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Samuringa
Mar 27, 2017

Best advice I was ever given?

"Ticker, you'll be a lot happier once you stop caring about the opinions of a culture that is beneath you."

I learned my worth, learned the places and people that matter.

Opened my eyes.

gimme the GOD drat candy posted:

oh dang, i just realized that nsm might have to save nif from falling to his death because nif doesn't understand the concept of height.

All he gotta do is land on his fist

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Synthbuttrange
May 6, 2007


Good job idiots

Jerusalem
May 20, 2004

Would you be my new best friends?

"Hey let's chat."
"I want to fight."
"Okay let's fight!"
"Well I didn't come here for a fight... but okay!"

Meanwhile fake nurse is ready to commit a murder but is happily leaving a tied up witness behind.

Push El Burrito
May 9, 2006

Soiled Meat
The nurse appears to have taken off her 1960's nurse's outfit, tied up a woman, and put her nurse's outfit on instead.

The MSJ
May 17, 2010

Jerusalem posted:

Meanwhile fake nurse is ready to commit a murder but is happily leaving a tied up witness behind.

She's going for a no-kill run.

Jerusalem
May 20, 2004

Would you be my new best friends?

The MSJ posted:

She's going for a no-kill run.

Yeah but she'll never get silent assassin now :colbert:

Otherkinsey Scale
Jul 17, 2012

Just a little bit of sunshine!
he's not wearing sleeves

Choco1980
Feb 22, 2013

I fell in love with a Video Nasty

Push El Burrito posted:

The nurse appears to have taken off her 1960's nurse's outfit, tied up a woman, and put her nurse's outfit on instead.

I don't think that's the blonde Night Nurse stealing Gloria's outfit.

DACK FAYDEN
Feb 25, 2013

Bear Witness

Synthbuttrange posted:


Good job idiots
Spidey's dialogue in panel 2 is the only way I could tell the fist was actually glowing, rather than action lines.

Samovar
Jun 4, 2011

I'm 😤 not a 🦸🏻‍♂️hero...🧜🏻



Otherkinsey Scale posted:

he's not wearing sleeves

Why did it take about four posts for a person to comment on that?!

graham cracker
Mar 8, 2004

"There is no God! Right, Mama?"

"True."


Synthbuttrange posted:


Good job idiots

Not "I'll show you why people call me Iron Fist."

"I'll show you why I call MYSELF Iron First."

Push El Burrito
May 9, 2006

Soiled Meat

Choco1980 posted:

I don't think that's the blonde Night Nurse stealing Gloria's outfit.

All blonde women are the same person in this comic.

Until they spontaneously change hair colors at least.

Accordion Man
Nov 7, 2012


Buglord

graham cracker posted:

Not "I'll show you why people call me Iron Fist."

"I'll show you why I call MYSELF Iron First."
There is no Newspaper K'un Lun, Newspaper Danny just got a black belt from a strip mall dojo and watched a a lot of Stephen Seagal movies.

Accordion Man fucked around with this message at 02:43 on Jun 15, 2018

Synthbuttrange
May 6, 2007


Goons for hire having a discount day.

gimme the GOD DAMN candy
Jul 1, 2007
bow chicka wow wow

Samuringa
Mar 27, 2017

Best advice I was ever given?

"Ticker, you'll be a lot happier once you stop caring about the opinions of a culture that is beneath you."

I learned my worth, learned the places and people that matter.

Opened my eyes.
You don't need to change absolutely anything on the second panel for it to become Spidey covering Danny's arm with web while both are eager for some hardcore fisting

VictorianQueerLit
Aug 25, 2017

Samuringa posted:

You don't need to change absolutely anything on the second panel for it to become Spidey covering Danny's arm with web while both are eager for some hardcore fisting

evilmiera
Dec 14, 2009

Status: Ravenously Rambunctious
Something about the art on Fist is bugging the hell out of me and I am not even an artist. Can someone with more experience list why my brain thinks this looks all wrong? Besides the super lazy strips of cloth on his mask that is.

ConfusedUs
Feb 24, 2004

Bees?
You want fucking bees?
Here you go!
ROLL INITIATIVE!!





evilmiera posted:

Something about the art on Fist is bugging the hell out of me and I am not even an artist. Can someone with more experience list why my brain thinks this looks all wrong? Besides the super lazy strips of cloth on his mask that is.

It's how his goatee strip makes it look like he has fangs.

Scaramouche
Mar 26, 2001

SPACE FACE! SPACE FACE!

The vest and headscarf is a very old outfit but I'm pretty sure in that era the character was always clean shaven. Also I'm pretty sure the vest itself is wrong but phone posting so can't bale arsed to check.

