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Momonari kun
Apr 6, 2002
Yes, you needed video.
I think we need to have a thread where we post short films and tear each other down so we never post anything else ever again and this thread quickly dies. Sound like fun?

I'll start then.

Here's a short film I shot a year or so ago that I have permission to post from the director.

http://www.vimeo.com/13319272

Film starts after the color bars. It's about 37 minutes long.

The title is Chinese Winter and was shot in Seoul, Korea and is about the troubles that foreigners from different countries have when living here. We had a cast from six different countries and four different languages, so dialogue was a bit of a collaborative approach. I think the script needed a bit more tightening, but it wasn't mine to fiddle with.

I did the DPing and the editing, so any comments on those aspects would be appreciated. Being a cheap/no budget production, lights were mostly not used except in interiors, and even then, we used reflectors more often than not. It was shot on the DVX100, so it's not HD, but it looks all right, apart from the lighting issues. Editing took a long while, but I think I have it whittled down pretty well. Some bits I'd like to see reshot, but the time has come to move on.

Anyway, enough of my petty excuses for my crappy film. Post some of yours! Don't be shy!

Momonari kun fucked around with this message at 03:24 on Dec 6, 2010

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VoodooXT
Feb 24, 2006
I want Tong Po! Give me Tong Po!
Here's a teaser trailer for a fake film trailer I made last year. Film's called "Gaijin Racing Police Squad" and filmed on location in Japan. :haw:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=25NN_GcUFDk

Momonari kun
Apr 6, 2002
Yes, you needed video.
So is that it or did you make a full trailer as well? Couldn't really tell much from it. Interesting to see other expat films, though.

VoodooXT
Feb 24, 2006
I want Tong Po! Give me Tong Po!

Momonari kun posted:

So is that it or did you make a full trailer as well? Couldn't really tell much from it. Interesting to see other expat films, though.

There's a full trailer coming.

EDIT:

The full trailer is the film.

Cannister
Sep 6, 2006

Steadfast & Ignorant
After finally getting my hands on a video capable dSLR I've started putting together climbing videos. I'm dealing with the steep learning curve of Premiere and AE, as well as learning what the different frame-rates and resolutions look and feel like.

Here's my first go: http://vimeo.com/16832486 (warning - dude clips his toenails at the end for comedy - you've been warned).

and my second: http://vimeo.com/17545972

and of course now it's too cold to climb here for the season. drat you winter!!

AccountSupervisor
Aug 3, 2004

I am greatful for my loop pedal
Short film I just finished for my intro to production class at school. I directed, edited, and scored it. First time shooting on film, specifically 16mm B&W.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D9JuM-zqiB8

xzoto1
Jan 18, 2010

How's life in a bigger prison, Dae-su?
I shot this almost two years ago:

http://www.dvxfest.com/lossfest/index.php?id=2900481

It was my first short. I wrote, directed, edited, and operated the camera. So, basically everything but act in it.

York_M_Chan
Sep 11, 2003

xzoto1 posted:

I shot this almost two years ago:

http://www.dvxfest.com/lossfest/index.php?id=2900481

It was my first short. I wrote, directed, edited, and operated the camera. So, basically everything but act in it.

While not really my style of film, I thought the DP work was really good. It was pretty without looking forced.

Hello. Good Morning.
http://www.facebook.com/video/video.php?v=170835614534

This Call May Be Monitored For Quality Assurance
http://www.facebook.com/video/video.php?v=171393509534

Common Household Item (poorly transferred from 16mm)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=reEBA2JrLw8

The Haircut (Editing exercise)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WWDmfKpEyig

Something Else
Dec 27, 2004

to ride eternal, shiny and chrome

THUNDERDOME LOSER 2022
From this November's sketch show, directed and edited:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IXgqV-Z1jlI&hd=1

sw1gger
Sep 19, 2004
meowcakes
The Quest featuring Cookie Monster:
http://www.vimeo.com/8533579

I don't have friends who are interested in making movies so I use toys :(

DrLaserfalcon
Nov 7, 2010
This was made by a couple friends of mine. I enjoy any piece with a good garroting.

http://www.frequency.com/video/when-love-goes/271114?embed=true

Peacebone
Sep 6, 2007

AccountSupervisor posted:

Short film I just finished for my intro to production class at school. I directed, edited, and scored it. First time shooting on film, specifically 16mm B&W.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D9JuM-zqiB8

I really enjoyed this. It's shot very well and the concept is simple yet still intriguing/interesting.

