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asterios your articles read like they are written by the dog from family guy. like all your 'characters' are thinly veiled satires which you drop during some sentences and go straight to expressing your 100% mild polictical views. your paperboy article was pretty funny, had a good hook, and you kept in character enough to keep the piece going. but alot of them like the brock sampson one or the bear university one either suffer from unfunny sentences, no frame of view or both.
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