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e: more found comics BasicLich has a new favorite as of 08:04 on Jul 24, 2022 |
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I love Casey's coloring/shading, and that TV speaker's aggressive speech bubble background texture is a great idea. But the TV speaker character is maybe too confusing/abstract? Is it hovering at height in front of the chalkboard or is that almost a separate panel? And neither arm looks proportionate, or too detailed or not detailed enough, its right forearm/elbow is really odd and lining it up with the background room corner line draws the eye to it
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# ? Jul 24, 2022 08:35 |
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"I have the ability to affect people's feelings! I kissed this lesbian and now she's smiling!"
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# ? Jul 24, 2022 09:11 |
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B Squad Leader posted:I love Casey's coloring/shading, and that TV speaker's aggressive speech bubble background texture is a great idea. But the TV speaker character is maybe too confusing/abstract? Is it hovering at height in front of the chalkboard or is that almost a separate panel? And neither arm looks proportionate, or too detailed or not detailed enough, its right forearm/elbow is really odd and lining it up with the background room corner line draws the eye to it It is hovering entirely, and both arms are both disproportionate, almost falling apart. I think I missed the mark with what I intended, I wanted something that looked "wrong" in every aspect, while being recognizably human-esque. I wanted it to be constantly oozing like an open wound, and covered in teeth and eyes while visibly falling apart. I wanted you to look at him and go "gently caress ew," and then juxtapose that initial feeling with a big cracked LCD smile, and casual clothing, and a relaxed pose, like he knows he looks like a hosed up fun house mirror of a person, but he has a job to do, and he likes doing it so he'll try his best. I even made his fingers these square hosed up lore olympus sausages because I find them grotesque and off-putting. Elfface posted:"I have the ability to affect people's feelings! I kissed this lesbian and now she's smiling!" lmao.
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# ? Jul 24, 2022 09:18 |
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Boba Pearl posted:It is hovering entirely, and both arms are both disproportionate, almost falling apart. I think I missed the mark with what I intended, I wanted something that looked "wrong" in every aspect, while being recognizably human-esque. I wanted it to be constantly oozing like an open wound, and covered in teeth and eyes while visibly falling apart. I wanted you to look at him and go "gently caress ew," and then juxtapose that initial feeling with a big cracked LCD smile, and casual clothing, and a relaxed pose, like he knows he looks like a hosed up fun house mirror of a person, but he has a job to do, and he likes doing it so he'll try his best. I even made his fingers these square hosed up lore olympus sausages because I find them grotesque and off-putting. You got the "wrong" right for sure, but you could probably go even more off-putting if that's the intention. Maybe standing up straight and in-shape is too formal, sort of slumped or hunchbacked might fit your vibe? RGB from Property Of Hate is very sharply dressed and has that straight-line cartoon action, perhaps yours works better with more curved/rounded features?
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# ? Jul 24, 2022 10:03 |
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forming 31-36 last time: beasts attack mankind so the nephilim decide to get their dicks wet; ghob is furious at the continued move away from nature by the atlanteans; noah is a useless cock they're a bit smaller this time so you get more comics
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# ? Jul 24, 2022 11:03 |
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Absurd Alhazred posted:I see he's just plain stealing ideas from Lovecraft's Commonplace Book now. quote:Inhabitants of Zinge, over whom the star Canopus rises every night, are always gay and without sorrow. [x]
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# ? Jul 24, 2022 11:45 |
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Boba Pearl posted:It is hovering entirely, and both arms are both disproportionate, almost falling apart. I think I missed the mark with what I intended, I wanted something that looked "wrong" in every aspect, while being recognizably human-esque. I wanted it to be constantly oozing like an open wound, and covered in teeth and eyes while visibly falling apart. I wanted you to look at him and go "gently caress ew," and then juxtapose that initial feeling with a big cracked LCD smile, and casual clothing, and a relaxed pose, like he knows he looks like a hosed up fun house mirror of a person, but he has a job to do, and he likes doing it so he'll try his best. I even made his fingers these square hosed up lore olympus sausages because I find them grotesque and off-putting. I think his character design would make more sense if he showed up in more than one panel, and we saw him from another side, maybe. I like the concept, but it needs more space to shine. I also really like that you're leaning into "let's have some dang conversations up in here instead of just punch".
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# ? Jul 24, 2022 12:56 |
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Sleve McDichael posted:
GU... GUU... GURUU ..!
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# ? Jul 24, 2022 13:52 |
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Sleve McDichael posted:
This is gonna end with the gross guy drinking their bath water, isn't it? Though if that turns out to be true, Junji Ito really was ahead of his time.
