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General Battuta
Feb 7, 2011

This is how you communicate with a fellow intelligence: you hurt it, you keep on hurting it, until you can distinguish the posts from the screams.
Oh! Big if true.

e: Yeah you could definitely read this passage accordingly


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A force grabbed her like a vast, invisible hand and pulled her away. A million tiny, unreal needles bore into her flesh and began to rip her apart. Oh, she thought, my father’s going to kill me. And then, the pain eased. Jim was beside her, and for a moment someone else was too, but she couldn’t see him. The glimmer in Jim’s eyes was brighter, and his skin had gone waxy with an eerie opalescence under it. His teeth were bared in raw, animal effort.

General Battuta fucked around with this message at 21:18 on Feb 25, 2022

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Milkfred E. Moore
Aug 27, 2006

'It's easier to imagine the end of the world than the end of capitalism.'
On the other hand, it's a little odd that Holden dosing himself up with the protomeme gives him immediate anti-Dragonball Z powers when I always thought that Duarte's ability to do that stemmed somewhat from Cortezar's experiments.

External Organs
Mar 3, 2006

One time i prank called a bear buildin workshop and said I wanted my mamaws ashes put in a teddy from where she loved them things so well... The woman on the phone did not skip a beat. She just said, "Brang her on down here. We've did it before."

Milkfred E. Moore posted:

On the other hand, it's a little odd that Holden dosing himself up with the protomeme gives him immediate anti-Dragonball Z powers when I always thought that Duarte's ability to do that stemmed somewhat from Cortezar's experiments.

I thought it was more like it gave him access to the investigator again, who we know from book 4 can manipulate protomolecule tech.

By the way, anyone check out Daniel Abraham's new book? I haven't yet, but would love to hear from someone who has

Breetai
Nov 6, 2005

🥄Mah spoon is too big!🍌
I've reread the entire series since November when I found out that Leviathan Falls finally had a release date, and looking at the last couple of books Duarte's reliance on using tit-for-tat really resonates as being an excellent indictment on how ultimately brutal, thuggish, stupid, and short-sighted the authoritarian/fascist mindset is.

Tit for tat is not the optimal solution. Tit-for-tat, if adopted by both sides of equal reasoning ability, causes a single defection to spiral into an endless cycle of nothing but defection, forever. Even world-renowned insufferable fuckwit Dick Dorkins knows that tit-for-two-tats is the solution for a game of repeated Prisoner's Dilemma. But submoronic Space Hitler decided that he would play the strategy that, if adopted by both sides, would lead to a constant defection strategy upon the first defection, and then deliberately defected.

jeeves
May 27, 2001

Deranged Psychopathic
Butler Extraordinaire
Yeah humanity did fine with the "volume limits" of the gate traffic being controlled by the Trade Union, until Laconia came along and dicked everyone with their antimatter weapon and then tried to get the upper hand by exploding a bomb while a ship transited.

I love how in retrospect that idea is just such so dumb but lead to the escalation with the extra-dimensional entities.

I also like the term "the third side" of the gates from one of the latter books.

Huxley
Oct 10, 2012



Grimey Drawer
New novella (plus the collection) is out today.

I liked it, definitely a better coda to the series than the actual coda we got (though you certainly couldn't end that book with something like this, so no complaints).

banned from Starbucks
Jul 18, 2004




Man some of these Naomi chapters in Tiamats Wrath are just a slog to get through. I dont remember them being nearly this boring in other books. I get that shes basically the only connection to the underground resistance left (outside of Bobbie and Alex doing fun things) but she really has nothing else to do but sit around and wish she was with Holden.

General Battuta
Feb 7, 2011

This is how you communicate with a fellow intelligence: you hurt it, you keep on hurting it, until you can distinguish the posts from the screams.
Those chapters really solidified my opinion that these books can make anything boring. You'd think running an entire interplanetary resistance and then eventually commanding the great space battle of our time for the future of free humanity would be really exciting, but all I can remember is a bunch of eating kibble, doing spreadsheets and being tired. The choice to focus only on the most absolutely mundane moment by moment details of this experience is probably meant to ground the story, but I think it's too well grounded, it loses all its charge.

They love to do poo poo like this:

quote:

Chapter Twenty-Five: Naomi

Naomi had lived long enough to see history change more than once now.

[five pages of Naomi thinking about how people react to great historical changes]

“How do you take your eggs?” Chava asked.

Naomi, sitting at the breakfast bar, rubbed the sleep from her eyes. “Usually reconstituted and from a nozzle.”

“So… scrambled?”

“That would be great.”

