Register a SA Forums Account here!
JOINING THE SA FORUMS WILL REMOVE THIS BIG AD, THE ANNOYING UNDERLINED ADS, AND STUPID INTERSTITIAL ADS!!!

You can: log in, read the tech support FAQ, or request your lost password. This dumb message (and those ads) will appear on every screen until you register! Get rid of this crap by registering your own SA Forums Account and joining roughly 150,000 Goons, for the one-time price of $9.95! We charge money because it costs us money per month for bills, and since we don't believe in showing ads to our users, we try to make the money back through forum registrations.
 
  • Post
  • Reply
Canuckistan
Jan 14, 2004

I'm the greatest thing since World War III.





Soiled Meat

Andoman posted:

That would be pretty cool, especially if it persuaded a couple of people like myself who got a bit jaded to pick up the books.

Every Discworld fan should read them, but (spoilers for personal opinions on the last few books, in case you want to go in blind) be prepared for profound sadness when it's obvious how Pterry's terrible disease was taking away his wit and prose. The last few books read more like fanfic. I know it's Pterry's last goodbye to us, which makes it worse.

Adbot
ADBOT LOVES YOU

Beachcomber
May 21, 2007

Another day in paradise.


Slippery Tilde

Canuckistan posted:

Every Discworld fan should read them, but (spoilers for personal opinions on the last few books, in case you want to go in blind) be prepared for profound sadness when it's obvious how Pterry's terrible disease was taking away his wit and prose. The last few books read more like fanfic. I know it's Pterry's last goodbye to us, which makes it worse.

Agree with the spoilered part, disagree with the visible.

citybeatnik
Mar 1, 2013

You Are All
WEIRDOS




Moist's adventures with Vimes in Raising Steam was mildly entertaining at least, and Snuff has the bit where one song by a goblin brought the Pateician basically close to tears.

Aa for the Crown i agree with the spoiled part as well. Still read it all because by god i owed it to him to see it through.

Narsham
Jun 5, 2008
I have a completely different take on the final books. It is absolutely true that it isn't the same Pterry, and you can tell the embuggerance has had a major effect on his writing.

But there's some major tonal differences between multiple other Discworld novels. The first few, for example. There's a huge difference between Wyrd Sisters and Maskerade. The Truth has a very different style from, say, Moving Pictures. Pratchett was always willing to change his style and approach based upon the book he was writing. To think that he would somehow be completely oblivious to the effects his condition had on him as a writer and completely disregard it in making stylistic decisions just doesn't seem fair to him.

Snuff still has some tonal continuity with the Vimes series as a whole; I'd argue Vimes in Thud! has more in common with Vimes in Snuff than Vimes in Guards! Guards!. Raising Steam is a seismic change of voice and approach, with the narrator coming across more as an historian chronicling events than the narration of prior Discworld books. But that's pretty clearly a choice, and Pratchett pretty clearly has decided to encapsulate everything he wanted to get across in his Discworld Industrialization plotline in a single book with a single representative technology. While the resulting book isn't as funny/witty and has a shocking lack of the kind of back and forth dialogue for which Pratchett is well-known, in many regards it's a lot closer to Dodger or Nation than it is to some book written by someone not Pterry. When I taught Raising Steam as the last book in a semester's seminar on Pratchett, with only one student who had read any Pratchett before in the class, none of them felt it was a huge departure because they'd encountered several of his previous stylistic changes in compressed form throughout the class. The experience really made me rethink my own first reading of the book, and having to teach the thing made me rethink what Pratchett was up to and really appreciate the level of design: Raising Steam isn't about characters in the way the other Discworld novels are, it really is about the steam engine and how it changes a world. The scale and approach are radically different, and what's changing isn't the individual characters but everything.

It's just the sort of book a man who knows he will have to leave this world behind would write for himself, before he sits down to write the last book for his fans.

