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apatheticman
May 13, 2003

Wedge Regret
What do you think Kyle's tragic backstory is?

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chglcu
May 17, 2007

I'm so bored with the USA.

The_Doctor posted:

3 for 3 enjoying. Sadly I remember that seasons are only 10 episodes long now, and we’re not getting 22 straight eps of this.

I like Kyle constantly feeling like he’s in over his head.

Also, the aliens on the planet last week gave me Fantastic Planet vibes, being all blue and spiny.

My initial thought was “who the gently caress is Kyle?” Keep forgetting that guy’s name.

I actually didn’t especially enjoy this episode. I thought the moth people premise was a little stupid and it also was wrapped up to quickly and easily. That said, it’s still episodic trek, so that’s good. I’d say the show is more at 2.5 of 3.

Grand Fromage
Jan 30, 2006

L-l-look at you bar-bartender, a-a pa-pathetic creature of meat and bone, un-underestimating my l-l-liver's ability to metab-meTABolize t-toxins. How can you p-poison a perfect, immortal alcohOLIC?


apatheticman posted:

What do you think Kyle's tragic backstory is?

Had to shave off his incredible mustache.

The Chairman
Jun 30, 2003

But you forget, mon ami, that there is evil everywhere under the sun

apatheticman posted:

What do you think Kyle's tragic backstory is?

cursed by a mummy

Strom Cuzewon
Jul 1, 2010

apatheticman posted:

What do you think Kyle's tragic backstory is?

He absorbed his twin in the womb and became a transporter chief so that he can learn to beam his brother out of his body.

Charity Porno
Aug 2, 2021

by Hand Knit
It's so lame all these characters have tragic backstories.

Worf-entire family killed by Romulans
Riker - raised by absent father after his mother died
Yar - Rape gang colony
Wesley - father killed at extremely young age
Beverly - widowed with a son
Deanna - Father died at a young age

These hack writers

Terror Sweat
Mar 15, 2009

The_Doctor posted:

3 for 3 enjoying. Sadly I remember that seasons are only 10 episodes long now, and we’re not getting 22 straight eps of this.

I like Kyle constantly feeling like he’s in over his head.

Also, the aliens on the planet last week gave me Fantastic Planet vibes, being all blue and spiny.

22 eps would be great. They would have to stretch the budget and we wouldn't get all this over produced stuff. It still feels too filmy and grand to me

apatheticman
May 13, 2003

Wedge Regret

Gangringo posted:

Everyone has tragic backstories because sane, well-adjusted people born into a post-scarcity utopia don't expose themselves to the myriad of dangers of unexplored space.

The logical response to seeing 150+ years of comfortable existence free of any responsibilities in your future is to be extremely risk-averse.

They should just really make this cannon and put the issue to bed.

Terror Sweat
Mar 15, 2009

Charity Porno posted:

It's so lame all these characters have tragic backstories.

Worf-entire family killed by Romulans
Riker - raised by absent father after his mother died
Yar - Rape gang colony
Wesley - father killed at extremely young age
Beverly - widowed with a son
Deanna - Father died at a young age

These hack writers

Picard: mother was insane and killed herself
Geordie: is a boring nerd his whole life

apatheticman
May 13, 2003

Wedge Regret
A boring nerd who sexually harassed a hologram.

T.C.
Feb 10, 2004

Believe.
I wasn't hugely enthused, but it was fine. It mostly felt like it was there to explain Una's secret, except the secret wasn't the dilemma of the episode. Everyone was pretty much okay with her situation once she told them. As an audience we didn't understand that there was any internal tension through the episode until they did the reveal, and even then it mostly relied on the audience understanding the strength of the in-universe stigma.

If they were going to do this reveal, it seems like it would have been better suited for an episode where the morality of genetic engineering was the episode conflict like it was in the Bashir episodes. It may have been more interesting as well if the audience was brought into whatever internal struggle was happening.

Also, it didn't seem like any of the characters really made active decisions that resolved the plot. Things were driven by outside forces and they were along for the ride.