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# ? Jul 24, 2022 14:21 |
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Boba Pearl posted:
I’m not usually a reader of your comic, so please take my comments with a grain of salt. But this last set of panels caught my eye and helped frame some of what i like and dislike about the art. Someone previously mentioned your linework being inconsistent. I think you’re getting better at it now. I also like the grittiness, it helps the make the visual style and color pallete look less thorsby-like. The last panel here is very good. It feels like all the visual elements go together as a cohesive style. The two panels before look strange to me. I think the flat blue on the tongue and eyes make them look like stickers on top of the comic. I’m not sure what it takes to make them appear more visually consistent though. Maybe some shading, color variation/texture or something. But then, the saliva detail feels over worked on top of that, as if somehow its too detailed for the rest of the art. It is a remarkably horny bit of drawing, and i cant tell you exactly why, so i’m assuming that bit was conveyed very well. Your art has really improved since you started posting it. B Squad Leader’s recommendation of looking at Property of Hate I think is a good recommendation in additional ways. The panels with wilder color pallets and action could give you some good points of reference.
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# ? Jul 24, 2022 14:30 |
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thetoughestbean posted:
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No, you don't know Ray Smuckles. The chickens are given lady-blumpkins This is why we don't see more of Todd.
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# ? Jul 24, 2022 14:58 |
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I love this
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# ? Jul 24, 2022 15:39 |
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Squidster posted:Qualia the Purple Qualia the Purple Episode 14: 19-28 of 28 --Kill Count--- Gaku: 2 x Jaunt, 1 x Gaku, 3 x Alice, 2 x Dorothy Frank Jaunt: 1 x Yukari's entire family, 1 x Gaku, 1 x Plane Marii Yukari: 1 x serial killer Serial killer: 1 x cop
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# ? Jul 24, 2022 17:44 |
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Shirley Yes, Mori spent the better part of five pages to just show off Shirley's new maid uniform. KennyMan666 has a new favorite as of 18:13 on Jul 24, 2022 |
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# ? Jul 24, 2022 18:33 |
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strong labyrinth guy energy here
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# ? Jul 24, 2022 18:38 |
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https://lpix.org/4335724/bleatup.jpg e: It's not frontal it's in the background and I dont think your boss likes you looking at comics at work anyways but I put it in a link Somebody has a new favorite as of 08:41 on Jul 25, 2022 |
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PYF Comic is a little more lax about NWS stuff that most of the threads here but I think we draw the line at full frontal nudity.
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# ? Jul 24, 2022 19:18 |
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Selklubber posted:e: It's not frontal it's in the background
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my boss would fire me if he found this on our systems
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# ? Jul 24, 2022 19:57 |
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Graveyard Quest Part 3.3
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# ? Jul 24, 2022 20:43 |
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New Adventures of the Duck Avenger And that's the end of Shooting Star. Turns out the cure for getting space gunned is getting space gunned again. Hair of the dog.
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World Famous W posted:Graveyard Quest Aw
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e-dt posted:
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# ? Jul 24, 2022 21:42 |
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KennyMan666 posted:Yes, Mori spent the better part of five pages to just show off Shirley's new maid uniform.
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# ? Jul 24, 2022 22:03 |
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todays oglaf is slightly nws but the song sung to the tune of sponge bob theme song is A+ not sure the rules on linking nws stuff so i wont but go check it out
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# ? Jul 24, 2022 23:32 |
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Selklubber posted:e: It's not frontal it's in the background and I dont think your boss likes you looking at comics at work anyways but I put it in a link The "hermaphroditic overlords from outer space impregnating Eve against a big rear end rock" comic regularly features genitals of several kinds and I don't think anyone ITT gives a poo poo. Post away my dude.
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Mr. Sunshine posted:The "hermaphroditic overlords from outer space impregnating Eve against a big rear end rock" comic regularly features genitals of several kinds and I don't think anyone ITT gives a poo poo. Post away my dude. That's different, it's from the Bible and therefore respectable unlike the rest of the heathen smut that gets posted here.
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# ? Jul 24, 2022 23:46 |
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Also it got posted like seven posts upthread
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# ? Jul 24, 2022 23:49 |
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Laserjet 4P posted:strong labyrinth guy energy here
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Squidster posted:Qualia the Purple The chapter's over. Where is my title page Squidster
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Arthur's pictures are probably all of Oscar night. Mr T recorded that album just to make a car payment Monotremes love a good oil salad
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# ? Jul 25, 2022 02:56 |
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If only someone shouting "BE HAPPY" at you worked
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Boys' Night Out
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trapped mouse posted:The chapter's over. Where is my title page Squidster I'd wanted to delay the magic maid reveal for a few days.
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# ? Jul 25, 2022 03:25 |