Ikasuhito
Sep 29, 2013

Haram as Fuck.


I love that a man is about to die because Spidey apparently just cant stand the idea of not knowing who every masked loon in New York is.

evilmiera
Dec 14, 2009

Status: Ravenously Rambunctious

Scaramouche posted:

The vest and headscarf is a very old outfit but I'm pretty sure in that era the character was always clean shaven. Also I'm pretty sure the vest itself is wrong but phone posting so can't bale arsed to check.

It is less how stuff is different from the usual getup and more "this art looks bad for reasons that are different/worse than the usual NSM reasons".

VictorianQueerLit
Aug 25, 2017
I think it's probably how he is 75% shirtless all the time. The weekday artist isn't great with bodies and anatomy but does fine when people are clothed/in full costume and don't need accurate muscles/lines.

Also the weekend artist puts about 10x more effort into his Iron Fist. I noticed it doing one of my edits since there was so much extra shading and detail.

davidspackage
May 16, 2007

Nap Ghost
Love how they were about to throw down last strip, and now they're standing around like a pair of assholes at a bus stop.

Cat Mattress
Jul 14, 2012

by Cyrano4747

Synthbuttrange posted:


Goons for hire having a discount day.

It's not a nurse your pal is cosplaying...

evilmiera
Dec 14, 2009

Status: Ravenously Rambunctious

VictorianQueerLit posted:

I think it's probably how he is 75% shirtless all the time. The weekday artist isn't great with bodies and anatomy but does fine when people are clothed/in full costume and don't need accurate muscles/lines.

Also the weekend artist puts about 10x more effort into his Iron Fist. I noticed it doing one of my edits since there was so much extra shading and detail.

That's probably it. The pose on Fist looks stiff and unnatural, especially when he is just standing still on the roof, and with the shoddily drawn muscles he just looks like a badly molded action figure.

Android Blues
Nov 22, 2008

His jacket looks very broad and isn't hanging naturally, so there's that too. Also, on the first panel, the perspective is wacky. Look at Danny's jacket, his bare chest, and then his legs. The upper body is angled down, but the legs aren't moving towards a vanishing point like they ought to - instead, they're a consistent width all the way down.

Mx.
Dec 16, 2006

I'm a great fan! When I watch TV I'm always saying "That's political correctness gone mad!"
Why thankyew!


The artist can't figure out how to have the tattoo and put detail in the torso because with that design it'd be all weird tangent lines so it generally looks weird i guess

Kwyndig
Sep 23, 2006

Heeeeeey


Maybe they should consult with someone who regularly draws Iron Fist then because this wonky anatomy is weird even for the weekend crew.

Murdstone
Jun 14, 2005

I'm feeling Jimmy


:perfect:

I guess this thread is full of people are know more about drawing superheroes than the Larry Lieber.

ZeroCount
Aug 12, 2013


You'd think Peter of all people would respect a dude's secret identity.

Synthbuttrange
May 6, 2007



Thats it Jimmy Woo's going to die

Manatee Cannon
Aug 26, 2010



this is gonna lead to that justice league joke where lex is in the flash's body, unmasks to find out his secret identity, and finds out he has no idea who it is

howe_sam
Mar 7, 2013

Creepy little garbage eaters

Manatee Cannon posted:

this is gonna lead to that justice league joke where lex is in the flash's body, unmasks to find out his secret identity, and finds out he has no idea who it is

I feel like they already did that in the Ant Man arc.

Noper Q
Nov 7, 2012

Spidey completely wrapped Fisto in webbing but somehow didn't get the tail of his bandanna?

Lurdiak
Feb 26, 2006

I believe in a universe that doesn't care, and people that do.


Synthbuttrange posted:



Thats it Jimmy Woo's going to die

That's definitely not how his iron fist powers work.

Doc Hawkins
Jun 15, 2010

Dashing? But I'm not even moving!


:aaa: He can make his fist as hot as an iron!

MorningMoon
Dec 29, 2013

He's been tapping into Aunt May's bank account!
Didn't I kill him with a HELICOPTER?
Now, now, we all now it's Newspaper Spider-tradition to use webs against the new team-up body so they can show how useless webs are. It is law.

Evrart Claire
Jan 11, 2008

Synthbuttrange posted:



Thats it Jimmy Woo's going to die

I dunno Spidey, I thought it was recently established that wanting to reveal someone's secret identity gets you left to die in a swamp.

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Cabbit
Jul 19, 2001

Is that everything you have?

Lurdiak posted:

That's definitely not how his iron fist powers work.

It looks like he flexed so hard that the webbing exploded off his body.

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