I could see skipping Snuff, I guess, but it's a fantastic concept (Vimes is out of the city, so who is he now) that stops being a Vimes book and becomes a something-else book about 100 pages before you notice. Once you figure out that Vimes is a supporting character, it all plays out much better. But while I can see not liking the tonally different Raising Steam, if you love Pratchett, I think it may be one of the most Pratchett of the Discworld books. Just don't think of it as the satirist writing comic fantasy with an underlying message, think of it as a "Last Lecture" style argument about how to approach the world, that's serious because the author is running out of time and knows his last book can't deliver these messages because it has to be about people, not history.

Edit: The Last Shepherd is obviously unfinished, and its afterward explains that. (It also says he wrote much of it while writing Raising Steam, which is very different in voice and tone.) But I think what gets lost in seeing it as Pterry's last Discworld novel/last novel is that it's actually the conclusion of the Tiffany Aching series. Which both is and profoundly is not a series aimed at young adults (and especially girls/young women). As the last Discworld novel, The Last Shepherd is a disappointment. But even if unfinished, it is an amazing conclusion to the Tiffany Aching series, with a powerful message aimed only secondarily at those of us who've been Pratchett fans and readers since the 80s.

Narsham fucked around with this message at 19:30 on Oct 10, 2022

Jedit
Dec 10, 2011

Proudly supporting vanilla legends 1994-2014

That is somewhat borne out by Terry's later comment that Discworld technology would never advance further than it had in Raising Steam. However, he then added, "... but they do have all the technology they need for crystal radio". So it was less a "last word" than it was the writing of a man who knew he only had so many more stories to tell - none, as it turned out - and was pitching camp where he wanted to be.

In fact he'd probably been pitching that camp for a while before Raising Steam, setting up a post-Vetinari Ankh-Morpork centred on Moist as chief administrator, the protagonist of Twilight Gardens as a foil to (and possible replacement for) Vimes, and William de Worde keeping the others in check by reporting on them.

Kesper North
Nov 3, 2011

EMERGENCY POWER TO PARTY

Jedit posted:

That is somewhat borne out by Terry's later comment that Discworld technology would never advance further than it had in Raising Steam. However, he then added, "... but they do have all the technology they need for crystal radio". So it was less a "last word" than it was the writing of a man who knew he only had so many more stories to tell - none, as it turned out - and was pitching camp where he wanted to be.

In fact he'd probably been pitching that camp for a while before Raising Steam, setting up a post-Vetinari Ankh-Morpork centred on Moist as chief administrator, the protagonist of Twilight Gardens as a foil to (and possible replacement for) Vimes, and William de Worde keeping the others in check by reporting on them.

Discworld invents crystal radios, next thing you know trolls invent cyberware

Human supremacists send offensive messages to the cyber-enabled trolls, an act known as "trolling"

Canuckistan
Jan 14, 2004

I'm the greatest thing since World War III.





Soiled Meat
I think it would be the other way around, and the other races would call it 'humaning' or something like that.

Jedit
Dec 10, 2011

Proudly supporting vanilla legends 1994-2014

Kesper North posted:

Discworld invents crystal radios, next thing you know trolls invent cyberware

Human supremacists send offensive messages to the cyber-enabled trolls, an act known as "trolling"

I think it would be more like that thing where people claim they can pick up radio stations on the fillings in their teeth.

Canuckistan
Jan 14, 2004

I'm the greatest thing since World War III.





Soiled Meat
Or they use the UU for their antenna and the radio waves start doing funky magical stuff. Oh, and the Wizards and the Librarian all become DJs.

citybeatnik
Mar 1, 2013

You Are All
WEIRDOS




I'm picturing a literal Wolfman Jack with a werewolf refugee from Überwald accidentally broadcasting Imp y Celyn's harp performance.

AvesPKS
Sep 26, 2004

I don't dance unless I'm totally wasted.
I was just rereading 'Lords and Ladies' and noticed this exchange between Weatherwax and Ridcully:

"I was young and foolish then."

