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Endorph
Jul 22, 2009

Name: Realga
Class: Medic
Portrait: 2

An adventurer-based economy naturally creates a demand for doctors and healers - that's why a fresh out of medical school girl like Realga was running a clinic literally the moment she walked out the door.

Incidentally, medical school in High Lagaard is mostly a list of where deer can gore you.

Unfortunately, demand creates bloat, and a little clinic literally stuck in a long-forgotten corner of the city wasn't likely to drum up business, especially not from adventurers in search of convenience. So came Realga's next financial move -

She'd heal on the frontlines! What could be more convenient than that? Besides, it clearly didn't take a PHD to be an adventurer. Frankly, she isn't sure most of them know how to count. And the treasure! As a party member, she'd get a cut, right?

That's Realga - a healer more interested in bilking adventurers than helping, and who mostly chose the career for financial reasons. Beneath her cute exterior lies a greedy, self-interested girl. But she isn't heartless! She'll do everything she can to keep her companions alive.

There'll just be a big bill at the end, yeah? Nobody ever gives the healer the respect they deserve, so it's only fair.

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Endorph
Jul 22, 2009

all of the dialogue was cute, but i might be biased because my character got like 70% of it

Endorph
Jul 22, 2009

theshim posted:

Minorest of quibbles, but I thought Tramonte was a dude?

Also FOEbucks is too appropriate.
Near as I can tell, their gender isn't explicitly stated, they just have a lady they like.

You homophobe. :colbert:

Endorph
Jul 22, 2009

Nadia, Phoebe, Jackie

Endorph
Jul 22, 2009

Realga, Stardust, Tyler

Endorph
Jul 22, 2009

Colette, Milly, Asriel

Endorph
Jul 22, 2009

Sophie, Realga, Asriel

Endorph
Jul 22, 2009

thats the power of music

Endorph
Jul 22, 2009

i mean i don't know about errors but the translation of the dialogue seems pretty smooth? i wouldn't really call them awful translations

Endorph
Jul 22, 2009

Realga, Freyja, Ursa, Stardust

Endorph
Jul 22, 2009

yeah, I was about to say, I remembered my Ronin being flimsy but not that flimsy.

Endorph
Jul 22, 2009

Realga, Stardust, Rheine, Ranger

Endorph
Jul 22, 2009

the narrative's funny without really getting in the way or feeling too fanficcy or anything, some of the characters feel a little eh but that's just because they got voted in like once, there's nothing specifically wrong with them, I did not mention anything about Realga liking kindred spirits on the roof but my avatar shows my approval

Endorph
Jul 22, 2009

good lp, 5/5

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Endorph
Jul 22, 2009

Great let's play, and I loved how you made use of all the submitted characters (Not just mine! Honest!)

Really excited for the next one.

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