Having the solution be "I stood nearby" was not amazing writing.

Not the worst, just kind of felt like a time filler with mediocre execution

Nitrousoxide
May 30, 2011

do not buy a oneplus phone



Terror Sweat posted:

Picard: mother was insane and killed herself
Geordie: is a boring nerd his whole life

Geordie: No bitches

galenanorth
May 19, 2016

Charity Porno posted:

It's so lame all these characters have tragic backstories.

Worf-entire family killed by Romulans
Riker - raised by absent father after his mother died
Yar - Rape gang colony
Wesley - father killed at extremely young age
Beverly - widowed with a son
Deanna - Father died at a young age

These hack writers

tbf, the reveals of some of these were more spread out

Big Mean Jerk
Jan 27, 2009

Well, of course I know him.
He's me.
Part of it is probably a deliberate response to extremely valid criticism leveled at Disco in regard to its supporting cast. It seems like a lot all at once now, but it’s probably a good sign for the long run that they’re focusing on giving these characters actual backstories right out of the gate.

Rhys, Bryce, Not-Airiam, and Linus have been on Disco for four seasons now and we know gently caress-all about any of them. I’m a Disco apologist and I still can’t keep Rhys and Bryce’s names straight because they’re barely even characters.

nine-gear crow
Aug 10, 2013

galenanorth posted:

tbf, the reveals of some of these were more spread out

Episode 2 of TNG is literally DATA I GREW UP ON THE RAPE PLANET, gently caress ME HARD ROBOT MAN! :byodame:

I don't quite blame SNW for getting this poo poo out the door and over with as fast as possible in order to make better use of their time elsewhere unlike television equivalent of a Russian tank stuck in a Ukrainian mud field that was this season of Picard.

Charity Porno
Aug 2, 2021

by Hand Knit
I also feel if we weren't getting these people's backstories people would be complaining so

Brawnfire
Jul 13, 2004

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Didn't Geordi have a mom whose ship went missing?

Oyster
Nov 11, 2005

I GOT FLAT FEET JUST LIKE MY HERO MEGAMAN
Total Clam
I like that Majel Barret's Number One broke the stereotype for women in the 60s (Pike makes a comment about not being used to women on the bridge in The Cage) and Rebecca Romijin's Number One breaks t he stereotype of genetic engineering being evil.

Charity Porno
Aug 2, 2021

by Hand Knit

Brawnfire posted:

Didn't Geordi have a mom whose ship went missing?

Yeah but that happened in season seven, its not backstory so much as "story"

Kill All Cops
Apr 11, 2007


Pacheco de Chocobo



Hell Gem
at least nobody on deep space 9 had tragic backstories

MLSM
Apr 3, 2021

by Azathoth
Alex kurtzman ruins everything he touches

They literally handed Star Trek to the writer of bayformers lmao

Powered Descent
Jul 13, 2008

We haven't had that spirit here since 1969.

Some good moments in this episode but it's still the weakest of the three we've had so far, I think.

One thing I'm still not clear on: why does Dr. M'Benga have to keep his dematerialized daughter a secret, and take the risk of bringing her along as a stowaway? The transporter thing is working perfectly; you'd think this would be a standard thing that a hospital on Earth could do in this kind of case. (Or even for short term cases: "The surgeon isn't back from lunch yet, so put that stabbing victim into the pattern buffer so he won't bleed out before she gets here".) Maybe it's only that this is a risky, warranty-voiding use of a transporter and no hospital wants to take the chance of a Sonak-style accident? After all, when Scotty did the same trick to himself some 40-ish years later, it was something of a desperate hack, and even in TNG times, everyone was amazed that it had worked at all.

