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CestMoi
Sep 16, 2011

Zesty Mordant posted:

In the last version of this thread someone demonstrated a weird poetry form, it was pretty short and extremely restrictive, I can't for the life of me remember what it was and none of the forms on regular lists seem familiar. What was it??

Was it double dactyls https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Double_dactyl?? Cos I posted about them in the last thread + they're great. eg

Higgledy piggledy,
Benjamin Harrison,
Twenty-third president
Was, and, as such,

Served between Clevelands and
Save for this trivial
Idiosyncrasy,
Didn't do much.


I write them a lot if I can think of a double dactylic word, here's one of mine
Battery Flattery
Trial of the century
This man’s been found making
Youth’s brains enlarged

He offers no defence
And so our judge declares
Apologetically
“Guilty as charged!”

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CestMoi
Sep 16, 2011

Np, once you get a feel for the rhythm of them they're really easy. The most difficult parts are finding double dactylic words for the second last line and finding first lines that are nonsense while still sounding cool. Good luck and post them in this thread imo

Tristran and I sold her
Forcing out poems to
Expel this uselessness
Here’s what I tried-

Reading the masters to
Gain inspiration which
Counterproductively
Stymied the tide

CestMoi fucked around with this message at 23:27 on Apr 10, 2016

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