"Well? You're old and foolish now."

Is this a known TMBG reference (Lucky Ball & Chain)? Flood came out in 1990 and Lords and Ladies came out in 1992.

The_Doctor
Mar 29, 2007

"The entire history of this incarnation is one of temporal orbits, retcons, paradoxes, parallel time lines, reiterations, and divergences. How anyone can make head or tail of all this chaos, I don't know."
Very likely, Terry was a fan of them.

El Fideo
Jun 10, 2016

I trusted a rhino and deserve all that came to me


It wouldn't be the first time. Foul Ol' Ron got his catchphrase from Pterry feeding tmbg lyrics into a text generator, along with the menu from a Chinese restaurant, iirc. And Soul Music had a band called We're Certainly Dwarves.

Xander77
Apr 6, 2009

Fuck it then. For another pit sandwich and some 'tater salad, I'll post a few more.



Jedit posted:

the protagonist of Twilight Gardens
The who of what?

Jedit
Dec 10, 2011

Proudly supporting vanilla legends 1994-2014

Xander77 posted:

The who of what?

Twilight Gardens was the last Discworld novel to enter the full draft phase, and it was never completed. It centred on a man who, like Moist, had been sentenced to death and secretly reprieved to work for the Patrician. Except where Moist was a conman whose talents were being used to reorder public services, this man - whose name I forget, sorry - was the angriest man on the Disc, convicted of murder for a justified killing. His rage at injustice was to be channeled into fighting crime in places where the Watch couldn't safely act even through the Particulars, to give them complete deniability. And I'll bet you can figure out how Vimes would have felt about that.

E: my memory may be slipping and it might have been called Twilight Mansions.

The_Doctor
Mar 29, 2007

"The entire history of this incarnation is one of temporal orbits, retcons, paradoxes, parallel time lines, reiterations, and divergences. How anyone can make head or tail of all this chaos, I don't know."
Twilight Canyons was the working title.

Jedit
Dec 10, 2011

Proudly supporting vanilla legends 1994-2014

The_Doctor posted:

Twilight Canyons was the working title.

Drat it, thank you.

dervival
Apr 23, 2014

Jedit posted:

It centred on a man who, like Moist, had been sentenced to death and secretly reprieved to work for the Patrician. Except where Moist was a conman whose talents were being used to reorder public services, this man - whose name I forget, sorry - was the angriest man on the Disc, convicted of murder for a justified killing.

Oh, did Mr Tulip finish up being a bookworm, then?

Mad Hamish
Jun 15, 2008

WILL AMOUNT TO NOTHING IN LIFE.



Canuckistan posted:

Or they use the UU for their antenna and the radio waves start doing funky magical stuff. Oh, and the Wizards and the Librarian all become DJs.

Well, the Dean certainly would.

Beachcomber
May 21, 2007

Another day in paradise.


Slippery Tilde

Mad Hamish posted:

Well, the Dean certainly would.

The Dean went to Sto Lat(?) didn't he?

Narsham posted:

I have a completely different take on the final books. It is absolutely true that it isn't the same Pterry, and you can tell the embuggerance has had a major effect on his writing.

But there's some major tonal differences between multiple other Discworld novels. The first few, for example. There's a huge difference between Wyrd Sisters and Maskerade. The Truth has a very different style from, say, Moving Pictures. Pratchett was always willing to change his style and approach based upon the book he was writing. To think that he would somehow be completely oblivious to the effects his condition had on him as a writer and completely disregard it in making stylistic decisions just doesn't seem fair to him.

The tone of the book doesn't bother me so much as characters losing their humanity and becoming caricatures. The big one I remember is Willikins in Snuff, but it's all over to greater and lesser degrees.

sebmojo
Oct 23, 2010


Legit Cyberpunk









Narsham posted:

I have a completely different take on the final books. It is absolutely true that it isn't the same Pterry, and you can tell the embuggerance has had a major effect on his writing.