LiquidPropaganda
Jul 14, 2007

Just a little pinprick.
Therell be no more -aaaanarchy!
But you may feel a little sick.
Here's a short 12 minute film I shot with a Bolex 16mm on color reversal film. All edits are in-camera (I just stuck together 4 rolls)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p0fsd8oXYoA

It was my second time working with 16mm and I was really pleased with how it came out!

The Affair
Jun 26, 2005

I hate snakes, Jock. I hate 'em!

While not a short film, this is the last thing I did for work before the new year:

Holiday Card

I was hired to make one of these last year, specifically so our school's President could show off.

DogWelder
Jan 15, 2001

To the beat of the wizards drum, the magic wizards drum
A Gentleman's Wager http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vO9dCPZqjNU

Made many years ago now.

AccountSupervisor
Aug 3, 2004

I am greatful for my loop pedal
Just finished up my second project for my production class. Wrote, directed, edited and did the music.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yFusFWJynUE

York_M_Chan
Sep 11, 2003

AccountSupervisor posted:

Just finished up my second project for my production class. Wrote, directed, edited and did the music.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yFusFWJynUE

I was enjoying it until I couldn't hear it anymore.

An on-board mic isn't enough. Bad sound ruins a good film. Even if you have to pay, get a good sound recorder. Also seems to be lit naturally, which works for outdoors but not indoors. You don't have to go crazy, but some fill light would help. Careful with the "shaky camera" and zooms - there is a fine line between a natural feel and pulling us out of the film.

AccountSupervisor
Aug 3, 2004

I am greatful for my loop pedal

York_M_Chan posted:

I was enjoying it until I couldn't hear it anymore.

An on-board mic isn't enough. Bad sound ruins a good film. Even if you have to pay, get a good sound recorder. Also seems to be lit naturally, which works for outdoors but not indoors. You don't have to go crazy, but some fill light would help. Careful with the "shaky camera" and zooms - there is a fine line between a natural feel and pulling us out of the film.

We had a shotgun, but my sound guy is pretty new and made some mistakes.

As for the lights, I know. It all came down to the fact I literally could not transport the Arri light kit I had checked out because people are loving unreliable and I was the only one transporting equipment and couldnt get help. Sucks, and it doesnt really matter because whats on screen is whats on screen but it was either sound or lights and I felt sound was more important.

And I agree with the shakey cam. It was my first time going for that style and it was all improvised. I definitely went too far with it at points.

Thank you for the constructive criticism.

Jalumibnkrayal
Apr 16, 2008

Ramrod XTreme

AccountSupervisor posted:

Just finished up my second project for my production class. Wrote, directed, edited and did the music.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yFusFWJynUE

Camera work:

At around 1:20 you break the 180 degree rule.

I don't like zooming while shooting, and when you're doing it handheld it just makes you seem like you were too lazy to swap lenses or do a new setup. Sorry. :/

At around 7:00 you kind of break the 180 degree rule again. The camera completes the movement in one shot, but I think the move itself was unnecessary.

At 9:25, when the climax happens, your key actor is unlit and not in focus.

Sound: I thought your music was fantastic, and really helped set the mood. I think it kicked in too early at the end. Is there any reason you didn't bump the dialogue volume in post?

Story:

I wasn't a fan. From 00:00 - 00:40 we watch snow go by. From 2:50 - 4:25 we watch a guy walk around a house. That's almost two minutes of no dialogue and arguably no action.

The script could have been way tighter. You could have gotten this down to five minutes and still conveyed the same information and sentiment.

AccountSupervisor
Aug 3, 2004

I am greatful for my loop pedal

Jalumibnkrayal posted:

Camera work:

At around 1:20 you break the 180 degree rule.

