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steinrokkan posted:Imagine running into a "story problem" in a series where you can have people randomly eaten by dragons, stepped on by a giant, or have a wizard do it, whatever "it" even is. Tolkien is a terrible example to pick for this because he absolutely agonized for years over drat near every aspect of his stories, and rewrote huge sections multiple times before getting to where he was comfortable submitting them for publishing. Most of his writings he never actually got to that point at all, and his notes and different versions were organized into something vaguely coherent and published posthumously by his son.
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Lemniscate Blue posted:Tolkien is a terrible example to pick for this because he absolutely agonized for years over drat near every aspect of his stories, and rewrote huge sections multiple times before getting to where he was comfortable submitting them for publishing. Most of his writings he never actually got to that point at all, and his notes and different versions were organized into something vaguely coherent and published posthumously by his son. Nah, he mostly just wrote whatever. Also: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1-Uz0LMbWpI mycatscrimes posted:I imagine when you've set up a world where any outlandish thing can happen, the challenge is less thinking of a way to solve a problem, and more finding the solution that will actually feel satisfying. Just write the first thing that works and then tell everybody you actually found it very satisfying and thematically resonant / heavy with symbolism. steinrokkan has a new favorite as of 19:54 on Aug 1, 2023 |
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I imagine when you've set up a world where any outlandish thing can happen, the challenge is less thinking of a way to solve a problem, and more finding the solution that will actually feel satisfying.
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steinrokkan posted:Imagine running into a "story problem" in a series where you can have people randomly eaten by dragons, stepped on by a giant, or have a wizard do it, whatever "it" even is.
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# ? Aug 1, 2023 19:55 |
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An important issue here is that Tolkien only split viewpoints into two parties, three if you count Frodo-and-Sam. He didn't have to deal with "What was Arwen doing all the time while Aragorn was doing stuff?"* The answer is that Tolkien doesn't care and it's not in the book. Furthermore, he's working in third-person omniscient, where, within each party, the narrator knows all. GRRM, by contrast, has a million billion viewpoint characters, with chapters written from each of their viewpoints, so he's working in close-third person, where the narration only knows what the current viewpoint character knows. As a result, GRRM has to keep track of where each drat character is and what they're doing during the times when they're not the viewpoint character.Lemniscate Blue posted:Tolkien is a terrible example to pick for this because he absolutely agonized for years over drat near every aspect of his stories, and rewrote huge sections multiple times before getting to where he was comfortable submitting them for publishing. Most of his writings he never actually got to that point at all, and his notes and different versions were organized into something vaguely coherent and published posthumously by his son. * Singing, probably.
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# ? Aug 1, 2023 20:03 |
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Riot Carol Danvers posted:I wish I could find the tweet, but when my friend Lane found this out, she said "YOU MEAN TO TELL ME DAVE STRIDER IS THE BLUEPRINT FOR GOD'S PERFECT LESBIAN?!" Hahahah, I introduced someone who was a Homestuck fan to the series a while back and their reactions were considerably along these lines. They also liked the book, so I'm not sure if the Homestuck adjacency helped or hurt.
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# ? Aug 1, 2023 20:05 |
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The one modern-world joke that peeved me a lot was "none pizza with left beef". It didn't make any sense in-fiction. I have a really hard time seeing anything inspired by Dave in Gideon; would you care to expand?
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Thank you all for the explanations I decided to go back into my coffin bye
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# ? Aug 1, 2023 20:08 |
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“Sir, a second Barbie Fabulous Dreamliner Jumbo Jet (tm) has hit the World Trade Center.”
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Kuros posted:“Sir, a second Barbie Fabulous Dreamliner Jumbo Jet (tm) has hit the World Trade Center.” Crash Test Dummies (the toy-line , not the band) crossover opportunity
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Arsenic Lupin posted:The original big time gap was before A Dance With Dragons. It was caused by a writing roadblock called the "Meereenese Knot" which you can google if you care that much. Apparently he's still stuck in it; as you say, he's written himself into a corner and can't get out of it. George R. R. Martin posted:The 1978 volume of my own 'New Voices/Campbell Awards' anthology series will probably be published some time in 1985, so I don't think I'm the person to make pronouncements, stern or otherwise, about the lateness of TLDV. I know all too vividly how easily and how badly these things can get out of hand. Still, there's no doubt in my mind that the lengthy delay of TLDV has been a tragedy--a tragedy for readers like myself who have been looking forward to the book, a tragedy for the field that badly needs a shot of the sort of literary adrenaline the previous DV volumes have supplied, a particular tragedy for the writers involved, and especially a tragedy for Harlan himself. I can only hope that, somehow or other, this tragedy will turn out to have a happy ending. Despite everything, you know, I'd still like to read the book, and so would a lot of other people.
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Arsenic Lupin posted:The one modern-world joke that peeved me a lot was "none pizza with left beef". It didn't make any sense in-fiction. It does because God / Jod is a loving dork from our timeline and he thinks it's funny to shoehorn in meme references that literally only he and maybe his original cohort will get. Also I wish I could find the one image that explains the Dave Strider / Gideon Nav crossover but alas it's lost to time
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steinrokkan posted:Nah, he mostly just wrote whatever. 1 weird trick creative writing professors don't want you to know!
