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Cicero
Dec 17, 2003

Jumpjet, melta, jumpjet. Repeat for ten minutes or until victory is assured.

LLSix posted:

I don’t have and likely never will have KU. Series that move to KU are series I’ll never read.
You can still buy the Kindle ebook even if it's on KU. Using a subscription is optional.

blastron posted:

I’m getting ads on Royal Road for a serial that proudly proclaims, before it even tells you the title of the novel, that it’s “never going to KU”. Is KU such an annoyance to the community that saying a novel will never go there is something to advertise?
When a RR series goes to KU, the chapters that go on the Kindle store are removed from RR, of course for some people that's gonna be real annoying.

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Sailor Dave
Sep 19, 2013
Yeah it seems like a reassurance that their story will (probably) never be pulled out from under the readers.

Kalas
Jul 27, 2007
Use an epub addon and never worry about this.

And at some point or another I've probably given every author it's worth doing this with money so I don't even feel guilty about it.

Selkie Myth
May 25, 2013

Sailor Dave posted:

Yeah it seems like a reassurance that their story will (probably) never be pulled out from under the readers.

Except this is pretty wrong. It just pulls it out from new readers, and taps into an entirely different set of new readers. If you're current on a story that goes to KU... the new chapters are still appearing.

asur
Dec 28, 2012
People seem very annoyed about a change that doesn't impact them if they're already reading the series. I seriously doubt that many are rereading.

A big flaming stink
Apr 26, 2010
TWI Patreon 9.23 GGGGGGGGG: Pirateaba does not gently caress around with horror lmao

dis astranagant
Dec 14, 2006

asur posted:

People seem very annoyed about a change that doesn't impact them if they're already reading the series. I seriously doubt that many are rereading.

You'd be surprised. The discord and subreddit are full of people who go quote hunting every other day and wonder where half the day went after their 2 dozenth reread of half of book 5 or 7

tithin
Nov 14, 2003


[Grandmaster Tactician]



A big flaming stink posted:

TWI Patreon 9.23 GGGGGGGGG: Pirateaba does not gently caress around with horror lmao

what a loving chapter, jesus christ

BadMedic
Jul 22, 2007

I've never actually seen him heal anybody.
Pillbug
TBH my only problem with KU is amazon demands exclusivity, and that worries me. Like the whole point of those terms is to induce a de facto monopoly, and I'm worried what will happen when amazon decides to start really exploiting that monopoly.

Edit: just to be clear I'm not attacking anyone who takes that deal. People gotta eat, and financial stability is really important so it's honestly the correct choice to cash out. I'm just sad that we are in a situation where it is the correct choice in the first place.

BadMedic fucked around with this message at 12:33 on Nov 2, 2022

Larry Parrish
Jul 9, 2012

by Jeffrey of YOSPOS
They pretty much already have a monopoly. They have the biggest storefront and it's also the least lovely one, although that's not saying much.

DACK FAYDEN
Feb 25, 2013

Bear Witness
but they don't have...

Graydon Saunders

RBA-Wintrow
Nov 4, 2009


Clapping Larry

Megazver posted:


Beers and Beards: A Cozy Dwarf LitRPG is about a guy who was a professional brewer, distiller and vintner (this is all one guy!) who dies and reincarnates into a dwarf. These dwarves, as per classic fantasy lore, LOVE beer but the one beer recipe they know, love, drink and worship as sacred and inviolable is dogpiss by modern Earth standards, so our hero resolves to bring the dwarven society into a new golden age of beer hipster brews, even if he has to drag them kicking and screaming by their beards into it.

Fun premise and it's all kinda cute, but it's the first thing the author wrote so the actual writing is somewhat rough. Still, it has enough charm that I am still keeping an eye on it, but I fast-skim it a few chapters at a time.

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Rob Filter posted:

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/58065/quill-still

I've been reading this somewhat-litrpg very-portal fantasy lately and enjoying it. The prose is competent, and I say that as praise. The story is breezy and wish fulfilled in a "I have a very nice breakfast in fantasy alt-socialism" way rather than "I can murder god with my bare +5 hands" way. The prose is delightfully obtuse and indirect, which appeals to me. Exactly my kind of genre trash.

Thank you for these, I binged through them.
The Dwarves one is quite nice as a light snack. The gods of that world have a plan, no patience left, and they're not subtle about it. The dwarves are a disappointment to them and need to shape up!

Quill & Still is, so far, very philosophical with rather complicated alchemy. It has a strong focus on interpersonal relations and working through trauma and emotional baggage. Its good, and I love the System messages being Angelic High Prose. But it's hardly light-hearted progression fantasy. Still very good and had me wanting more. And left me thinking how my upbringing and religion shaped me as a person.