Blamestorm
Aug 14, 2004

We LOL at death! Watch us LOL. Love the LOL.
I figured flagship-grade teleporters would be absolute top of the line leading edge tech that may not be common across the rest of Starfleet/the Federation. It’s hard because the tech level between SNW/Discovery has felt much closer to TNG just due to changed contemporary tech expectations but that’s what I’m assuming in general, in TNG they made a point of noting how much of the Enterprise was cutting edge (eg the holodecks) and I’m assuming the same thing here. It’s the best of the best etc.

nine-gear crow
Aug 10, 2013

Kill All Cops posted:

at least nobody on deep space 9 had tragic backstories

* Cpt. Sisko has left the chat
* Maj. Kira has left the chat
* Dr. Bashir has left the chat
* PC Odo has left the chat
* Chief O'Brien has left the chat
* Lt. Dax has left the chat
* Jake Sisko has left the chat




* Gul Dukat has entered the chat :heysexy:

I Am Fowl
Mar 8, 2008

nononononono

Kill All Cops posted:

at least nobody on deep space 9 had tragic backstories

What was Quark's tragic backstory? He shoulda gotten into arm-dealing like his cousin, Gaila, but he became a bartender instead? Coulda had his own moon!

Khanstant
Apr 5, 2007
when i write characters they all have uplifting backstories like their mom split into two equally good moms, or their kid got really sick threads and everyone was inspired by their incredible fashion, or someone who had an unavoidable vision of their inevitable fate to eat some of the best andorian nachoes in the galaxy.

nine-gear crow
Aug 10, 2013

I Am Fowl posted:

What was Quark's tragic backstory? He shoulda gotten into arm-dealing like his cousin, Gaila, but he became a bartender instead? Coulda had his own moon!

Quark's tragic backstory is that he's probably Zek's bastard son.

Grand Fromage
Jan 30, 2006

L-l-look at you bar-bartender, a-a pa-pathetic creature of meat and bone, un-underestimating my l-l-liver's ability to metab-meTABolize t-toxins. How can you p-poison a perfect, immortal alcohOLIC?


The point is not that a tragic backstory is inherently bad, it isn't, but we've watched Disco and Picard doing it over and over and over and over and over and loving it up every single time for so long that we're all understandably gun shy at seeing it yet again. Also the fact that Disco especially leans on it so much as a crutch makes it groan worthy every time it appears again. So far nothing SNW has done in that direction has been egregious, if it weren't for the past six seasons of dogshit it wouldn't matter, but we're all understandably wary of these people and their tendency to poo poo up TV shows.

Gwaihir
Dec 8, 2009
Hair Elf

Nitrousoxide posted:

Why? I thought this was a really great episode.

click his rap sheet and then the terrible posting makes sense. SNW is good.

XboxPants
Jan 30, 2006

Steven doesn't want me watching him sleep anymore.

Grand Fromage posted:

The point is not that a tragic backstory is inherently bad, it isn't, but we've watched Disco and Picard doing it over and over and over and over and over and loving it up every single time for so long that we're all understandably gun shy at seeing it yet again. So far nothing SNW has done in that direction has been egregious, if it weren't for the past six seasons of dogshit it wouldn't matter, but we're all understandably wary of these people and their tendency to poo poo up TV shows.

I think other posters are right that the 10-episode pacing really mucks things up here, too. It's fine for every character to have one or more traumatic event in their personal history! But it gets grim when every single conversation with every character is about their cancer daughter or not getting a new breeding sack or whatever.

Big Mean Jerk
Jan 27, 2009

Well, of course I know him.
He's me.

Gwaihir posted:

click his rap sheet and then the terrible posting makes sense. SNW is good.

He’s one of those Russian bots designed to stir poo poo up on twitter, but someone hosed up and implanted him in SA instead

Grand Fromage
Jan 30, 2006

L-l-look at you bar-bartender, a-a pa-pathetic creature of meat and bone, un-underestimating my l-l-liver's ability to metab-meTABolize t-toxins. How can you p-poison a perfect, immortal alcohOLIC?


XboxPants posted:

I think other posters are right that the 10-episode pacing really mucks things up here, too. It's fine for every character to have one or more traumatic event in their personal history! But it gets grim when every single conversation with every character is about their cancer daughter or not getting a new breeding sack or whatever.

Yeah that last ten minutes of actually I'm an alien actually I'm a deus ex machina actually I know I'm Hitler's daughter actually I have a kid stashed in the transporter was just way too much. I didn't hate this ep or anything but it whiffed for me.