I don't like zooming while shooting, and when you're doing it handheld it just makes you seem like you were too lazy to swap lenses or do a new setup. Sorry. :/


My question about the zooming while shooting. That aesthetic is supposed to be a bit documentaryish, naturally reacting to the action happening on screen. I understand that its a matter of taste and that I did over do it, but Im curious if youve seen stuff like Friday Night Lights(tv show) or anything by Peter Berg really and if you dont like it there as well. Plus we shot on a DVX and didnt have access to other lenses, because we are dumb freshmen.

And thanks for the other notes as well.

PS1 Hagrid
Sep 17, 2007

I made two hilariously bad westerns with a friend a few years ago. This was during a time when the most I knew about filmmaking was "red button turns the camera on." I sort of regret ever putting these on the internet but the shame keeps reminding me to strive for better.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4PvtXCQacs8

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ljBKn-foYok

Now that I've gone to school and actually know about film stuff I guess I could remake these. Too bad the bicycle was stolen.

Jalumibnkrayal
Apr 16, 2008

Ramrod XTreme

AccountSupervisor posted:

My question about the zooming while shooting. That aesthetic is supposed to be a bit documentaryish, naturally reacting to the action happening on screen. I understand that its a matter of taste and that I did over do it, but Im curious if youve seen stuff like Friday Night Lights(tv show) or anything by Peter Berg really and if you dont like it there as well. Plus we shot on a DVX and didnt have access to other lenses, because we are dumb freshmen.

And thanks for the other notes as well.

I'm not familiar with Peter Berg and I haven't seen anything he's done. The only time I notice zooms while shooting is on comedies like The Office where they whip zoom into a face for a comedic reaction shot. When you've got two characters in a scene and one moves out of frame, zooming out to keep them both in frame just makes it look like a home video. At around 1:40 you have the camera in closeup on the father, then you zoom back to kind of get him and the son who is in the car.

And just to go a bit further, your music is very melancholy but also dreamy and floaty. I think the handheld shakicam works against that.

schmuckfeatures
Oct 27, 2003
Hair Elf
Here's a little animated short I made back in late 2005. I posted it in GBS at the time, and got a pretty good response.

If you like trombones, sandwiches and horrific car crashes rendered in very low-tech CG, this might just be the movie for you!

Gentlemen, I present HAM SANDWICH.

Dauher
Jul 22, 2007
The man from not near.
Alright, I'll play your game you rogues.

First up is my entry into my local 48 Hour Film festival. We won best film and the audience choice award, no big deal. Sound is poo poo and I'd do a lot different now but it is what it is and I don't hate it. Directed/shot and edited by me.

It is about Risk and war.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hr0d95nlc8c

Second is a short that I wrote for two friends to use as a scene in their acting class. My friend across the country decided to film it and then mailed me the footage and I edited it. Sound is again poo poo on this one.

It's about nearly dying on purpose and is called A Splendid Idea.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=03ObuJnv5N0

Goose42
Dec 30, 2002
I posted this in another thread but it probably wasn't the best place for it so I'll post it here too!

This is a fake movie trailer we did, as an homage to 70s cinema...

http://funnyordie.com/m/56aa

JeffCentaur
Jul 18, 2003

by Y Kant Ozma Post
A couple years ago I created a trilogy of short films based around a D&Dish premise.

Unnatural 20: The Ballad of Steve
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rRK8pUsL8lY

Unnatural 20: Steve Meets The Dragon Lady
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=69fcJWjj2C4

Unnatural 20: Too Much Of An Awesome Thing
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T5erICPY6q4

Last year I actually made a feature length film based in the same universe.
Here's the trailer:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d4u0ZrTCq_s

I'm not sure if I should keep making films in the series or move on to different projects, what do you guys think?

VoodooXT
Feb 24, 2006
I want Tong Po! Give me Tong Po!
Finally finished that fake trailer I was working on.

外人レーシング警官隊 GAIJIN RACING POLICE SQUAD
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JjS80g30n4Y

King Lou
Jun 3, 2004
They say the fittest shall survive, yet the unfit may live

I've posted these in the GBS YouTube threads over the years but I thought I'd share them with the CC community.