LLSix
Jan 20, 2010

The real power behind countless overlords

Quill & Still isn't bad. I don't think I've actually enjoyed any of the chapters though.

Being angry at religion and then deciding to worship the Greek gods, who even their own myths generally present as the antagonists, is uh, certainly a decision.

The system messages are a good running gag.

Lone Goat
Apr 16, 2003

When life gives you lemons, suplex those lemons.




A big flaming stink posted:

TWI Patreon 9.23 GGGGGGGGG: Pirateaba does not gently caress around with horror lmao

You know it's going to be a good one when it starts with a content warning

DACK FAYDEN
Feb 25, 2013

Bear Witness

LLSix posted:

Being angry at religion and then deciding to worship the Greek gods, who even their own myths generally present as the antagonists, is uh, certainly a decision.
I mean being angry at religion and then worshipping a god you literally met and who implicitly threatened to murder you if you didn't multiple times seems reasonable to me

and then as long as you're worshipping one, the second one was less of a dick to the protagonist so might as well both etc

Patrick Spens
Jul 21, 2006

"Every quarterback says they've got guts, But how many have actually seen 'em?"
Pillbug
The second one also built her a body that had a fatal allergic reaction to the planet that he sent her to! And didn't mention it! Good luck she didn't take her time getting to town or she would have died horribly! There's bits of Quill and Still I like but it just feels off emotionally.

Argue
Sep 29, 2005

I represent the Philippines

A big flaming stink posted:

TWI Patreon 9.23 GGGGGGGGG: Pirateaba does not gently caress around with horror lmao

drat, pirate went in HARD for Halloween this year. It's been a while since we had a horror chapter.

90s Cringe Rock
Nov 29, 2006
:gay:
For Quill and Still, it's a bit of a big deal that the first goddess switched to being sympathetic and bending the rules when she found out who the protagonist was. The body she was put into being fatally allergic to its new world was a cock-up, but it did have some slight selling points that may have swayed her view.

90s Cringe Rock
Nov 29, 2006
:gay:
also I'm not in the TWI patreon but I saw the title via rss and lol

BadMedic
Jul 22, 2007

I've never actually seen him heal anybody.
Pillbug
Also Quill & Still has like a billion 'hidden' trans references that cis people don't notice at all
and I get a lot of enjoyment from that

Also IIRC there's lore reasons for why her body was allergic to the world, it's not a mistake on the god's part, or something that he could resolve

Silynt
Sep 21, 2009

90s Cringe Rock posted:

also I'm not in the TWI patreon but I saw the title via rss and lol

It probably doesn’t mean what you think.

90s Cringe Rock
Nov 29, 2006
:gay:

Silynt posted:

It probably doesn’t mean what you think.
I have no idea what it means and I'm excited.

RBA-Wintrow
Nov 4, 2009


Clapping Larry
So I started reading Ar'Kendrithyst because people here keep recommending it and I'm up to date with everything else I'm reading, (except The Wandering Inn, still in book 7).
And suddenly it's 05:30 in the morning.
My tea is cold.

Peachfart
Jan 21, 2017

I feel bad because I am several chapters behind on TWI(and the other 10 stories I am following) because I have been rereading Ar'Kendrithyst and it is just generally better.

Ramie
Mar 2, 2021

i tried to like Ar'Kendrithyst but i feel like the whole thread of it is "this week's made-up solutions to made-up problems"

that's describes just about any story that takes place in a constructed fantasy world but the veil just seemed particularly thin for me here. i probably just don't get it. somehow Erick feels like the only real character

i would totally like to hear what people like about it though!! some aspects of it do seem like a step above certain other works

Ramie fucked around with this message at 07:26 on Nov 3, 2022

Ytlaya
Nov 13, 2005

catgirlgenius posted:

i tried to like Ar'Kendrithyst but i feel like the whole thread of it is "this week's made-up solutions to made-up problems"

that's describes just about any story that takes place in a constructed fantasy world but the veil just seemed particularly thin for me here. i probably just don't get it. somehow Erick feels like the only real character

i would totally like to hear what people like about it though!! some aspects of it do seem like a step above certain other works

It's probably the only series I've read where the author is able to convincingly write "protagonist (and other characters) trying to figure things out in a fictional/fantasy setting." This is mainly because the setting itself is far more well thought-out than in the vast majority of fantasy-themed web serials.

I don't get tired of the endless "Erick ponders how to do ______" chapters largely because of how consistent the setting is. The author somehow manages to convincingly write a character speculating about a fictional world. Every other "powerful protagonist solves problems in fantasy/isekai world" story just has the world and plot fully catering to the core power fantasy of the story. Ar'kendrithyst, on the other hand, does a good job of creating a situation where Erick having remarkable power actually makes sense; all questions/doubts I've had all ended up being answered at some point.