I think it ties into the way they constantly write Naomi as strangely passive. She's characterized by surviving things and escaping things and helping and feeling but rarely by doing or actively being. Even when she's practically the most important person in the plot she doesn't get to take center stage in her own inner monologue. She delivers a lot of exposition and ideas, but doesn't do much in her own head.

Milky Moor's reread of the series reminded me about how in the early books she'd go off and have friends and do stuff offscreen, but it was all treated as cool girl things that the boys didn't really know about. This all works way better in the show because they have Dominique Tipper and Cara Gee to actually sell it.

General Battuta fucked around with this message at 06:23 on Mar 16, 2022

External Organs
Mar 3, 2006

One time i prank called a bear buildin workshop and said I wanted my mamaws ashes put in a teddy from where she loved them things so well... The woman on the phone did not skip a beat. She just said, "Brang her on down here. We've did it before."
I remember liking those chapters, in kind of a "no matter what you do in life, it's all going to be routine and depending on logistics / organization" kind of way.

The long siege of Laconia stuff is written passively as well, isn't it? It's almost like a Wikipedia entry for a battle as opposed to the various scrums we get in, say, Babylon's Fall.

Huh.

Milkfred E. Moore
Aug 27, 2006

'It's easier to imagine the end of the world than the end of capitalism.'
From memory, the siege of Laconia stuff is basically recounted in flashback in italics, like a Wikipedia article, yeah. When I was reading it I had the distinct impression that it was very much a 'We may not have the SFX budget for a big fleet engagement, so, let's try and get around it.'

Otherwise, yeah, the Naomi chapters in Tiamat's Wrath are certainly up there in my 'worst sections of The Expanse' thoughts. Naomi herself is a character who spends far too much time being defined as "Jim Holden's girlfriend" despite being arguably better educated, generally more intelligent, and more principled than the leading man. In the first novel, she doesn't really do anything. In the second, she does argue against Holden's worsening tendencies -- but then just kind of overlooks them. In the third, she does give Clarissa hell as she tries to destroy the Rocinante which is a fun few chapters, but then I'm pretty sure she then spends the rest of the book confined to a hospital gurney.

External Organs posted:

I remember liking those chapters, in kind of a "no matter what you do in life, it's all going to be routine and depending on logistics / organization" kind of way.

There's something to be said for it, but Battuta's point that if a story is too grounded it loses its charge is a good one. The novels never really reach for anything beyond that idea that humanity will never really change, but that is also presented without much consideration, it's just kind of accepted a priori. Despite all the internal monologuing the characters do about history or technology or human nature or politics, they never really come to any interesting conclusions. I don't really know how much of this comes down from the Corey team deliberately trying to keep the novels 'apolitical' or writing in a rush or whatever. There's a bit I just hit in the reread which I think is really indicative of how the pair don't really say anything and this really harms their characters and worldbuilding.

It's in the third novel. Clarissa has just taken part in the mutiny (in the sense she was led up to the command deck as a prized show pony.) She thinks the mutiny is stupid because Earthers, Belters, Martians, whatever, are all the same and bleed the same blood. She also notices how the ships she's been working on as a maintenance tech often use the same parts, regardless of them being Earther or Belter, which she likens to the 'same blood' thought. One of these ships is the Nauvoo/Behemoth.

We know from the second novel that Mao-Kwik, the company of Clarissa's father, was actually really heavily involved with the Protogen conspiracy. Mention is made that Mao-Kwik runs freighters on both Earth and Mars and that a lot of the material Protogen used to build its space infrastructure came from Mao-Kwik. So, the obvious connection here is that Mao-Kwik is not only profiting off the evil conspiracy but just the normal state of affairs around the Solar system. I think the TV series took this a step further and had Mao-Kwik construct the Protogen stealth ships or their fusion reactors were Mao-Kwik or something like that.

So, why not connect the two dots? Clarissa is already turning against her father and nearly crippled by guilt. Have her pop open a panel and see a Mao-Kwik component on the Nauvoo, one of humanity's greatest achievements. Have her maybe grapple with the thought that even humanity's greatest ship is marked in its own way by the atrocities her father and his corporation committed. You could even have Clarissa be like, wow, the Nauvoo has evil in its very construction just like I do. Maybe it isn't just Clarissa's evil dad but a systemic issue. Maybe the 'nothing will ever change' cynicism isn't so much human nature but a result of the system we're trapped in?

Instead, I think there's a lot of moments like this where either the Corey team simply doesn't want to be political or melodramatic and so it feels like there's all these points of interest floating around in the ether. The other thing is that they also seem to come up with a narrative spine and stick to it religiously, which is probably why they could put the books out so quickly, but this leads to a lot of moments where it feels like the characters can't work things out or have dramatic moments or take certain actions because the plot needs them to be in a certain place in a dozen chapters from now.