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I’m in a discord with some older sci fi authors and these dudes (many of them award winners themselves) seem to hold Tamsyn Muir in a special place of contempt. Not from a politics angle—they’re all generally boring libs—but just from the perspective of craft they are astonished at the work, comparing it to the stuff you find while cleaning under your fridge. I haven’t read any but nothing I’ve read about it from fans or haters makes it sound like it’s For Me. It’s just funny how much ire they have for the product.
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Arsenic Lupin posted:The original big time gap was before A Dance With Dragons. It was caused by a writing roadblock called the "Meereenese Knot" which you can google if you care that much. Apparently he's still stuck in it; as you say, he's written himself into a corner and can't get out of it. my GRRM-related anecdote is that I met him at a book signing around the time season 1 premiered and he asked me whether I enjoyed the show and I said naw I'll watch after you finish the book and he looked at me like i was stupid
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selec posted:I’m in a discord with some older sci fi authors and these dudes (many of them award winners themselves) seem to hold Tamsyn Muir in a special place of contempt. Not from a politics angle—they’re all generally boring libs—but just from the perspective of craft they are astonished at the work, comparing it to the stuff you find while cleaning under your fridge. I haven’t read any but nothing I’ve read about it from fans or haters makes it sound like it’s For Me. It’s just funny how much ire they have for the product. lmao, that's hilarious. I think she's genuinely gifted author, both on the level of her ideas and on the level of executing some stuff in really interesting ways, writing-wise and presentation-wise.
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PurpleXVI posted:lmao, that's hilarious. I think she's genuinely gifted author, both on the level of her ideas and on the level of executing some stuff in really interesting ways, writing-wise and presentation-wise. Yeah, seriously. I assume they're just mad because she's popular and she has referenced memes in her work and still managed to make something that is genuinely affecting, mentally and emotionally.
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I found the first few pages of Gideon the Ninth online and in my opinion I'm not telling you my opinion. Everyone should read those books they get something out of
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Guy Gavriel Kay's head got so deep into Tolkien he had to write the Fionavar Tapestry before he could write anything else.
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I half agree about the first bit, but then that certainly goes places. Though I'm mostly just bitter about how ridiculously poorly run California is. Rather than implementing anything useful they focus on dumb stuff like bans on flavored nicotine, but because they have neo-lib brain rot instead of actually just banning unicorn fart cotton candy vape juice, they wasted money on an awareness campaigns and advertising for a voter initiative to ban flavored vape juice.
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hawowanlawow posted:my BIL's baby mama really has passive aggressive vagueposting down to a science “Bless her heart.”
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A classic: https://twitter.com/mattxiv/status/1506326400336384003
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Mokotow posted:Whats going on here i am old Those Highlights Spot the Difference puzzles were a real enigma to you huh?
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I represent cig companies while complying about neo libs Girl you are the neo lib
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CharlestheHammer posted:I represent cig companies while complying about neo libs Hey they might be a free market ghoul that believes the government shouldn't interfere at all! A completely different kind of wrong and evil.
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wtf how'd she do that
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PurpleXVI posted:lmao, that's hilarious. I think she's genuinely gifted author, both on the level of her ideas and on the level of executing some stuff in really interesting ways, writing-wise and presentation-wise. Yeah, same. On first glance her books may feel like they maybe should just be meme-y drivel, but at its core there is a lot of heartfelt sincerity that resonates with a lot of people. Those jokes and references aren't just a lazy device to inject levity, but rather just a natural expression of characters who are otherwise still genuinely affected by what's happening to them. The fact that "traditional" authors apparently get big mad over it is just
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Clerical Terrors posted:wtf how'd she do that must be AI generated!
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Deptfordx posted:Guy Gavriel Kay's head got so deep into Tolkien he had to write the Fionavar Tapestry before he could write anything else. I'm glad he got it out of his system, because I really like everything else he's ever done but that trilogy stunk on ice.
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Let me tell you about this incredible piece of technology: it's called a comb.
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# ? Aug 1, 2023 23:12 |
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When you're in a "have poor media literacy" competition and your competition is a Snyderbro.
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https://twitter.com/ZubyMusic/status/1686134600907583490?t=I9KdjTno1oc9GWRy8Gv64w&s=19
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Ah, the two genders.
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Ideas so popular you have to fly 4,000 miles away to find women to agree with them.
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A news article, but one about an idiot on social media
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BioEnchanted posted:Steven Universe was great for that. The audience figured out many of the twists because of all the foreshadowing in the early episodes and were allowed to just be right, and it helped the storytelling immeasurably because the siller early episodes were given new meaning in retrospect.
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I think the sort of writers who get upset about people "guessing" the twist are also the sort of people who think they're EXTREMELY clever about not revealing it and EXTREMELY convinced it's going to shock everyone when they find out.
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Also I doubt this is true of Game of thrones because their really isn’t any big twists. There are some mysteries but nothing that getting spoiled would change anything
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I vaguely remember the writer of The Magnus Archives podcast (horror-mystery) talking about checking in on Reddit boards and feeling like he had done his job properly if at least a certain percentage of people were correctly calling out what clues and evidence were leading up to. If nobody was getting it, it meant he needed to layout the groundwork better.
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