I fully expected to dislike it after seeing peoples comments in this thread (which made it sound like a typical "god-like protagonist solves fantasy world's problems with the help of Earth knowledge" story), so it was a very pleasant surprise when this didn't end up being the case.

Wittgen
Oct 13, 2012

We have decided to decline your offer of a butt kicking.
Yeah, it is very much made up powers solving made up problems. It's just that the problems and powers are all interconnected, and all the solutions create a bunch more problems that need to be addressed. Also it gets that some problems come from how the world is and some come from how people are. Having more power will solve the first but generally exacerbate the second. The paradox of security is a bitch like that.

Basically, it is just complicated and practical enough to serve as a compelling meditation on power.

Silynt
Sep 21, 2009
It’s been a while so I don’t remember all of the story specifics, but I remember getting frustrated by the power of Erick’s first spell, the lightning Storm. IIRC, it was super-duper extra powerful for its level because Erick understands the science behind electricity, which is all well and good, but it also could generate a rainstorm in the desert out of nowhere, and that doesn’t seem like something his deep (?) understanding of lightning should have been capable of. And then other people couldn’t make Particle Magic spells anywhere close to that power level? I’m sure the author gives an explanation for it at some point but I got bored and walked away as everyone stared in awe at Erick’s new power.

The writing seemed fine.

Zore
Sep 21, 2010
willfully illiterate, aggressively miserable sourpuss whose sole raison d’etre is to put other people down for liking the wrong things
Honestly I think my biggest issue is all the loving math and people optimizing their build like they're in an MMO. Its exhausting and I just cannot possibly give a poo poo. This aspect does thankfully start falling by the wayside after a while, but holy poo poo are the opening chapters a slog.

I also think everything around Familiars in the story is ill-considered and incredibly stupid. It meshes horribly with the inbuilt anti-slavery aspect of the setting and seems to argue that infants/children aren't real people and abusing and enslaving them isn't an issue until they grow older and develop further which feels very strange considering everything else in the story.

Peachfart
Jan 21, 2017

Zore posted:

Honestly I think my biggest issue is all the loving math and people optimizing their build like they're in an MMO. Its exhausting and I just cannot possibly give a poo poo. This aspect does thankfully start falling by the wayside after a while, but holy poo poo are the opening chapters a slog.

I also think everything around Familiars in the story is ill-considered and incredibly stupid. It meshes horribly with the inbuilt anti-slavery aspect of the setting and seems to argue that infants/children aren't real people and abusing and enslaving them isn't an issue until they grow older and develop further which feels very strange considering everything else in the story.

Early on, most familiars aren't people, they are more equivalent to pets. And many people have told Erick that when his familiar becomes a person, it was be incredibly difficult for him.

Zore
Sep 21, 2010
willfully illiterate, aggressively miserable sourpuss whose sole raison d’etre is to put other people down for liking the wrong things

Peachfart posted:

Early on, most familiars aren't people, they are more equivalent to pets. And many people have told Erick that when his familiar becomes a person, it was be incredibly difficult for him.

Right that's sort of my point though, Familiars are more analogous to children than pets as their expected course of development has them recognized as people after fairly short timeframes! Its not an aberration for the Familiar to become a 'person', its what happens with Familiars, which frames the whole segment of their life where they are treated as bonded slaves (to use the work's own internal ideas) sort of horrifying?

Erick is repeatedly forcing his child into suicide bombing runs.

BadMedic
Jul 22, 2007

I've never actually seen him heal anybody.
Pillbug

Zore posted:

I also think everything around Familiars in the story is ill-considered and incredibly stupid. It meshes horribly with the inbuilt anti-slavery aspect of the setting and seems to argue that infants/children aren't real people and abusing and enslaving them isn't an issue until they grow older and develop further which feels very strange considering everything else in the story.

I think it's fine? In the story familiars are literally part of your soul, and only become real when that part of your soul fragments off to be a new person. Yggdrasil is a special case cause god magic is keeping him stapled to Eric's soul, but as far as I can tell the moment they *actually* become sentient is the moment they are not familiars anymore.
Also I honestly can't remember a scene in arks where someone abuses a familiar? To abuse a familiar is to literally abuse yourself, and I wouldn't be surprised if the willingness to do that is incompatible with being able to create the spell successfully.