Milkfred E. Moore fucked around with this message at 02:41 on Mar 17, 2022

Handsome Ralph
Sep 3, 2004

Oh boy, posting!
That's where I'm a Viking!


Huxley posted:

New novella (plus the collection) is out today.

I liked it, definitely a better coda to the series than the actual coda we got (though you certainly couldn't end that book with something like this, so no complaints).

I really enjoyed it as well. Much better than I expected. I had completely forgotten about Filip and figured the authors were fine with letting his story just end at the end of Babylon's Ashes, but this was a great epilogue.

I know the authors said that this was the end of The Expanse and no more content was coming out (except for that Telltale Expanse game) but reading that makes me wish someone would make a game that is Frostpunk esque where you need to guide a colony for as long as you can after the ring network collapses.

pik_d
Feb 24, 2006

follow the white dove





TRP Post of the Month October 2021
Real sad now that the series is over. Also feels kinda weird that both the last book and last novella ended the same way. Holden and Filip both did what they saw as necessary without asking anyone else. Holden injected himself and shut down the whole slow zone without consulting anyone, and Filip killed Jandro because he saw his own father in the guy. When Filip realized he was being exiled and was talking to just Nami I half expected him to explain who he was and why it was so important to him to stop Jandro before he became Marco. Just as some kind of finally coming to terms that he is Filip, son of Marco, out loud.

I said come in!
Jun 22, 2004

I started reading the first book. I watched all of the show first, but now I am watching the show alongside reading the book so I can see the differences. There are quite a bit so far! But what I like is that while how the characters get to a certain point is different in the show, the outcomes are usually the same. The show is really good, and the first book so far has been a joy to read.

Arc Hammer
Mar 4, 2013

Got any deathsticks?
The best part about the show is that it is kind of a redux of the books in a way because the authors were involved and used the TV format to expand on certain characters who don't appear right away in the novels.

KPC_Mammon
Jan 23, 2004

Ready for the fashy circle jerk
I really love what they did with Ashford in the show. Having him and Drummer working together as a team is wonderful. I'm rewatching the show with my girlfriend (it is her first time seeing it) and his death is an episode or two away and I'm not looking forward to it.

Bilirubin
Feb 16, 2014

The sanctioned action is to CHUG


so can I assume the read order in the OP is up to date or have there been additions to it since it was first posted?

drewhead
Jun 22, 2002

It's accurate through book six. After Babylon's Ashes there is a 3rd trilogy plus a couple novellas.
From https://expanse.fandom.com/wiki/Category:The_Expanse
Strange Dogs: An Expanse Novella (July 18, 2017)
The Expanse #7: Persepolis Rising (Dec 5, 2017)
Auberon: An Expanse Novella (Nov 12, 2019)
The Expanse #8: Tiamat's Wrath (Mar 26, 2019)
The Expanse #9: Leviathan Falls (Nov 30, 2021)
The Sins of our Fathers: An Expanse Novella (Mar 15, 2022)

External Organs
Mar 3, 2006

One time i prank called a bear buildin workshop and said I wanted my mamaws ashes put in a teddy from where she loved them things so well... The woman on the phone did not skip a beat. She just said, "Brang her on down here. We've did it before."
Sorry in advance for book Elvi. She's basically exactly the same but for some reason they made her unreasonably horny for Holden.

It is as the kids say, cringe.

Bilirubin
Feb 16, 2014

The sanctioned action is to CHUG


drewhead posted:

It's accurate through book six. After Babylon's Ashes there is a 3rd trilogy plus a couple novellas.
From https://expanse.fandom.com/wiki/Category:The_Expanse
Strange Dogs: An Expanse Novella (July 18, 2017)
The Expanse #7: Persepolis Rising (Dec 5, 2017)
Auberon: An Expanse Novella (Nov 12, 2019)
The Expanse #8: Tiamat's Wrath (Mar 26, 2019)
The Expanse #9: Leviathan Falls (Nov 30, 2021)
The Sins of our Fathers: An Expanse Novella (Mar 15, 2022)

Thanks! If op could edit these into the OP it will be helpful, otherwise I could do it to ensure it remains of greatest use to new readers such as myself, who is determined to finally read the copy of Leviathan Wakes I have had on my shelf for years

Kchama
Jul 25, 2007
I've never like the Expanse's book titles. They just feel really unfitting and kinda generic.

Naramyth
Jan 22, 2009

Australia cares about cunts. Including this one.
Thanks for posting the book list. I haven’t read the final novella and that was a great reminder

I said come in!
Jun 22, 2004

The Expanse adventure game comes out in three days!

