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The word you're looking for there is "shudder". Otherwise it paints an overly dramatic (with somewhat underwhelming imagery) cliche. Your transition between the fourth and fifth tercets is hard to parse, possibly due to repetition of "... In the ... In the...".
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# ¿ Feb 28, 2017 01:11 |
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