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Mar 14, 2016 22:51
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The number one rule of grave poetry is that the only word you can use is "grave". It is also rules 2-10. Although I really like your poem, it could be a nice subversion of the strict and conservative boundaries most grave poetry adheres to.
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Mar 19, 2016 20:40
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Entenzahn posted:Posting in the Poetry Thread This poem feels a bit dry. Almost like it's some sort of list.. However I really like how brief and to the point it is, there is no fat just muscle. I also really like the bittersweet ending.
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Apr 2, 2016 04:07
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Catfishenfuego posted:I've been needling away at this poem recently, it feels like it's missing something, another verse maybe, and perhaps there's other stuff I've missed:
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Apr 24, 2016 22:47
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