Jan
Feb 27, 2008

The disruptive powers of excessive national fecundity may have played a greater part in bursting the bonds of convention than either the power of ideas or the errors of autocracy.

KPC_Mammon posted:

I really love what they did with Ashford in the show. Having him and Drummer working together as a team is wonderful. I'm rewatching the show with my girlfriend (it is her first time seeing it) and his death is an episode or two away and I'm not looking forward to it.

Ashford was the best example of a one dimensional boring character that was actually made interesting and nuanced with the show writing. Drummer taking on Bull's role in that arc felt weird at first, but it meant more Camina Drummer and I'll never say no to that.

CLAM DOWN
Feb 13, 2007




Kchama posted:

I've never like the Expanse's book titles. They just feel really unfitting and kinda generic.

wrong, they rule

kaptainkaffeine
Apr 1, 2003

Drug Free Since: Lunch
I can never remember which book goes with which title, just zero chance

Strategic Tea
Sep 1, 2012

Dandelion Sky :cry:

Gophermaster
Mar 5, 2005

Bring the Ruckas
I'm re-reading the series and just finished Babylon's ashes again. One thing that bugged me the entire story arc about the belt war was that belters really shouldn't have been a military threat on ships unless they ambushed others. They make a big deal about how belters can't handle heavy G, and their lack of training makes them ineffective in myriad ways, but apparently they are fine to fight under the same G as trained earth or mars soldiers with the same battle effectiveness?

We know from real life that half trained militias get wiped out easily by professional soldiers in head on engagements, and the only thing that really works is insurgency, so the whole war rang hollow to me.

General Battuta
Feb 7, 2011

This is how you communicate with a fellow intelligence: you hurt it, you keep on hurting it, until you can distinguish the posts from the screams.
The idea that belters are biologically different from inners seems to have quietly vanished at some point. Naomi needs to take drugs to go to a planet and then later she doesn't.

External Organs
Mar 3, 2006

One time i prank called a bear buildin workshop and said I wanted my mamaws ashes put in a teddy from where she loved them things so well... The woman on the phone did not skip a beat. She just said, "Brang her on down here. We've did it before."
I dunno, maybe the belter juice high g combat drugs they have are super effective but nasty and have side effects.

Ravenfood
Nov 4, 2011

General Battuta posted:

The idea that belters are biologically different from inners seems to have quietly vanished at some point. Naomi needs to take drugs to go to a planet and then later she doesn't.

Yeah they definitely at least blurred the distinction as the series wore on.

Gophermaster
Mar 5, 2005

Bring the Ruckas

External Organs posted:

I dunno, maybe the belter juice high g combat drugs they have are super effective but nasty and have side effects.

I feel like that should have been mentioned at some point if the authors intended it.

Also, did they mention at all about Laconia taking families and children in the initial coup? I never noticed them say that, just that the military skedaddled, and then 30 years later they have a functional society. It would be really weird to have a society with nothing between the 30 year old and the 50 year olds.

Milkfred E. Moore
Aug 27, 2006

'It's easier to imagine the end of the world than the end of capitalism.'

Gophermaster posted:

I feel like that should have been mentioned at some point if the authors intended it.

Also, did they mention at all about Laconia taking families and children in the initial coup? I never noticed them say that, just that the military skedaddled, and then 30 years later they have a functional society. It would be really weird to have a society with nothing between the 30 year old and the 50 year olds.

It's not mentioned in Nemesis Games or Babylon's Ashes, but Persepolis Rising establishes that Singh was taken there as an adolescent. The problem is, even "almost a third" of the Martian navy retreating to Laconia isn't nearly enough to build a society of that size in thirty years, especially when only one of the ships was a capital ship. Persepolis Rising mentions that there were Earther colonists on the planet at the time of Duarte's arrival, but this only complicates things.

External Organs posted:

I dunno, maybe the belter juice high g combat drugs they have are super effective but nasty and have side effects.

Pretty sure Babylon's Ashes has the crew on second-rate combat drugs when Marco ambushes them and they're just all-round worse.

General Battuta posted:

The idea that belters are biologically different from inners seems to have quietly vanished at some point. Naomi needs to take drugs to go to a planet and then later she doesn't.

They just quietly edge it out of the worldbuilding, or forget. The first three books are pretty consistent, but Cibola Burn has the refugee ship possess enough drugs to let basically the whole complement of Belters live on Ilus, Babylon's Ashes introduces the idea of "severe" Belters (eg. Naomi, but not Marco and Filip), and by the time of the last three novels, it's like they've just forgotten all the biology stuff and Belter is just a cultural thing. It's also possible that it was a subtle retcon to fit the book Belters in with the show.

