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keyvin posted:
I don't know if you're looking for lyrical advice, but you could try approaching your central idea from another direction. Instead of listing all the reasons you love her when you're blue (she brightens your days etc), list the reasons your life would seem to suck but actually doesn't, because of your lady. So you could have your verses saying poo poo like "My coffee is bitter / my shoes lost their shine" blah blah and then you get to the twist and you're like "but babe it don't matter / BECAUSE YOU'RE MINE!!!" and then there's a sax solo, that kind of thing. BTW, dunno what your title is, but "Even When I'm Blue" is nice and intriguing.
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baka kaba posted:Coffee's meant to be bitter, you're sending mixed messages here popcorn! Oh yeah. How about "pumpkin spice latte"?
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