Films I made for channel 102
Friday the Thirteen Incher
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DZOmKQX6NUo

Fugitive Chef
Episode #1 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qpf_GywH430

Episode #2 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cx_gFYKhHrk

Not my movie but I love this scene I was in. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9J3wXxrK_dQ :nws: So uncomfortable!

Way older crazy projects. They have their moments but generally they are just weird...

Jizzrag - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NYTL91bSz-s

Classroom of Despair - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OywBsCHvmcs

The Gift http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ddjUXiMjqng

Magic Hate Ball
May 6, 2007

ha ha ha!
you've already paid for this
Here is a fabulously mostly-finished (editing-wise) short film I wrote and co-directed just a couple weeks ago:

Inappropriate Mastication
5:34, shot on a Canon T2i

It's still in a sort of semi-rough state for no real good reason other than our editor doesn't think it needs any more work (ah, assigned groups). I'm kind of proud of the dolly shots, I spent a good deal of time and money building it.

Jalumibnkrayal
Apr 16, 2008

Ramrod XTreme

Magic Hate Ball posted:

Here is a fabulously mostly-finished (editing-wise) short film I wrote and co-directed just a couple weeks ago:

Inappropriate Mastication
5:34, shot on a Canon T2i

It's still in a sort of semi-rough state for no real good reason other than our editor doesn't think it needs any more work (ah, assigned groups). I'm kind of proud of the dolly shots, I spent a good deal of time and money building it.

T2i filmmaking crew whadup.

That was fantastic.

I think you could have done the entire thing with no dialogue, if you just changed the ending a little bit. It looked like you had some exposure issues in the first shot of the school building, along with the oh so fun moire we get when we film large brick walls.

How long did it take you to shoot the poolside scenes? It pretty noticeably went from day to night between shots.

What was your audio setup?

Magic Hate Ball
May 6, 2007

ha ha ha!
you've already paid for this
Yeah, I kinda wish we had done no dialogue whatsoever. The poolside stuff took almost an hour and a half because our lead (Pete) was plastered, and so we caught the sun going down. I can't believe how well it picked up the lights at night, though, all that's from the in-pool bulbs and the neighboring tennis court. The audio setup was a boom mike from the school, I'm actually not sure what the make was. And yeah, lots of exposure issues, mostly when we tried to use a zoom lens in the library.

HopWallace
Sep 8, 2004

free balloon day
This is a short film I made last spring as part 7 in a collection of short zombie films. I know some of the color is still a little inconsistent and the sound mix could be tighter, but I'm pretty pleased with how it turned out, especially seeing as how we shot the entire thing in one day.

7. Extermination
Password: filmpreview7

York_M_Chan
Sep 11, 2003

Magic Hate Ball posted:

Here is a fabulously mostly-finished (editing-wise) short film I wrote and co-directed just a couple weeks ago:

Inappropriate Mastication
5:34, shot on a Canon T2i

It's still in a sort of semi-rough state for no real good reason other than our editor doesn't think it needs any more work (ah, assigned groups). I'm kind of proud of the dolly shots, I spent a good deal of time and money building it.

Your first minute is a man walking. You lost me. Cut it- No reason for it. Perhaps it's because I think title sequences in short films are unnecessary. Library... guy with backpack... assignment: we know it's school. Just open on the action. Tighten it up, which I assume you plan on doing since you said it was almost finished. Other than that I liked it.

Magic Hate Ball posted:

...because our lead (Pete) was plastered...

Gotta get real actors. I just assumed he wasn't by this.

York_M_Chan fucked around with this message at 17:09 on Mar 21, 2011

Manwithastick
Jul 26, 2010

Yesterday I stood in front 30 of my peers and made my final presentation for my Teaching Training. The topic - What happens when you put ice in a microwave? A question that came up a few weeks ago when one of my classmates was dicussing materials that change when we heat them up.

We were told as a final task for science would be to make a science video that answers this question. The rules were simple, make it engaging and simple.