Gophermaster posted:

I'm re-reading the series and just finished Babylon's ashes again. One thing that bugged me the entire story arc about the belt war was that belters really shouldn't have been a military threat on ships unless they ambushed others. They make a big deal about how belters can't handle heavy G, and their lack of training makes them ineffective in myriad ways, but apparently they are fine to fight under the same G as trained earth or mars soldiers with the same battle effectiveness?

We know from real life that half trained militias get wiped out easily by professional soldiers in head on engagements, and the only thing that really works is insurgency, so the whole war rang hollow to me.

The Free Navy is also really quite powerful for a raiding force made up of the small ships Duarte didn't want and, presumably, a bunch of converted gunships and pirate vessels. The biggest engagements in Sol's history go down between the Free Navy, Earth, and Mars -- and the two inner powers get pretty badly mauled.

Teriyaki Hairpiece
Dec 29, 2006

I'm nae the voice o' the darkened thistle, but th' darkened thistle cannae bear the sight o' our Bonnie Prince Bernie nae mair.
They got the one lady in the first episode of the TV show who looks a little freaky and belter-ish but I just don't know how they would do that for so many characters for so many episodes without it being an animated show.

Nihonniboku
Aug 11, 2004

YOU CAN FLY!!!

Teriyaki Hairpiece posted:

They got the one lady in the first episode of the TV show who looks a little freaky and belter-ish but I just don't know how they would do that for so many characters for so many episodes without it being an animated show.

It's why I think adapting the 3rd act of Seveneves will be extremely difficult. Evidently Ron Howard is developing it with Amazon last I heard, but that update was a few years ago.

uber_stoat
Jan 21, 2001



Pillbug
they sort of blew their Belter budget in the first episode. that lady, the guy Ava tortures, a few others.

Orvin
Sep 9, 2006




Milkfred E. Moore posted:


The Free Navy is also really quite powerful for a raiding force made up of the small ships Duarte didn't want and, presumably, a bunch of converted gunships and pirate vessels. The biggest engagements in Sol's history go down between the Free Navy, Earth, and Mars -- and the two inner powers get pretty badly mauled.

It’s been a little while since I read the books, but aren’t some of the early engagements handwaved away due to the bulk of Earth and Martian Navies needing to stay close to home to intercept thrown rocks? So what little forces Earth and Mars have outside Mars orbit are much more easily overwhelmed and/or surprised.

Isn’t it a pretty big plot point that once the rocks are not a threat, the Free Navy starts a retreating action going full scorched earth to delay the various fleets as much as possible?

Arc Hammer
Mar 4, 2013

Got any deathsticks?

uber_stoat posted:

they sort of blew their Belter budget in the first episode. that lady, the guy Ava tortures, a few others.

Should have gotten Javier Botet and Doug Jones to play Belters.

Eiba
Jul 26, 2007


Orvin posted:

It’s been a little while since I read the books, but aren’t some of the early engagements handwaved away due to the bulk of Earth and Martian Navies needing to stay close to home to intercept thrown rocks? So what little forces Earth and Mars have outside Mars orbit are much more easily overwhelmed and/or surprised.

Isn’t it a pretty big plot point that once the rocks are not a threat, the Free Navy starts a retreating action going full scorched earth to delay the various fleets as much as possible?
That's my vague memory of the tactics too. The Free Navy was no match for the inner planets in an open battle, but they set things up in such a way that the full force couldn't be brought to bear.

The other biggest fleet action was the UN assault on the ring, and because the Free Navy knew exactly where those ships had to be and at what time they would be there, they were able to gently caress the UN fleet up with more stealth rocks, not an open battle.

I don't recall Belters ever coming off well in an open slugfest.

CommanderApaul
Aug 30, 2003

It's amazing their hands can support such awesome.

uber_stoat posted:

they sort of blew their Belter budget in the first episode. that lady, the guy Ava tortures, a few others.

Ty has mentioned in some of the commentary stuff with Wes and others that there isn't a huge acting pool for those roles. The production team also thought it would have been a distraction from the story itself, which is ultimately about humanity as a whole.

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Milkfred E. Moore
Aug 27, 2006

'It's easier to imagine the end of the world than the end of capitalism.'

CommanderApaul posted:

Ty has mentioned in some of the commentary stuff with Wes and others that there isn't a huge acting pool for those roles. The production team also thought it would have been a distraction from the story itself, which is ultimately about humanity as a whole.

Belters aren't part of the whole human race? Gee, Marco Inaros was right.

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