But there's some major tonal differences between multiple other Discworld novels. The first few, for example. There's a huge difference between Wyrd Sisters and Maskerade. The Truth has a very different style from, say, Moving Pictures. Pratchett was always willing to change his style and approach based upon the book he was writing. To think that he would somehow be completely oblivious to the effects his condition had on him as a writer and completely disregard it in making stylistic decisions just doesn't seem fair to him.


I strongly disagree with this, until the late stage pratchett books all have a basically identical style. Even the YA stuff is just different in having chapters.

Mad Hamish
Jun 15, 2008

WILL AMOUNT TO NOTHING IN LIFE.



Beachcomber posted:

The Dean went to Sto Lat(?) didn't he?

The Dean tends to get quickly sucked into whatever Weird New Thing the faculty is dealing with (Soul Music, Hogfather, Moving Pictures etc) so considering how little time it took him to get a leather robe with

DEAN
BORN TO EAT BIG DINNERS RUNE

in studs on the back, I assume he would have rad mirror shades and be flipping records while IDK beatboxing almost immediately.

I have an extremely clear mental image of the Dean and the Librarian DJ'ing at some kind of dance party / rave in Ankh-Morpork and it's delightful.

Kesper North
Nov 3, 2011

EMERGENCY POWER TO PARTY

Mad Hamish posted:

I have an extremely clear mental image of the Dean and the Librarian DJ'ing at some kind of dance party / rave in Ankh-Morpork and it's delightful.

Orbital with the flashlight-glasses, but one of them is an ape

GodFish
Oct 10, 2012

We're your first, last, and only line of defense. We live in secret. We exist in shadow.

And we dress in black.
That just made me think of CMOT Dibbler trying to sell non-fungible tokens. All his apes gone.

Beachcomber
May 21, 2007

Another day in paradise.


Slippery Tilde

Mad Hamish posted:

The Dean tends to get quickly sucked into whatever Weird New Thing the faculty is dealing with (Soul Music, Hogfather, Moving Pictures etc) so considering how little time it took him to get a leather robe with

DEAN
BORN TO EAT BIG DINNERS RUNE

in studs on the back, I assume he would have rad mirror shades and be flipping records while IDK beatboxing almost immediately.

I have an extremely clear mental image of the Dean and the Librarian DJ'ing at some kind of dance party / rave in Ankh-Morpork and it's delightful.

No, he went to be Archchancellor of a new magic school, I believe. I think Sto Lat, could be one of the other plains cities.

Happened just before Unseen Academicals.

Strange Cares
Nov 22, 2007



GodFish posted:

That just made me think of CMOT Dibbler trying to sell non-fungible tokens. All his apes gone.

Gnome de plume
Sep 5, 2006

Hell.
Fucking.
Yes.
There's the Pork Futures warehouses and Dibbler is famous for selling things that don't belong to him or even exist

Mad Hamish
Jun 15, 2008

WILL AMOUNT TO NOTHING IN LIFE.



Beachcomber posted:

No, he went to be Archchancellor of a new magic school, I believe. I think Sto Lat, could be one of the other plains cities.

Happened just before Unseen Academicals.

Ah, my bad! It's been a while since I read Unseen Academicals and I've only read it once.

Narsham
Jun 5, 2008

sebmojo posted:

I strongly disagree with this, until the late stage pratchett books all have a basically identical style. Even the YA stuff is just different in having chapters.

Try reading Equal Rights and Masquerade back to back.

Or Moving Pictures and then The Truth.

The voicing is the same, but the characterization changes across books, as does the degree to which they're themed around a concept versus being themed around a message (Soul Music and Moving Pictures are the most obvious "concept" pieces). I freely admit that the word "style" can be broadly defined.