Kill All Cops
Apr 11, 2007


Pacheco de Chocobo



Hell Gem
tragic backstories that motivate people to pursue a life and career in starfleet is as integral to star trek as a thing that threatens the lives of every crew member but is resolved offscreen 5-10 mins before the episode ends

apatheticman
May 13, 2003

Wedge Regret

Kill All Cops posted:

at least nobody on deep space 9 had tragic backstories

Jake Sisko's mom died but otherwise seems like a pretty chill life.

bltzn
Oct 26, 2020

For the record I do not have a foot fetish.
Okay episode imo. The one big thing that didn't really make any sense is how could no. 1 have possibly kept the fact that she is a literal alien a secret from Starfleet. They even made a point of acknowledging that alien physique is different with Spock's carotid artery comment.

I'm also pretty sure the Illyrians have nothing to do with the ones from ENT and whoever named them just forgot that episode existed (I did too).

Binary Badger
Oct 11, 2005

Trolling Link for a decade


At least we know season 2 is a lock.. but only 10 eps?

primaltrash
Feb 11, 2008

(Thought-ful Croak)
TNG tragic backstories in first season.

Picard was the commanding officer of Dr. Crusher's husband and Wesley's father when Jack died.

Riker and Troi had a previous relationship and Riker ghosted her.

Data was deactivated and the colony destroyed by the Crystalline Entity, revelead he has an evil twin.

Worf was found buried alive in the rubble of Khitomer, family dead.

Rape gangs.

nine-gear crow
Aug 10, 2013

Big Mean Jerk posted:

He’s one of those Russian bots designed to stir poo poo up on twitter, but someone hosed up and implanted him in SA instead

It's like C-SPAM coalesced into a single poster and decided to haunt the Star Trek TV thread of all possible options across SA.

FishFood
Apr 1, 2012

Now with brine shrimp!
Overall I feel like SNW episode 3 is a solid 6/10: a classic OK-but-not-great Trek episode.

I really liked the first half to 2/3 but once Number One revealed herself to be an Illyrian and then confronted La'an in the warp core it felt pretty rushed and fell apart a little bit for me. I liked all the story beats but I think they needed a little bit more time to breathe, the episode just kind of ended and then there was like 15 minutes of heart-to-heart conversations that felt slightly unearned. They should limit themselves to like, 1 big emotional love chat per episode.

I think Doctor M'Benga's reveal could have waited for another episode, it just felt really half-baked here. A slight tease for a future episode would have worked better, like maybe Number One asks why he put updating the emergency transporter as "low-priority" in the repair queue they abandoned early in episode 1 and he gives some excuse that she's suspicious of but doesn't confront him about yet.

I didn't really like Nurse Chapel whipping up the cure off-screen, there should have been a scene there where she and Number One actually figure it out and synthesize it. I would have liked more context about the Illyrians and augments in general to give everything a bit more weight, and also maybe some more talk about why the Federation outlawed generic engineering. Could be something Pike and Spock learn more about while they're on the surface, I really liked all their stuff together and definitely wanted more.

Again, the first half was great! I liked the mystery of the illness, I liked the little teases that Una was not reacting in the same way as everyone else, I liked every scene Hemmer was in, it was classic "mysterious disease makes everyone behave weird" Trek. Just could have used some tightening up
.

I think this will be remembered as a "fine but not great" episode, but the episodic format is showing its strength here because I am still really, really excited for the next adventure.

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Kill All Cops
Apr 11, 2007


Pacheco de Chocobo



Hell Gem

FishFood posted:

Again, the first half was great! I liked the mystery of the illness, I liked the little teases that Una was not reacting in the same way as everyone else, I liked every scene Hemmer was in, it was classic "mysterious disease makes everyone behave weird" Trek. Just could have used some tightening up.

Yeah, I dug that it seemed kinda like the smart engineer guy was doing something initiative then it turns out he has the light disease and the smart thing he was trying to do was beam up lava to melt the spaceship

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