Zore
Sep 21, 2010
willfully illiterate, aggressively miserable sourpuss whose sole raison d’etre is to put other people down for liking the wrong things

BadMedic posted:

I think it's fine? In the story familiars are literally part of your soul, and only become real when that part of your soul fragments off to be a new person. Yggdrasil is a special case cause god magic is keeping him stapled to Eric's soul, but as far as I can tell the moment they *actually* become sentient is the moment they are not familiars anymore.
Also I honestly can't remember a scene in arks where someone abuses a familiar? To abuse a familiar is to literally abuse yourself, and I wouldn't be surprised if the willingness to do that is incompatible with being able to create the spell successfully.


The abuse I'm talking about is mostly the 'constantly sending them into certain death' thing where they then die. Which is almost all of what Erick uses Ophiel for as he brute forces a bunch of experiments and goes into combat with him.

And Ophiel is expressing preferences and the ability to make decisions that aren't Erick's almost from day 1 so it feels even weirder and worse. Ophiel is also depicted as being able to feel pain for some reason just so we really know at 'best' Erick is cloning and torturing his pet over and over until it hits a sufficient level of intelligence for the gods to give a poo poo.

Zore fucked around with this message at 17:23 on Nov 3, 2022

Peachfart
Jan 21, 2017

Zore posted:


The abuse I'm talking about is mostly the 'constantly sending them into certain death' thing where they then die. Which is almost all of what Erick uses Ophiel for as he brute forces a bunch of experiments and goes into combat with him.

And Ophiel is expressing preferences and the ability to make decisions that aren't Erick's almost from day 1 so it feels even weirder and worse. Ophiel is also depicted as being able to feel pain for some reason just so we really know at 'best' Erick is cloning and torturing his pet over and over until it hits a sufficient level of intelligence for the gods to give a poo poo.


I think this is a super weird read.

BadMedic
Jul 22, 2007

I've never actually seen him heal anybody.
Pillbug

Peachfart posted:

I think this is a super weird read.

Agreed. The point I'm trying to make is standard familiars are just 'sufficiently advanced magic' versions of a sock puppet. Erick is Ophiel, and Ophiel's expressions are all Erick acting like he thinks an Ophiel would through one. The weirdness is that dedicating a portion of your soul to acting like something else eventually makes that part of your soul become something else. Like method acting taken to it's logical extreme, which oh hey is also how 'true' polymorph works.

LLSix
Jan 20, 2010

The real power behind countless overlords

Every time I read some other super hero serial, I'm impressed by how good Super Minion is.

Ramie
Mar 2, 2021

it was just too good for this earth, RIP. i think i checked for updates twice a week for at least 6 months.

Selkie Myth
May 25, 2013

Zore posted:

Honestly I think my biggest issue is all the loving math and people optimizing their build like they're in an MMO. Its exhausting and I just cannot possibly give a poo poo. This aspect does thankfully start falling by the wayside after a while, but holy poo poo are the opening chapters a slog.

I also think everything around Familiars in the story is ill-considered and incredibly stupid. It meshes horribly with the inbuilt anti-slavery aspect of the setting and seems to argue that infants/children aren't real people and abusing and enslaving them isn't an issue until they grow older and develop further which feels very strange considering everything else in the story.

I get people complaining about that ALL THE TIME in BTDEM.

This is someone's life, not a video game. Yeah, they're going to make choices that aren't the best in a fight, and are what THEY want, because life is more than just fighting.

Bhodi
Dec 9, 2007

Oh, it's just a cat.
Pillbug
Yeah, I would keep pretty too

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Ytlaya
Nov 13, 2005

Zore posted:

I also think everything around Familiars in the story is ill-considered and incredibly stupid. It meshes horribly with the inbuilt anti-slavery aspect of the setting and seems to argue that infants/children aren't real people and abusing and enslaving them isn't an issue until they grow older and develop further which feels very strange considering everything else in the story.

My best understanding is that, as another poster mentioned, Ophiel is basically a highly advanced sockpuppet without thoughts of its own (I believe there's actually a point where this is directly revealed; Erick tries to get Ophiel to do something that involves actual thinking, and the result is nothing because Ophiel isn't sentient), but the illusion of it being sentient is created because Ophiel is controlled by Erick "concept/idea" of him (like if you wrote a character description and created an AI to act it out, only this happens "automagically" because the mana loves Erick and helps to facilitate his magic, especially when he does his chants).

BadMedic posted:

Agreed. The point I'm trying to make is standard familiars are just 'sufficiently advanced magic' versions of a sock puppet. Erick is Ophiel, and Ophiel's expressions are all Erick acting like he thinks an Ophiel would through one. The weirdness is that dedicating a portion of your soul to acting like something else eventually makes that part of your soul become something else. Like method acting taken to it's logical extreme, which oh hey is also how 'true' polymorph works.

Huh, I didn't think of the polymorph thing.

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