The Carpet People and the Tiffany Aching series are both YA stuff with tiny people, but they are dramatically different works. For that matter I Shall Wear Midnight is not drastically different from the earlier Aching books despite being written during the Embuggerance. Even the relationship between Granny and Nanny shifts significantly between Wyrd Sisters and the later witch books. Pratchett was never afraid of change.

sebmojo
Oct 23, 2010


Legit Cyberpunk









They are all still basically the same, imo. Lots of subtle differences but the overall style is consistent from color of magic to thud.

Xander77
Apr 6, 2009

Fuck it then. For another pit sandwich and some 'tater salad, I'll post a few more.



sebmojo posted:

They are all still basically the same, imo.
Sure. Color of Magic and Thud are basically...

quote:

Lots of subtle differences but the overall style is consistent from color of magic to thud.
Oh. :shrug:

Narsham
Jun 5, 2008

Xander77 posted:

Sure. Color of Magic and Thud are basically...

Oh. :shrug:

At a certain point, the gap between two people's understanding of what constitutes "style" is clearly so wide that there's not much point in continuing the conversation.

In other news, I'm working my way through Terry Pratchett: A Life With Footnotes* and just passed a reference to a scene in Making Money where a mob comes to the bank. There's no detail beyond that in the biography, to avoid spoilers.

After flipping back and forth through my copy of Making Money, I'm still not sure which scene is being referred to. Wilkins describes the context as Terry "bringing an angry mob with pitchforks through the streets to the Royal Bank of Ankh-Morpork, intent on retribution from the troubled Vice Chairman..."

There's two scenes where crowds show up at the bank, so maybe it's the second one? Only Wilkins also says Moist "threw open the bank's door to find . . . well, at that exact moment, nobody in the world, including the author, knew what lay on the other side of that door that could spare Moist a dire end." Perhaps I am overthinking: in both instances, Moist is inside the bank and throws open the doors to admit the mob, so it's the dire end on the other side, not the thing that can save Moist. But it is bugging me to no end and I don't want to stop reading the biography while I reread Making Money in its entirety to confirm that there's no scene that quite matches what Wilkins describes.

Beachcomber
May 21, 2007

Another day in paradise.


Slippery Tilde

Narsham posted:

Only Wilkins also says Moist "threw open the bank's door to find . . . well, at that exact moment, nobody in the world, including the author, knew what lay on the other side of that door that could spare Moist a dire end."

Sounds like a good time to to take a 5 minute break for nourishing soup.

Jedit
Dec 10, 2011

Proudly supporting vanilla legends 1994-2014

Narsham posted:


There's two scenes where crowds show up at the bank, so maybe it's the second one? Only Wilkins also says Moist "threw open the bank's door to find . . . well, at that exact moment, nobody in the world, including the author, knew what lay on the other side of that door that could spare Moist a dire end." Perhaps I am overthinking: in both instances, Moist is inside the bank and throws open the doors to admit the mob, so it's the dire end on the other side, not the thing that can save Moist.

You are overthinking.

I just got my copy of the biog yesterday - the signed copies were delayed - and I agree it's a little sad in the reading. The bit about Terry being addicted to crystal radio as a kid touches differently when you know a Disc story about it was one of the many ideas that he never had a chance to complete.

But I called my mum to let her know that I'd got it, and she asked how it was; when I said "I got it half an hour ago, I'm only one chapter in" I could hear Pterry's amused tut. He was always a little bit bemused that fans devoured his books so quickly that in some cases they'd seemingly read them before he'd written them. It would have tickled him to hear one fan half expecting another to have finished his biography the instant they'd bought it, and that other fan admitting that they'd only managed 40 pages. There's a quote in Reaper Man which runs, roughly, "Nobody is really dead unti the ripples they left in the world fade away... The span of a man's life is only the core of his existence." That tiny mental chuckle from a ghost sums it up for me: the ripples Pterry left will never fade, certainly not as long as I'm alive and probably not for long after that.

