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Secret griffin sex cult (Advice taken and removed text in case this slips into archives. Thanks all!) Mr. Creakle fucked around with this message at 00:48 on Jun 6, 2015 |
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Dr. Kloctopussy posted:WHY ISN'T THE STORY ABOUT THIS? at least one of your group better be an accidental imprint. I should totally do that  Super late reply but thanks for the advice, everyone. Editing out the OP in case this thread slips into the archives, but I'm taking all advice to heart and am going to try and rewrite the scene with the writing less beep-boop about facts and more emotional. It's tough balancing exposition vomit and emotion, especially in a scene that's supposed to evoke powerful feelings like this one. Also the gryphon did have a coat of fur, it was just very thin and weird looking like one of those "hairless" breeds that sort of still has a coat of fur, but you can make out the gross skin underneath. I could describe it cuter though, like a newborn kitten.
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