This wasnt marked, it wasnt even considered evidence for any standards so I thought " hey lets go nuts with it", chuck in a keyboard cat, have a better barritone than my croaky british voice which I had just lost. It was going to be our last session so why not do something memorible.

I enlisted the help of Stinkmeister (who like a twinkie, I forgot to credit in the video but who has since become a campus urban legend as everybody wants to know who he is) to do some great voice overs highlighting the awesomeness of ice.

The presentation went down a storm, we had cheers and merriment a plenty. The science department want it on DVD for next years students and I just got ordered to put it on Ytube for my head of programme to see. Needless to say it was the perfect end to the course.

I thought I would share this creative creation with you all, hope you enjoy it
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=utWwSVonyYY

PS thanks again to Stinkmeister, he is awesome.

Manwithastick fucked around with this message at 18:57 on Mar 24, 2011

AccountSupervisor
Aug 3, 2004

I am greatful for my loop pedal
This is my final short film for my 1st year production class. You guys in this thread have pretty much been tracking my progress throughout the year, as Ive posted all of the films Ive made in the class.

Anyways, here it is. I directed, shot, wrote, edited and scored the film.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pl9mmZasSsE

Shot on a 7D with some Carl Zeiss primes and some Canon EF zooms.

Oh and if for some reason you prefer vimeo its up there as well http://vimeo.com/23251422
The sound is a tiny bit off for some reason, so youll probably want to watch the youtube upload.

AccountSupervisor fucked around with this message at 01:15 on May 5, 2011

FamousThomas
Jul 16, 2006

Hey, Fry. Wake up, it's me, BIGFACE!
I made this little music video:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lFXnE0hdI28

It's my first and to date only attempt at film making. I hope to do something else soon. I learned a lot from the mistakes of this one.

TheYellowFog
Oct 17, 2008

grain alcohol and rainwater

AccountSupervisor posted:

Anyways, here it is. I directed, shot, wrote, edited and scored the film.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pl9mmZasSsE
This is way better than most first year short films and is really encouraging. The lead actor guy didn't stutter his lines awkwardly like most first year actors do.

It's a little shaky-camish at places and the sound was quiet in some spots but that is probably due to equipment. Did you record in-camera sound or external?

The "just listen" at the end seemed a little out of place, it would have been better if he said something afterwards but I get you were going for an abrupt type of ending. Overall good job.

DookJones
Jul 3, 2007

On this golden day, work's been sent our way.
Here's an "experimental" film of sorts that some friends of mine and I made. We tried to make it look as it's all one continuous shot, and I think it worked out :) PLUS, A CAT GETS PUNCHED IN THE FACE.

http://vimeo.com/20688855

Any criticism is welcome :D

DookJones
Jul 3, 2007

On this golden day, work's been sent our way.

VoodooXT posted:

Finally finished that fake trailer I was working on.

外人レーシング警官隊 GAIJIN RACING POLICE SQUAD
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JjS80g30n4Y

I enjoyed this because I know for a fact that you guys cracked up most of the time and had a blast. I'd watch the entire film, but only if you keep the same punching sound fx.

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AccountSupervisor
Aug 3, 2004

I am greatful for my loop pedal

TheYellowFog posted:

This is way better than most first year short films and is really encouraging. The lead actor guy didn't stutter his lines awkwardly like most first year actors do.

It's a little shaky-camish at places and the sound was quiet in some spots but that is probably due to equipment. Did you record in-camera sound or external?

The "just listen" at the end seemed a little out of place, it would have been better if he said something afterwards but I get you were going for an abrupt type of ending. Overall good job.

Shakey cam was a stylistic and logistical thing. Nyc is strict about using tripods without a permit so we had to do handheld. It does get bad in a couple shots due to the homemade shoulder rig we had and the positions I was in. other than that it was to create a voyeuristic aesthetic.

Are you watching with laptop speakers? Its quiet with those but I actually got a lot of compliments on the sound in class. We had nice equipment and my guys did a great job I thought. Ill check out the mix but I leveled it properly I thought.

Anyways, thanks for the critique, Im glad you enjoyed it.

AccountSupervisor fucked around with this message at 03:10 on May 6, 2011

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