I aten't dead.

Narsham
Jun 5, 2008

Jedit posted:

You are overthinking.

The fact remains that the biography describes an exciting moment during the writing of the novel and I can't share it in vicariously because I can't tell which of two potential moments is being discussed!

I'm much further along in the book, so I assure you, Terry would have been livid. Of course, he'd probably have ended up chortling at it later.

It's a good biography: you can admire Terry while also registering the human parts of him, the imperfections not always evident to fans. In particular, he seems to have had a goodly amount of the angry, sometimes bullying side of Granny.

SixFigureSandwich
Oct 30, 2004
Exciting Lemon
It sounds like the scene where Harry King shows up to put (more?) money in the bank.

mllaneza
Apr 28, 2007

Veteran, Bermuda Triangle Expeditionary Force, 1993-1952




Jedit posted:

There's a quote in Reaper Man which runs, roughly, "Nobody is really dead unti the ripples they left in the world fade away... The span of a man's life is only the core of his existence." That tiny mental chuckle from a ghost sums it up for me: the ripples Pterry left will never fade, certainly not as long as I'm alive and probably not for long after that.

I aten't dead.

GNU pterry

CommonShore
Jun 6, 2014

A true renaissance man


I finished volume 2 of Gibbon so I'm back into Pratchett and I should be able to finish the last four Discworld novels before the end of the year. I'm going to post about them as I go.

I'm just about finished with I Shall Wear Midnight (I'm past the climax and I'll probably wrap it up and start the next one tonight) and I'm consistently blown away with just how good the Tiffany Aching books are. I'm a sucker for ancient folklore stories and sublime terrors from outside of the fringes of history, and the witches are my favourite characters in Discworld, so I may be focusing more on its strengths than weaknesses. It's so much stronger of a plot than Making Money or Thud!, (after a night of sleep and a prodding from another poster I realized that I was mixing up chunks of these two books, and the plot conclusion which I had remembered from Thud was actually that of Making Money) and though some of the character work in Unseen Academicals is pretty strong, it's a significantly worse showing as well. I've found that pretty much everything after Monstrous Regiment really just coasts for me on being a bit more Discworld for me to enjoy rather than a novel that's solid entirely in its own right.

So because of the poor reviews I've read here and elsewhere of Snuff and Raising Steam, I was expecting to see some of that decline here too, as I see beginning in those three previous "main" books which are definitely weaker, but nope. Was there something different in the creative process for the Aching books?

CommonShore fucked around with this message at 16:12 on Dec 22, 2022

Xander77
Apr 6, 2009

Fuck it then. For another pit sandwich and some 'tater salad, I'll post a few more.



CommonShore posted:

So because of the poor reviews I've read here and elsewhere of Snuff and Raising Steam, I was expecting to see some of that decline here too, as I see beginning in those three previous "main" books which are definitely weaker, but nope. Was there something different in the creative process for the Aching books?
You just like the characters enough not to notice the flaws (random new love interest with no characterization, a villain that's menacing on paper whom the plot treats like an utter random nuisance). Thud (for example) is generally regarded as one of the best Discworld books.

Adbot
ADBOT LOVES YOU

CommonShore
Jun 6, 2014

A true renaissance man


Xander77 posted:

You just like the characters enough not to notice the flaws (random new love interest with no characterization, a villain that's menacing on paper whom the plot treats like an utter random nuisance). Thud (for example) is generally regarded as one of the best Discworld books.

Really. Huh. I might have gotten some titles crossed late at night then then - is Thud the murder mystery with the dwarves and trolls (good) or the one with the ton of golems (less good)... That's making money too isn't it.

Yep. I should have refreshed my memory. I had put the last third of Making Money onto the end of the plot of Thud. I'm off to a great start here.

e. I'll edit the initial post

CommonShore fucked around with this message at 16:10 on Dec 22, 2022

  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
  • 5
  • Post
  • Reply