman stabbing her husband in the gut is incredibly static and devoid of drama or shots of figures below the shoulders.
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# ? Apr 14, 2018 07:40 |
The final line of the page sets a new bar for how stilted the dialogue in this comic is.
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# ? Apr 14, 2018 08:07 |
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The running schtick is to make the "bad" characters so cartoonishly despicable that the "good" character's only option is to do lovely things to them, thus Patrick is going to stab his mommy and Allison will pat his hand and tell him it was okay that he did that, even though he set this scenario up himself and made his mommy stab his daddy.Zerilan posted:The final line of the page sets a new bar for how stilted the dialogue in this comic is. Yeah the dialogue is endless pratfalls and fat guys falling down stairs
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# ? Apr 14, 2018 08:37 |
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Flesh Forge posted:The running schtick is to make the "bad" characters so cartoonishly despicable that the "good" character's only option is to do lovely things to them, thus Patrick is going to stab his mommy and Allison will pat his hand and tell him it was okay that he did that, even though he set this scenario up himself and made his mommy stab his daddy. Patrick no longer has control of the knife. She is 100% going to lunge at and try to kill him, fall, and stab herself.
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# ? Apr 14, 2018 11:23 |
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clevin
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# ? Apr 14, 2018 11:24 |
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I'm glad avs is free.
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# ? Apr 14, 2018 12:16 |
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PoptartsNinja posted:Patrick no longer has control of the knife. you probably nailed it there, yeah. fake edit: not being sarcastic
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# ? Apr 14, 2018 13:25 |
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Synthbuttrange posted:I'm glad avs is free. A victory for freedom and good posting
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# ? Apr 14, 2018 13:26 |
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Patrick what are you doing? Making my mom stab my dad. It's three in the morning! Why are you making your mom stab your dad at three in the morning? Because I've lost control of the knife. also Clevin
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# ? Apr 14, 2018 13:28 |
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Patrick's mom has to be related to the conspiracy somehow. What's the point of any of this if she's not?
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# ? Apr 14, 2018 13:54 |
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Going to guess there is no point to this.
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# ? Apr 14, 2018 14:12 |
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Axe-man posted:Going to guess there is no point to this. Strong Female Protagonist: Going to guess there is no point to this.
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# ? Apr 14, 2018 17:06 |
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PetraCore posted:My take is that Patrick is pissed that his soft buttered pasta dad enabled the poo poo his mom did to him because he was too blinded by watered down alfredo sauce and a pinch of salt. He doesn't just want to kill his dad, he wants his dad to die knowing that he married a monster and that he didn't notice because he's a loving idiot. Have people forgotten that all this stuff is taking place in his head? Nobody is actually dying, here (reader excluded).
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# ? Apr 14, 2018 17:08 |
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Elephant Parade posted:Have people forgotten that all this stuff is taking place in his head? Nobody is actually dying, here (reader excluded). It's meant to be a memory, this all happened at some point. Also I understand now why Patrick likes Loony-Tunes; his mother was a caricature and his father Elmer Fudd.
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# ? Apr 14, 2018 17:23 |
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Joe Slowboat posted:It's meant to be a memory, this all happened at some point.
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# ? Apr 14, 2018 18:19 |